Fan Fiction
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OH MY GOD… OH MY GOD…
Helena: Bring it on Alice because it will be you going DOWN TOWN right girls
The ball was served back and forth back and forth and Alice didn’t get the job done now they needed 2 points to win
Helena: What’s the matter Alice
Alive: Bite me
Helena: Remember that later
Carman serves and Shane slaps it right back match point again
Lara serves right to Tina and she falls the wrong way match and game
Alice was yelling and screaming
Bette goes to Tina and just hugs her whispering in her ear I’m sorry baby
Tina: she whispers back how do you know I didn’t want to lose smiling an evil smile
Bette melts even more
Alice: Ok LOSERS out of the pool and feed us MOUTH TO MOUTH
The winners all lay down on the lounge chairs and the LOSERS all straddle their laps placing a piece of meat in their mouths and FEEDING their partner
Tina again whispers in Bette’s mouth… see no losers here
They all were enjoying this eating like Kings
Shane: Ok I have something for the LOSERS to do BODY SHOTS first I want you lovely ladies to cup your own breasts together while we pour Tequila in the center
Alice: hmmmm nice Shane
Tina, Helena, Carman and Dana all do as they are told salt on their shoulder and a slice of lemon in their mouths and the Tequila is poured on them as their partners lick it all off and then top it off with a kiss
Shane: One more time and again and again
Bette: Ok I have something I want now I love it when Tina does this to me I want you LOSERS to lick every inch of our bodies
Alice: Now we’re talking
Bette, Alice, Shane and Lara lay down face down their partners start at their feet and head north
When Carmen got to Shane’s ass she pulled down her boy shorts and continued the other’s did the same when they got to the thongs all four women just looked at each other when they removed the WINNERS thongs and threw them over their heads LICKING EVERY INCH they were then instructed to turn over they never even noticed they were completely naked
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(48 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
WOW this is so cool, love the fact that we r to figure out if it is real or not…..good work…
You’re workin’ overtime tonight baby. Keep it up!!
I consider myself to be a bit of a prude, but I still found this to be pretty fuckin’ HOT! So Shane had Bette huh? I wonder if Yoda taught Porter some new tricks. ;) Too bad Bette can’t remember a damn thing. LMAO
babe that was fucking AWESOME!!!!
Well now, I’m blushing and turning slightly pink…and that’s hard for me to do. Amanda you have no fear.
Amanda, when you mentioned that last night, I thought wow, i couldn’t have done it…bless you…it was great…!!
Great post Amanda and you are so bad. What an overly active imagination you have, and I LOVE IT. Thanks we needed that andn it looks as though fanfic is the only way we will get to have it from our favorite girls. Great Amanda, do it again. BTW, are you going to finish the other story you were writing with your other pen name. You left us in New York or at least on the way to New York. They still have a lot to do and I hope you complete it.
let me edit my previous comment a little…haha….when you mentioned we needed to write an orgy last night…sorry girl
Now that was fun!!!! And original. Nothing like that on this site.
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!! That’s all I can say!!! And funny too. Judging from the comments from you and the others, I guess last night’s episode wasn’t good to our girls again. **SIGH** So, if that’s the case, I’m sure this is very much appreciated. Thanks.
You don’t have to worry about me slamming you..that was fucking hot! You dared to go there…so keep going.
WOW!!!HOTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!
wow, all got it on, all can’t remember, poor girls……..i guess they all have to do it again now……..LMAO
Oh Wow, nope not gonna be any smacking or slapping from me. that was great. You know, you ARE a great writer.
Hey you really have a foormula going here… first you get hot… then drink… then stoned and then reallly really HOTTTTTT!!!! Or is that just imagination? I was great.
Hey you really have a foormula going here… first you get hot… then drink… then stoned and then reallly really HOTTTTTT!!!! Or is that just imagination? It was great.
Babe…you definitely have the right title for this chapter. Damn…that was OMG, OMG, OMG….LOL. Shane had Bette, and Tina had Lara…hmmmm. Very interesting indeed how you come up with such amazing stand alone chapters. ;-) Thanks for the scorcher…definite cold shower moment. Later Babe.
you go girl….party on!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey, don’t have much time, but I have to say I loved it! I think the show needs even a little of that! We have to IM one of these days. I am so upset about the show.
wow.. you certainly has a creative way of comforting everyone after a episode… lol… it will be just like this the whole season? … lol… thanks
Hot! Just too Hot!!!!!!!!!
you go girl!! love a good orgy! LOL
fantastic and i did keep saying ‘oh my god’ throughout aswell!
Good job, now why would we slam you for this??? Keep them cumming.
Damn that was fun and hot, like it. Hope you will have some more like this one, Thanks!
OMNG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u fucking did it HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
Amanda,I loved it. The3 whole did they, didn’t they premise was marvelous realized. All that doubt made the whole thing so much sweeter. I wonder when the next BBQ will be and how do you top it? I am sure that you have plenty of ideas. Thank you for creating this little slice of heaven admist the depression that is Season 3 so far. I can only hope that the darkness will clear to leave a brighter day. Your Loyal Fan. PS Love you other story just happen to lurk more than comment.
LOVE IT!! Thank you I wish the show would make are girls as happy as you can..great JOB now I can get through the week till maybe they give us some happiness on the show..I doubt it. Keep us going you are great.
Just lovely!….this is what i call fan fiction!
Yes Amanda this would have to be fiction and a “Stand alone piece” totally unrelated to S2. Because after what transpired between Bette and Helena in S2, I cann’t phantom or wrap my brain around Helena being apart of the gang or being with Alice (otherwise known as Bette’s Best Friend). But that was a great writing job as always :o).
that is definately 1 way to spend a hot day…that oh so creative mind is working overtime for you i see. great orgy..i mean story!!
We would never do that. We want to praise you for all your effort! Thanks again for a wonderful story.
Well, fuck Amanda, you give me hope that having returned to suburbia, it won’t be a complete wasteland, wasted maybe(although I’m still trying to find a contact (of more than one kind). Mrs. Robinson can’t hold a candle to you, girl! You’re some piece of work!
You go Amanada, In a way was glad it was a dream,or was it? Can you see all the gang plus helena all have sex in Bette and Tinas living room// That did take our mind off of last night as if much could. thanks
Wow you’re so bad Amanda LOL….this was so funny and HOT!!!