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Out of Closet (B&T time-travel romance), Ch. 17
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With time progressing fast, Alice found herself more at ease with Elizabeth who turned out to be caring, fun loving, genuinely kind and an insanely honest person. The two of them spent a lot of time together and quickly became more than just the lady of the house and her trusted maid. They became friends.
Place: Porter mansion – Bette’s bedroom
Year: 2005
Alice stopped her reminiscence of the first couple of weeks in 1885 and looked at Tina, “Do you have any questions so far?”
“Just one for now,” Tina said after getting her thoughts together. “What was your first impression…I mean, how are things different there in terms of spending time?”
“For me personally there was not much difference. I got to hang out with friends every day, be my charming, hilariously witty, and gorgeous-self. The only weird thing about being there was that I really had to work every day this time.”
Place: Porter mansion
Year: 1885
Alice soon became Elizabeth’s confidant when she confessed her feelings towards her painting teacher, Eric Fischer. At first, Alice was hesitant to even listen about Elizabeth’s feelings, let alone give her any advice. But she was also very curious about this ‘affair’, as Alice called it.
Alice disliked Eric from the start. One morning she was dusting the drawing-room when she felt somebody pinching her ass. She quickly turned around and saw Eric standing there and looking at her with a very smug smile on his face, “What the f…?”
“So, Alicia, I see you are busy. How about we meet later in the garden and I can give you a…painting lesson or two?” Eric said, rubbing his hands together as he continued smiling at her.
Alice looked him straight in the eyes and said with a deadly coldness in her voice, “If you, asshole, ever put your fucking hands on me again, I will cut your balls with a steak knife and feed your dick to the pigeons. Did you fucking understand me, you piece of shit?”
Alice’s outburst put Eric in complete shock. He was used to getting quite a different response from the ladies and maids and Alice’s language made cursing sailors look like innocent babies in comparison. Such a retort coming from a cute girl made him even more excited until he saw the serious ‘touch me again and you’re dead’ look on her face. This was the last time Eric ever tried anything again with her.
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Have I mentioned before how much I loved this story ? Well, I really do. And by the way, I’m with Skyblue, I’d pick good story telling over any NC-17 chapter any day. As far as I’m concerned you can take your time all you want. In fact, you can even postone that sex scene for a few more chapters for all I care. There is no no rush. These two haven’t even properly met yet. Anyways, great job B&TF !! I’m loving this !
I love it the first time around ,and I’m loving it again, but you are killing me here!
I can’t wait for them to actually see each other without fainting. I love a good story whether it has a NC-17 or not. You can’t loose with a good story and this is a damn good story.
B&TF, I am so impressed with this story. I wait for each of your updates and you never disappoint. I can’t wait until Bette wakes and sees Tina…she thinks she’s dead, so this is really going to confuse her. Keep ’em coming B&TF!
B&TF, I haven’t gone back to re-read the first posting of this amazing tale to compare, but I enjoyed it before and I’m enjoying it again anxious for what I remember lies ahead *wink* The flow makes it so easy to slid into a wonderful image of the storyline… thank you for posting!!! SK/C
I like your stories how their are. I prefere really a good storyline, sex scene are nice but it’s not all in live.
i dont miss any sex scene.. in fact before you mentioned it i wasnt even thinking of sex with these two… the chemestry and passion is so palpable that with respect to sex its comparable…
Hi B&T, thank you so much for posting and for moving on with the story, I can’t wait till they meet without fainting involved. You are great and a brilliant writer as well, for me you were never a beginner from the start, you wrote this story like a pro. Thanks again Hun. Have a great day and post soon. Love
IF I have to pick… I’d prefer a good story telling then just any sex scene. For me it’s just icing on the cake! lol Love your story even though Bette STILL fainted! Please post soon :)
Such a great story!!!!!
Sorry for the delay in commenting, mate! i’m with the others, I don’t care how long it takes or even if there is a sex scene. Your love story is perfect in itself. I can’t wait until Bette and Tina are finally on the same page about what happened, so that they can start to ‘properly’ meet. The pace at which you’re telling this story is great, don’t worry. Everything will come in good time. I like Alice playing the ‘matchmaker’ here, even though I’m sure B&T wouldn’t really need her anyway… ;) Thanks and PPS. This is great!
Alice is funny!