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    Rock,Hard Places and Rehab Chapter II.V and Chapter III

     

    Chapter II.V

     

               It was closing time for the club and the girls were getting ready to leave. Carmen text Sloan but never got an answer.

    Bette: Carmen are you okay to drive? Because I can drive you home.

    Carmen: I was looking for Sloan but I think she left already.

    Alice: I can take her home, Carmen where do you live by the way.

    Carmen: I live out towards the beach

    Alice: wow, by the beach.

     

             Tasha spotted at the valet " there is Sloan"

    Carmen: where?

    Alice: I think she is with someone

    Carmen: (feeling woozy) can’t be her car is a two seated

    Alice: well we will take you home anyway?

     

     

           Sloan actually got into her car by herself and headed home.

    Carmen and Alice drove home and arrived first.

    Alice: we are having an anniversary party for Bette and Tina. I think you and Sloan should come

    Carmen: when is it?

    Alice: first weekend of august, it’s their twelve year

    Carmen: wow, twelve years together. One day I want to be like them

    Alice: tell me about it

     

     

        Alice pulled up to Carmen’s house

     

    Alice: wow, nice place

    Carmen: its home. actually this is Sloan’s house

    Alice: okay, well I will call you tomorrow. Are you still coming to the planet?

    Carmen: (tipsy) yea, I have to see Helena

     

           Just then Sloan pulled up to the house

    Carmen: well there goes Sloan… (Drunken wave) Hi! Honey

    Sloan: Wow, you’re so drunk (grinning) see  you having a good time

    "I know". holding her finger in front of her mouth. I did have a wonderfuld time with my friends.

    " Alice, Tasha. Thanks for bringing her home"

    Carmen: (puts her arm around Sloan’s waist) you left me

    Sloan: (kissing her on the temple) my bad I thought you had your car and I saw you talking to your friends

    Alice: well, goodnight roomies

    Sloan: come on Carmen let’s get inside. You smell like alcohol

    Carmen: I didn’t drink that much. I can still walk

    Sloan: is that why you are walking on the grass, not on the pavement.

    Carmen: you know sometimes I hate you. You always have to be a smartass

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    Comments

    1. I can totally picture Jenny reacting that way to Carmen being at the Planet – whiny and annoying. So is Carmen trying to make Sloan jealous by having Shane call her? What’s going on in Carmen’s head? (I noticed she’s scratching her lip) Hmm.

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