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Out of Closet (B&T time-travel romance), Ch. 17
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Alice saw an absolutely stunning young woman opening the door of the closet and stopping dead in her tracks. The woman placed her hands on her hips and asked with no fear in her voice, “Excuse me, who are you and what are you doing in my closet?”
Alice was mesmerized by woman’s beauty and any thoughts or brilliant ideas had never formed in her head. “Um, I’m…um…I’m Alice…ia. I’m Alicia, your new…um…maid,” Alice mumbled nervously, finally able to think and trying hard to keep the panic out of her voice.
“My new maid?” the beauty asked, clearly confused. “Why didn’t I know about this? My mother didn’t mention anything to me.”
“I’m new in this area and I just talked to your mother this morning and she sent me here to re-arrange your closet,” Alice answered calmly, getting more confident after she heard the woman speak. Mentioned of the mother gave Alice an idea on how to explain her sudden appearance in the closet. She just hoped that her little scheme worked.
Alice was so thankful that Maxine Porter was lately preoccupied with her art festival. Maxine admitted that she didn’t remember talking to Alice but she attributed the loss of memory to her really busy schedule and a multitude of people she had been meeting for the last three weeks. Elizabeth thought that the meeting just slipped her mother’s mind and Alice was hired as her maid.
At first Alice was really nervous and fidgeting around Elizabeth, feeling intimidated by her beauty, intelligence and innocence. For some reason Alice thought that Elizabeth looked vaguely familiar but even torture wouldn’t make her remember where and when she saw this beautiful face.
Alice tried to stay focused on her daily routine while recording everything she saw on her miniature tape recorder that she sneaked into 1885 in the pocket of her dress. She knew that she appeared as a strange and weird girl who was talking to herself all the time and used different words that Elizabeth didn’t understand sometimes but it was hard to hide her true-self.
Often the idea of being in a different time was still so unbelievable that Alice needed an escape once in a while. One thing that helped her to remain sane was smoking. Several times Alice snitched cigarettes from the gardener or even cigars from Melvin Porter’s special box when nobody was around. One time Elizabeth caught her smoking a cigar and she was completely shocked at the sight of it. But Elizabeth’s labeling of Alice as a weird human being didn’t stop those two from getting closer and closer.
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Have I mentioned before how much I loved this story ? Well, I really do. And by the way, I’m with Skyblue, I’d pick good story telling over any NC-17 chapter any day. As far as I’m concerned you can take your time all you want. In fact, you can even postone that sex scene for a few more chapters for all I care. There is no no rush. These two haven’t even properly met yet. Anyways, great job B&TF !! I’m loving this !
I love it the first time around ,and I’m loving it again, but you are killing me here!
I can’t wait for them to actually see each other without fainting. I love a good story whether it has a NC-17 or not. You can’t loose with a good story and this is a damn good story.
B&TF, I am so impressed with this story. I wait for each of your updates and you never disappoint. I can’t wait until Bette wakes and sees Tina…she thinks she’s dead, so this is really going to confuse her. Keep ’em coming B&TF!
B&TF, I haven’t gone back to re-read the first posting of this amazing tale to compare, but I enjoyed it before and I’m enjoying it again anxious for what I remember lies ahead *wink* The flow makes it so easy to slid into a wonderful image of the storyline… thank you for posting!!! SK/C
I like your stories how their are. I prefere really a good storyline, sex scene are nice but it’s not all in live.
i dont miss any sex scene.. in fact before you mentioned it i wasnt even thinking of sex with these two… the chemestry and passion is so palpable that with respect to sex its comparable…
Hi B&T, thank you so much for posting and for moving on with the story, I can’t wait till they meet without fainting involved. You are great and a brilliant writer as well, for me you were never a beginner from the start, you wrote this story like a pro. Thanks again Hun. Have a great day and post soon. Love
IF I have to pick… I’d prefer a good story telling then just any sex scene. For me it’s just icing on the cake! lol Love your story even though Bette STILL fainted! Please post soon :)
Such a great story!!!!!
Sorry for the delay in commenting, mate! i’m with the others, I don’t care how long it takes or even if there is a sex scene. Your love story is perfect in itself. I can’t wait until Bette and Tina are finally on the same page about what happened, so that they can start to ‘properly’ meet. The pace at which you’re telling this story is great, don’t worry. Everything will come in good time. I like Alice playing the ‘matchmaker’ here, even though I’m sure B&T wouldn’t really need her anyway… ;) Thanks and PPS. This is great!
Alice is funny!