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The Promise – Short Story
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cQ0kh3k0LKE
If you wait for me, then I’ll come for you,
Although I’ve travelled far, I always hold
A place for you in my heart …
Bette awoke with a smile, recognizing Tina’s scent immediately. Then with an even bigger smile, she nudged her nose into Tina’s neck, her eyes taking in the delicious sight down into the cleavage before her. She closed her eyes again, inhaling deeply and pulling Tina closer. She could hardly believe last night was real, and that she was laying with her beautiful ex, but here she was, waking up next to her. It was like all those mornings they had shared together.
"I know you’re awake."
Bette could hear the smile in Tina’s voice, and it made her smile. "You always could tell."
Tina smoothed her hand over Bette’s hair, trying to figure out what had happened between them, and what they would say next. Just as she searched the wall for answers, she heard Bette again.
"T …" Bette started, opening her eyes to more soft flesh. It was getting difficult to concentrate. "… I need to say a few things …"
Tina listened closely, making a decision aloud. "I think we should sit up for this." She could find herself reacting to Bette’s breath on her chest.
"Yeah," Bette agreed, shifting around and sitting up in the bed, looking into Tina’s eyes. ‘Maybe this wasn’t such a good idea,’ she thought, Tina’s eyes piercing right into her. She was such a sensual woman. She couldn’t help but think back to other moments Tina had drawn her in just as easily, and without effort.
***
"So … how have you been?" Bette asked quietly, approaching Tina who sat at The Planet alone, drinking her morning coffee.
"Bette-"
"I won’t even sit down, okay?" Bette assured her, having been drawn to the woman with an indescribable force. It was something they had never lost. "I miss you, you know?"
Tina dropped her head in her hand, shaking it all the while.
"I can’t just ignore you," Bette said quietly, taking a sip of her own coffee and looking around for anyone they knew. All of their friends were very protective of Tina in her weakened state. Bette looked down to her, realizing just how weak she looked. She wanted to hold Tina, to tell her she was sorry, and she wanted to be the one to comfort her, but she couldn’t. And that broke her heart. "What do you want? … What do you really want, Tina?"
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(67 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
That song is very bitter sweet for me, now you have me crying
I love your writing,another great chapter.
THANK YOU FOR THIS, YOU HAVE NO IDEAAAAAAAAAA.YOUR JUST AMAZING!!!!!!!!!
Beautiful! Thanks for sharing!
This was a great chapter that filled in some of the story very well. I like the way you moved them forward in a real way. Thank you for posting!
Lovely – now i feel fluffed like warm soft towels fresh from the dryer!Next chapter….PPVS
Thanks for this story. It’s so refreshing to see these two communicating with each other in a loving and caring way.
Really really great story. Love the gentleness and hope. Thank you.
clap clap clap! Great story, GrindRight.
Weee! This was delicious. Loved it a lot! Would have loved to have seen this on the show. More please! Thanks Grindright :)
Hi GR, That was extraordinary.I love how Bette and Tina talked things through before they make hot sexy love.The transferring between scenes brought up so some delicious and dramatic images.Bette and Tina needed this to happen before they could start on the long road to rebuild their relationship.Bette had to take ownership of her affair and prove to Tina that Tina is the only one who holds her heart.Tina had to hear this.Just perfect.More wonderful writing from a favorite author.Thank you so much for sharing.Your Loyal Fan.
Something is always missing from the beginning of your stories…that precisiouse little pen dripping that disgusting pink juice…:D
Excellent story. Thank you. Was just beautiful.
Letting you know what I think……this was beautiful. Thank you!
Bravo!!! it’s beautiful. Thanks for the story, you are an amazing writer. :)