Fan Fiction
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OH MY GOD… OH MY GOD…
Again starting at their feet and heading north the LOSERS all went around the WINNER’S centers just for now circling their belly buttons and up to their nipples By now no one cared who was the winner or the loser all were moaning and grinding their hips then as if on cue the LOSERS moved back down and they all settled in their lovers patch of curls as they all opened up their legs the LOSERS moved in to their waiting clits sliding 2… 3 fingers deep and sucking their clits again all that was heard were moans of passion all forgetting they were not alone as all four women were going into orgasmic heaven as wave after wave passed through each of them and when they couldn’t take any more they pulled their lover up to them each kissing the other with a heated passion
As they all just laid in each other’s arms words were not spoken
Alice: I have the perfect end to this game
Tina: who says we want it to end
And the crowd joined in yeah who wants it to end
Alice: smiling even betteras she takes out 4 joints and gives each couple one they all smoke and now they didn’t give a shit about a thing drunk and getting stoned
Bette reached up and rips Tina’s thong off of her while she dives into her pussy the others all follow her lead
Bette then takes the Gadiva Liqueur and pours it over Tina’s boobs and down to her clit and licks it off
This went on forever it seemed each licking and sucking anywhere they wanted
Shane brings out 4 more joints
Everyone’s eyes bugged out as they smoked the next joint now they were not only drunk but stoned as well and all bets were off
It was getting late and the party was moved into the living room they were all still so out of it they didn’t even care they were all still naked
Dana: I have a fantasy
Lara: tell me
Dana: well ok now don’t laugh but I would love to know what it feels like having a lover going down on me and another lover sitting on my face
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(48 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
WOW this is so cool, love the fact that we r to figure out if it is real or not…..good work…
You’re workin’ overtime tonight baby. Keep it up!!
I consider myself to be a bit of a prude, but I still found this to be pretty fuckin’ HOT! So Shane had Bette huh? I wonder if Yoda taught Porter some new tricks. ;) Too bad Bette can’t remember a damn thing. LMAO
babe that was fucking AWESOME!!!!
Well now, I’m blushing and turning slightly pink…and that’s hard for me to do. Amanda you have no fear.
Amanda, when you mentioned that last night, I thought wow, i couldn’t have done it…bless you…it was great…!!
Great post Amanda and you are so bad. What an overly active imagination you have, and I LOVE IT. Thanks we needed that andn it looks as though fanfic is the only way we will get to have it from our favorite girls. Great Amanda, do it again. BTW, are you going to finish the other story you were writing with your other pen name. You left us in New York or at least on the way to New York. They still have a lot to do and I hope you complete it.
let me edit my previous comment a little…haha….when you mentioned we needed to write an orgy last night…sorry girl
Now that was fun!!!! And original. Nothing like that on this site.
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!! That’s all I can say!!! And funny too. Judging from the comments from you and the others, I guess last night’s episode wasn’t good to our girls again. **SIGH** So, if that’s the case, I’m sure this is very much appreciated. Thanks.
You don’t have to worry about me slamming you..that was fucking hot! You dared to go there…so keep going.
WOW!!!HOTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!
wow, all got it on, all can’t remember, poor girls……..i guess they all have to do it again now……..LMAO
Oh Wow, nope not gonna be any smacking or slapping from me. that was great. You know, you ARE a great writer.
Hey you really have a foormula going here… first you get hot… then drink… then stoned and then reallly really HOTTTTTT!!!! Or is that just imagination? I was great.
Hey you really have a foormula going here… first you get hot… then drink… then stoned and then reallly really HOTTTTTT!!!! Or is that just imagination? It was great.
Babe…you definitely have the right title for this chapter. Damn…that was OMG, OMG, OMG….LOL. Shane had Bette, and Tina had Lara…hmmmm. Very interesting indeed how you come up with such amazing stand alone chapters. ;-) Thanks for the scorcher…definite cold shower moment. Later Babe.
you go girl….party on!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey, don’t have much time, but I have to say I loved it! I think the show needs even a little of that! We have to IM one of these days. I am so upset about the show.
wow.. you certainly has a creative way of comforting everyone after a episode… lol… it will be just like this the whole season? … lol… thanks
Hot! Just too Hot!!!!!!!!!
you go girl!! love a good orgy! LOL
fantastic and i did keep saying ‘oh my god’ throughout aswell!
Good job, now why would we slam you for this??? Keep them cumming.
Damn that was fun and hot, like it. Hope you will have some more like this one, Thanks!
OMNG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u fucking did it HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
Amanda,I loved it. The3 whole did they, didn’t they premise was marvelous realized. All that doubt made the whole thing so much sweeter. I wonder when the next BBQ will be and how do you top it? I am sure that you have plenty of ideas. Thank you for creating this little slice of heaven admist the depression that is Season 3 so far. I can only hope that the darkness will clear to leave a brighter day. Your Loyal Fan. PS Love you other story just happen to lurk more than comment.
LOVE IT!! Thank you I wish the show would make are girls as happy as you can..great JOB now I can get through the week till maybe they give us some happiness on the show..I doubt it. Keep us going you are great.
Just lovely!….this is what i call fan fiction!
Yes Amanda this would have to be fiction and a “Stand alone piece” totally unrelated to S2. Because after what transpired between Bette and Helena in S2, I cann’t phantom or wrap my brain around Helena being apart of the gang or being with Alice (otherwise known as Bette’s Best Friend). But that was a great writing job as always :o).
that is definately 1 way to spend a hot day…that oh so creative mind is working overtime for you i see. great orgy..i mean story!!
We would never do that. We want to praise you for all your effort! Thanks again for a wonderful story.
Well, fuck Amanda, you give me hope that having returned to suburbia, it won’t be a complete wasteland, wasted maybe(although I’m still trying to find a contact (of more than one kind). Mrs. Robinson can’t hold a candle to you, girl! You’re some piece of work!
You go Amanada, In a way was glad it was a dream,or was it? Can you see all the gang plus helena all have sex in Bette and Tinas living room// That did take our mind off of last night as if much could. thanks
Wow you’re so bad Amanda LOL….this was so funny and HOT!!!