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Reunions Reunite: The way we were, chapter 2
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I turned and sat, hugging my knees, not bothering about the sand that was stuck the the fabric of my jeans. Protecting myself as a hedgehog, rolling up as a little ball. My forehead rested on the top of my knees as I let the surrounding sounds overwhelm me, calm me, and after a moment, my breathing and the pounding of my heart had followed the rhythm of the shattering water.
I knew every echo, every grain of sand that was there. It was more like home than the house I lived in, for here I was… Safer… Safe from his hands and unexpected actions.
The images flashed up in my mind, and as much as I tried to push them away I couldn’t… That afternoon, now almost half a year ago, when he had come into my room…
My chest cramped in a spastic motion of my heart and loungs…
His intention so obvious, as he sat at the side of the bed, stroking my hair. I could still feel the fear, the tension that got a hold of my body, as he turned me around. I pretended to be asleep, thinking that was the best way, but with my eyes shut, the surprise of what came was even harsher, and as his lips had covered mine, they has shot open. I can still hear his voice resound in my head:
You can’t fool me, younglady…
The sour smell and taste of whisky, as I unsuccesfully opened my mouth to utter words of protest, only granting him the acces he wanted…
I will show you what it is to be loved, sweetheart. A real man instead of that poor excuse for a quarterback you’re so fond of…
I had only just started going out with Eric back then, a fact my father clearly didn’t approve of… His tongue explored my oral cavity, and my attempts to push him away only had resulted in his hands grabbing my wrists…
I recall struggling, almost choking… I remember his tongue, deep in my throat, causing me to gag… I know I had this feeling of exiting my body, the strange sensation that I could see him laying on top of me, my eyes closed, my muscles tensed, my stomach wrenching…
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OK, a sorta silent reader creeping out to say well done mate!! Loved it and can’t wait for more. I thought you had forgotten about this story. PPS
WOW, I am speechless! Please continue!
Your back ground on Tina was so sad. Abuse young life. a two-timing husband.yet a bright light Her Bette. Well done my young friend. Loved it thanks
Your back ground on Tina was so sad. Abuse young life. a two-timing husband.yet a bright light Her Bette. Well done my young friend. Loved it thanks
It took me forever to get through the chapter. 1.) It was tough. Nothing light and fluffy about it. A great chapter as always, but still tough and 2.) I got held up chatting with someone. LMAO Two shitty men in Tina’s life. =( PPS!
Very intense. Quite the connection between B&T as always. Waiting for the next post.
Wow…the chapter certainly was a hard one to read due to it’s nature. However, it was perfectly written and well done!! Again…got me hooked! Have a good one!
this was heavy…but a wonderful connection between B&T…i hope they can heal each other from whatever happened in those 13 years
Excellent writing as usual. Very descriptive and VERY moving. It can take alot out of a writer when delving into areas of life that are so dark and deep. Thank you for sharing your talent and for putting as much time in as you do to prepare a fabulous piece of work. BRAVO! Oh yeah, and MORE!!!! :-)))
whoa!!!!!!!!!!! great work
The hurt that Tina felt due to her father must have been unbearable. To watch her mother go through what she did and know that there was really nothing that she could do to help her mother must have been very painful. Then to have the one person that could take that pain away even if it was for a few seconds to be there to catch you helps to make one continue to move forward in the walk of life. Both are sorry about something and I wonder if they can put that aside and rebuild their friendship. Of course their relationship is more than just friendship.
Damn this is so good. Sad for Tina, is hurt to see that happen to Tina, is good that Bette was there to comforting her.Don’t know what happen that they are not see or be with each other but hope now its time for B&T have a start and a happy life together. Ok post soon please, thanks!
wow… just wow… ;)
Oh, I love this…pls don’t stop there!!!
You did such an amazing job of balancing the really hard to read with the absolutely breathtakingly wonderful bits. The connection between the two of them is amazing, and I LOVE how you’re setting this up. Fantastic, as always!
WOW!!!! Thanks PPS
hello my friend! (blushing!) like i told you before it was a wondeful week! thanks so much for everything! the worst part was said goodbye i never think that it was so hard! this chapter was great, with a lot of emotions, Tina have been living through a lot of hards things but it so good that Bette was with her comforting her, the connection between them it’s so magical don’t you think? now i am courious why Bette is sorry? wonderful chapter i hope that you feel better for the next one. i enjoy so much this and i am missing you so much
Excellent chapter per usual hun!! I guess thats what i love about your writing, no matter what the content, sad or happy the emotion is so very strong.. Can’t wait for more (per usual) :)
what? what? Huh? What are they sorry for? Have I missed out some chapters? haha… Oh JLBT… this is so intense. STOP DOMESTIC VIOLENCE!! I wish to be there for Tina too when that horrible thing happened. So that Tina wouldn’t be living in guilt and blame herself over her father’s faults. Anyway, I love this chapter and will forever amazed by your writing :D
Everytime I think you could not blow me away even more, you do to a degree that I could have never imagined… OMG J, that was… well, there you go, I can’t even find the words… I don’t know how you manage, but this is just … so… intense! The drama that draw them together, making the connection that more precious and peculiar… Wow! I wish I could say more, but seriously I don’t think I would do justice to my real feelings after reading this… Thanks PIC!