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Out of Closet (B&T time-travel romance), Ch. 17
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Alice was anxious to reveal this ‘little’ incident to her friend but she realized that for Elizabeth Eric was her first love and she was blind to his flaws and wickedness. After several failed attempts to talk to Elizabeth, Alice just preferred to listen while secretly eavesdropping and spying on them to be ready to help Elizabeth if she needed it.
That’s why on that terrible night when the house was empty and Eric attempted to rape Elizabeth, Alice was near by and was able to stop him before he went too far. For one of her articles for LA Magazine, Alice had to attend self-defense classes at different studios to make her famous Top Five Self-Defense techniques list. She learned a couple of moves and was so grateful that again her work provided her with something very useful.
After she kicked Eric in the balls, Alice went and got a gardener and with his help Eric was tied up and held in the tool shed. A currier was sent to fetch Maxine and Katie Porter and the sheriff was called to take Eric away while Elizabeth was carried to her bedroom still unconscious.
The next morning, after Elizabeth finally came out of her bedroom and found Alice in the garden, they talked about what happened and Alice was really happy to see Elizabeth finally putting her mind at ease with this whole nightmare.
Place: Porter mansion – Bette’s bedroom
Year: 2005
“So, Eric didn’t rape her?” Tina asked, visibly relieved at the news.
“Nope, and I hope that son of a bitch got what he deserved. After the sheriff took him away we never heard of him again.”
“You know, it reminds me…the 1885’s Eric has the same last name as my ex-boyfriend and they both turned out to be such assholes. I wonder if they are related,” Tina said distractedly, forgetting that Alice didn’t know about the latest developments in her life.
“What? Your ex-boyfriend? When did that happen and what did I miss?” Alice asked eagerly, anxious for the news.
“Oh, sorry…I forgot you didn’t know. Yes, ex…we had a party at my house one night, Shane and Carmen got way too drunk so Eric volunteered to take Carmen home and he took advantage of her. She ended up in the hospital, raped and beaten. But his ass will be in jail as soon as the court hears Carmen’s story and also some other unethical stuff he did at work.”
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Have I mentioned before how much I loved this story ? Well, I really do. And by the way, I’m with Skyblue, I’d pick good story telling over any NC-17 chapter any day. As far as I’m concerned you can take your time all you want. In fact, you can even postone that sex scene for a few more chapters for all I care. There is no no rush. These two haven’t even properly met yet. Anyways, great job B&TF !! I’m loving this !
I love it the first time around ,and I’m loving it again, but you are killing me here!
I can’t wait for them to actually see each other without fainting. I love a good story whether it has a NC-17 or not. You can’t loose with a good story and this is a damn good story.
B&TF, I am so impressed with this story. I wait for each of your updates and you never disappoint. I can’t wait until Bette wakes and sees Tina…she thinks she’s dead, so this is really going to confuse her. Keep ’em coming B&TF!
B&TF, I haven’t gone back to re-read the first posting of this amazing tale to compare, but I enjoyed it before and I’m enjoying it again anxious for what I remember lies ahead *wink* The flow makes it so easy to slid into a wonderful image of the storyline… thank you for posting!!! SK/C
I like your stories how their are. I prefere really a good storyline, sex scene are nice but it’s not all in live.
i dont miss any sex scene.. in fact before you mentioned it i wasnt even thinking of sex with these two… the chemestry and passion is so palpable that with respect to sex its comparable…
Hi B&T, thank you so much for posting and for moving on with the story, I can’t wait till they meet without fainting involved. You are great and a brilliant writer as well, for me you were never a beginner from the start, you wrote this story like a pro. Thanks again Hun. Have a great day and post soon. Love
IF I have to pick… I’d prefer a good story telling then just any sex scene. For me it’s just icing on the cake! lol Love your story even though Bette STILL fainted! Please post soon :)
Such a great story!!!!!
Sorry for the delay in commenting, mate! i’m with the others, I don’t care how long it takes or even if there is a sex scene. Your love story is perfect in itself. I can’t wait until Bette and Tina are finally on the same page about what happened, so that they can start to ‘properly’ meet. The pace at which you’re telling this story is great, don’t worry. Everything will come in good time. I like Alice playing the ‘matchmaker’ here, even though I’m sure B&T wouldn’t really need her anyway… ;) Thanks and PPS. This is great!
Alice is funny!