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Out of Closet (B&T time-travel romance), Ch. 17
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Place: Porter mansion – Bette’s bedroom
Year: 2005
“I don’t know,” Tina said honestly, “but I’m sure I would love to get to know her better as soon as she stops passing out on me.”
“Okay, let’s put her on the bed but we can stay here in the bedroom with her, so the next time she comes out of this blackout we’ll be here for her.”
They carried Bette back to the bed and then sat down on two chairs near the bedroom window. Tina stole another glance at Bette and whispered to Alice, “Seems like she’s been up for awhile. She has one of my dresses on, some of the prop clothes for the documentary are on the floor in a messy pile and the bathroom door is open. I wonder why we didn’t see her running out and screaming bloody hell. I’m sure I would be totally freaking out and scared if I would wake up in another century.”
“Well, Tina,” Alice replied with the smile, “Meet Bette Porter, a woman with nerves of steel and a knack for adventure.”
“Nerves of steel?” Tina said sarcastically, “Come on Alice, she faints every time she sees us.”
“Not us, Tina…just you. Bette is not the same person when it comes to you.”
“But why?” Tina asked, feeling tears coming up, “Am I that repulsive? Is she too frightened to even look at me? Maybe I should wear different jeans?”
“Stop it, Tina,” Alice said laughing quietly. “You are getting it all wrong. Let me finish my story and then you will understand.”
“Okay, I guess you’re right. No jumping to conclusions. Please, do enlighten me. Why does this Bette Porter faints every time she sees me?”
Place: Porter mansion – Elizabeth’s bedroom
Year: 1885
“What the fuck? A closet? A fucking closet? Is this a joke?” Alice was trying to get off all the hats and dresses that she was wrapped in when she heard footsteps approaching and saw a strong but slender hand opening the closet door.
“Shit, shit, shit…what am I gonna do, what am I gonna do,” Alice whispered in panic. “Think, Alice…think.”
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Have I mentioned before how much I loved this story ? Well, I really do. And by the way, I’m with Skyblue, I’d pick good story telling over any NC-17 chapter any day. As far as I’m concerned you can take your time all you want. In fact, you can even postone that sex scene for a few more chapters for all I care. There is no no rush. These two haven’t even properly met yet. Anyways, great job B&TF !! I’m loving this !
I love it the first time around ,and I’m loving it again, but you are killing me here!
I can’t wait for them to actually see each other without fainting. I love a good story whether it has a NC-17 or not. You can’t loose with a good story and this is a damn good story.
B&TF, I am so impressed with this story. I wait for each of your updates and you never disappoint. I can’t wait until Bette wakes and sees Tina…she thinks she’s dead, so this is really going to confuse her. Keep ’em coming B&TF!
B&TF, I haven’t gone back to re-read the first posting of this amazing tale to compare, but I enjoyed it before and I’m enjoying it again anxious for what I remember lies ahead *wink* The flow makes it so easy to slid into a wonderful image of the storyline… thank you for posting!!! SK/C
I like your stories how their are. I prefere really a good storyline, sex scene are nice but it’s not all in live.
i dont miss any sex scene.. in fact before you mentioned it i wasnt even thinking of sex with these two… the chemestry and passion is so palpable that with respect to sex its comparable…
Hi B&T, thank you so much for posting and for moving on with the story, I can’t wait till they meet without fainting involved. You are great and a brilliant writer as well, for me you were never a beginner from the start, you wrote this story like a pro. Thanks again Hun. Have a great day and post soon. Love
IF I have to pick… I’d prefer a good story telling then just any sex scene. For me it’s just icing on the cake! lol Love your story even though Bette STILL fainted! Please post soon :)
Such a great story!!!!!
Sorry for the delay in commenting, mate! i’m with the others, I don’t care how long it takes or even if there is a sex scene. Your love story is perfect in itself. I can’t wait until Bette and Tina are finally on the same page about what happened, so that they can start to ‘properly’ meet. The pace at which you’re telling this story is great, don’t worry. Everything will come in good time. I like Alice playing the ‘matchmaker’ here, even though I’m sure B&T wouldn’t really need her anyway… ;) Thanks and PPS. This is great!
Alice is funny!