Fan Fiction
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OH MY GOD… OH MY GOD…
Tina: OMG I looking at Bette wondered about that too
Shane: well I have
Carman: Don’t tell us you never were with more then 1 at a time
Shane: No I have had my share
Alice: OK YODA how do we all get a piece of this action
Bette: well wonder no more
Tina: You have
Bette: well its not rocket science here
Shane: ok ladies in a circle and who ever is on your right you will be going down on her
They all get into position and like a well-oiled machine
Bette had Tina Tina had Lara Lara had Dana Helena had Alice Alice had Carmen Carmen had Shane and Shane had Bette
This went on and on until they couldn’t take another second and one by one they rolled off of each other as they crawled into each others armsand fell asleep where they landed
Bette woke up at about 4:00 am just looks at the sight in front of her and remembering OMG what did we do still looking around she sees that each couple has pared off and were cuddled together Tina was holding on to her so she helps her up and walks her into the bedroom comes back out with blankets for the rest and covers them goes out on the deck and finds everyone clothes and places them close by gets hers and Tina’s and just puts them in the hamper climbing into bed Tina just moves right into her arms and soon she was fast asleep
8:00am Shane wakes up sees everyone still sleeping and covered she thinks was it a dream God I hope it was
9:00am Dana wakes up looks around and she also starts to think dam I can’t remember a thing from last night but looks like everyone is ok
Lara: go back to sleep but later you have to help me find my head I don’t remember a thing
Dana: only if you help me
Alice and Helena just continue to sleep each not even knowing where they are never mind what happened the night before
10:00am They all start to wake up get dressed and 2 by 2 they leave
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(48 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
WOW this is so cool, love the fact that we r to figure out if it is real or not…..good work…
You’re workin’ overtime tonight baby. Keep it up!!
I consider myself to be a bit of a prude, but I still found this to be pretty fuckin’ HOT! So Shane had Bette huh? I wonder if Yoda taught Porter some new tricks. ;) Too bad Bette can’t remember a damn thing. LMAO
babe that was fucking AWESOME!!!!
Well now, I’m blushing and turning slightly pink…and that’s hard for me to do. Amanda you have no fear.
Amanda, when you mentioned that last night, I thought wow, i couldn’t have done it…bless you…it was great…!!
Great post Amanda and you are so bad. What an overly active imagination you have, and I LOVE IT. Thanks we needed that andn it looks as though fanfic is the only way we will get to have it from our favorite girls. Great Amanda, do it again. BTW, are you going to finish the other story you were writing with your other pen name. You left us in New York or at least on the way to New York. They still have a lot to do and I hope you complete it.
let me edit my previous comment a little…haha….when you mentioned we needed to write an orgy last night…sorry girl
Now that was fun!!!! And original. Nothing like that on this site.
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!! That’s all I can say!!! And funny too. Judging from the comments from you and the others, I guess last night’s episode wasn’t good to our girls again. **SIGH** So, if that’s the case, I’m sure this is very much appreciated. Thanks.
You don’t have to worry about me slamming you..that was fucking hot! You dared to go there…so keep going.
WOW!!!HOTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!
wow, all got it on, all can’t remember, poor girls……..i guess they all have to do it again now……..LMAO
Oh Wow, nope not gonna be any smacking or slapping from me. that was great. You know, you ARE a great writer.
Hey you really have a foormula going here… first you get hot… then drink… then stoned and then reallly really HOTTTTTT!!!! Or is that just imagination? I was great.
Hey you really have a foormula going here… first you get hot… then drink… then stoned and then reallly really HOTTTTTT!!!! Or is that just imagination? It was great.
Babe…you definitely have the right title for this chapter. Damn…that was OMG, OMG, OMG….LOL. Shane had Bette, and Tina had Lara…hmmmm. Very interesting indeed how you come up with such amazing stand alone chapters. ;-) Thanks for the scorcher…definite cold shower moment. Later Babe.
you go girl….party on!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey, don’t have much time, but I have to say I loved it! I think the show needs even a little of that! We have to IM one of these days. I am so upset about the show.
wow.. you certainly has a creative way of comforting everyone after a episode… lol… it will be just like this the whole season? … lol… thanks
Hot! Just too Hot!!!!!!!!!
you go girl!! love a good orgy! LOL
fantastic and i did keep saying ‘oh my god’ throughout aswell!
Good job, now why would we slam you for this??? Keep them cumming.
Damn that was fun and hot, like it. Hope you will have some more like this one, Thanks!
OMNG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u fucking did it HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
Amanda,I loved it. The3 whole did they, didn’t they premise was marvelous realized. All that doubt made the whole thing so much sweeter. I wonder when the next BBQ will be and how do you top it? I am sure that you have plenty of ideas. Thank you for creating this little slice of heaven admist the depression that is Season 3 so far. I can only hope that the darkness will clear to leave a brighter day. Your Loyal Fan. PS Love you other story just happen to lurk more than comment.
LOVE IT!! Thank you I wish the show would make are girls as happy as you can..great JOB now I can get through the week till maybe they give us some happiness on the show..I doubt it. Keep us going you are great.
Just lovely!….this is what i call fan fiction!
Yes Amanda this would have to be fiction and a “Stand alone piece” totally unrelated to S2. Because after what transpired between Bette and Helena in S2, I cann’t phantom or wrap my brain around Helena being apart of the gang or being with Alice (otherwise known as Bette’s Best Friend). But that was a great writing job as always :o).
that is definately 1 way to spend a hot day…that oh so creative mind is working overtime for you i see. great orgy..i mean story!!
We would never do that. We want to praise you for all your effort! Thanks again for a wonderful story.
Well, fuck Amanda, you give me hope that having returned to suburbia, it won’t be a complete wasteland, wasted maybe(although I’m still trying to find a contact (of more than one kind). Mrs. Robinson can’t hold a candle to you, girl! You’re some piece of work!
You go Amanada, In a way was glad it was a dream,or was it? Can you see all the gang plus helena all have sex in Bette and Tinas living room// That did take our mind off of last night as if much could. thanks
Wow you’re so bad Amanda LOL….this was so funny and HOT!!!