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The Night Has Been Unkind – Short Story
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Beautiful song (source of bold lyrics throughout the story):
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i8B1ai25lUo
I will be the answer
At the end of the light.
So sweet she was, in the light bathing her slender body. Such soft blond hair falling over athletic shoulders, a woman dancing all alone. Darkness seemed to surround her, but couldn’t reach her. She tilted her head back, eyes closed, and she could hear nothing. So beautiful.
She danced in isolation, her soft blond hair catching and absorbing enthusiastic light. Bette watched, eager to join. Very slowly she approached with an eager smile, blinking her eyes in what seemed like slow motion. She smiled heartily, recognizing the goddess as her beautiful Tina. She reached out, her touch sending electric waves over the illuminating light surrounding them. "I could love you," Bette said in slow motion, ‘love you’ resounding in the endless galaxy of darkness that seemed to accompany them. Two souls that had met and bound as one.
Tina just smiled back, her eyes still closed. She seemed to be in some sort of ecstasy. "You do," her voice echoing back.
A tender instrumental soothed her ears, every movement in slow motion. She watched Tina dance gently on her own, and smiled widely at the graceful show, when suddenly an angry tone pierced her ears.
"I know," echoed throughout the darkness, and it was Tina’s voice. Bette turned, and there was a dark figure in the shadows. She closed her eyes now, images becoming fuzzy. She knew the figure: the woman who had ruined everything. She knew this dream: a nightmare. Suddenly everything was slipping away too quickly.
In slow motion, she turned and tried running over to Tina, but just as she tried, she watched the blond collapse, her glow fading.
"No!" Bette screamed, the echo nearly deafening her. She struggled with everything she had to make it over to Tina. If she could just make it over to Tina and tell her it was all a mistake. She was pulled down with force, everything working against her. As she reached out for the small hand in front of her, she spoke to Tina. "… Let me fix it."
Tina’s eyes turned cold and her hand pulled away. "No."
The small conversation they had had when Tina came to pick up her things. It constantly echoed in her dreams, a terrible memory for the brunette.
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Beautiful! If only the show had done this storyline….Thank you for sharing!
That hurt. Good job.
You are so very talented and adept at capturing deep emotions. Thank you
Wow!
Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for this story and please give yourself many many pats :) Wonderful.
So beautiful I had to go back and read it again. Have you seen this Grind: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bJyPEiR1RTc. It’s a Tibette tribute video made by a good friend of mine with this very same song! Thank you for this, just gorgeous.
I love the way you wrote this. You can really feel their pain. I’m so glad your brought them back together in the end…so sweet.
I swear I’m crying like Bette was while writing this. GOD. You are sooo amazing. You can write such insanely mercurial fics and yet at times you just sweep us away by such intense emotional fics like this. I’m utterly blown away by all the raw emotion shown in this one and you’re right, the song was brilliant and so apt. Are you planning to continue this one? Cos’ I think it can go further, if not, just continue doing what you’re doing. It’s a winning formula! =)) Thanks for this GrindRight, (although I’ll probably have to explain to my mom why I’m bawling my eyes out), PPVS! =))
wonderful !!
respect.
this is so sad but beautiful, bettes love for tine is so deep and tina..she cant help herself.plssssssssssss give us a little moreim crying and i dont know why…gosh if my gf will ever leave me i will be just like bette..
Wow Grind – that was beautiful, heartbreaking, sad, and yet hopeful… But there is so much more to this – I do hope you are planning sequels – i see a lot more push & pull in their future in your scenario – all beautifully written by yourself & leaving us readers in a whirlpool of emmotion. I feel like i’ve just been put through a cycle in the washing machine! PPVS 5*
…wow!
You, my friend are an excellent writer. This was just beautiful.
This was absolutely heartwrenching. So sad, so full of emotion, yet so beautiful in the way that Tina knew it was Bette at the door without seeing her. So glad she asked her to come up and took her in to bed. They both needed the closeness and to feel their love. I agree wholeheartedly with Tigger. And yes, I’m crying too. Thanks.
Your are a totally amazing writer, the song fits so well with this chapter. Thank you!
Just awesome. Thank you.
Thts so good!
You have a wonderful writing talent. You can go from passionate, raw and detailed sexual stories that also take great ability to gut wrenching, vulnerable, raw, open, honest emotional stories w/o the story appearing too maudlin. Just amazing.
Oh my…this is some gorgeous writing. I am ever so grateful to have the opportunity to read your writing…such talent…such beauty. I’m still taking it all in…thank you for this experience.