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    Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 72

    Story written on September 27, 2005 by arceextl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=56813
    Author Notes:

    Bette & Tina’s special night “away” at home. Tina’s p.o.v. of a trip to heaven, as only her Bette can take her.

     

    I can’t help itI gasp when our wetness mingles and feel our ***** touch.  It is impossible to get her close enough to me.  I can never get her close enough.

     

    Oh, Bette, I want you so close that when I touch myself I’m also touching you.

     

    I manage the husky whisper of words, “Baby, please, I need to feel your mouth on me, use your tongue to make me come.”  She moans at my request and her lips first capture my mouth in a deep, sensual kiss, with her tongue mimicking the motion soon to be on my aching ***** and inside my oh, so wet *****.

     

    Once again, she has inflamed every inch of my being into the sum total of me wanting her – needing her to release this ache.

     

    She gently lifts me up and over her.  I lean down and kiss those lips, suck the tongue  that in moments will cause rapture to explode from within meecstasy will travel through my mortal soul and pour out in my screams of her nameYES, now!

     

    I am straddling her – she pushes me up and slides down under me, her hands on my *****.  I bend my head to watch as she with eyes closed breathes in my scent, her head slowly moving back and forth, the throaty sounds of pleasure escaping amid her now rapid intake and outtake of breath.  She pulls me down and closer to her face; blows gently and moans as I am so aroused and wet that it’s dripping on her – I cannot wait – “please, baby

     

    Her tongue travels up, then down, opening me moreI cannot control the cries of joyshe plunges her tongue inside meI struggle for the next breath as that now hot tongue caresses and exploresno, lays claim once more to my love for her that is pouring down my interior walls

     

    I press myself harder into her face- take more of me – then rise but not too farI do not want to leave this exquisite sensation of her drinking from me.

     

    She is the woman, my soul mate, who drinks from the well of my desire and replenishes me to overflowing with her love.

     

    Her tongue withdraws and makes its way to my erect and now pulsing ***** and once it is wrapped in the embrace of her lips and tongue, I fear my conscious mind is leaving meI have expelled all air from my lungs to feed the building screams within my chest.

     

    As the path of this imminent explosion rapidly spreads through my body, I feel the power of its fiery trail lifting me up, arching my back, sending the screams of release to my throat, the burgeoning flames of climax through my corethat erupts from within to join the thick mist of our passion that fills this room.

     

    Listen, my love

     

    The screams of your name are cloaked with these vows

     

    I will love you, Bette

    as certain as my lungs need air to breathe

     

    I will love you, Bette

    as certain as the flower needs the rain

     

    I do love you, Bette

    as certain as the peace of heaven descends upon me each time

     

    you take me

     

    to our place

     

    called Forever.

     

     

    TBC

     

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    2. Arce,

      Intrigue and mystery at the start. Was this Helena checking up on Susan or is there more devilment occurring here.

      The plotting is perfectly balanced like a Sushi chef preparing the ingredients. Each cleaver stroke is delicately calculated and completed effortlessly without wasted effort. I feel that you as poised to let loose the drama and can’t wait.

      The insight into Tina psyche was bewitching. She is intoxicated by Bette. This yearning is unfettered by any rationale thought. This ardent desire consumes the very essence of Tina; she is a cat with singed and scorched fur from craving the warmth of the open flame.

      I marvel at the majesty with which you have evocatively and emotively established this scene. The path of true love may be wrought with danger but also wonder and awe and passion.

      I need time to revel in this brilliance and reflect on the beauty of their love and sentiments.

      Thank you for this tremendous and torturous tale.

      I will be here waiting and watching for your next instalment.

      Much thanks,
      Your Loyal Fan.

    3. im in heaven. that was so beautifully written. its palpable how your write their love. rc thanks so much. and i know you will be protecting our girls. thanks.

    4. come on alice…dig some dirt on this susan…love this and i know you will protect them… they are meant for each other… maybe this dawn can talk some sense into susan… please post soon

    5. Folks, I hate to break it to you, but I think that last sexy monologue was a stalker doing herself and imaging she was with Bette.

      Author? Am I right? Sick, I thought, and scary!

    6. techgal: I thought the stalker(Susan) was going after Tina?? Is there indeed a different stalker? I must back track my reading to make sure I didn’t miss that. Yikes!! If it is indeed someone imagining themselves with Bette like that – creepy storyline but, can’t say I’m not guilty of that a bit myself -hee,hee.

    8. That wasn’t sex; That was pure love. They are drunk on each other love. Maybe our Alice will keep on digging on Susan, Maybe Susan ex will try to talk Susan into not doing what she is trying to do. Start digging Alice/. thanks

    16. I’m with AmandaMG and bettyvhall right here; Alice is the one that can find anything on anyone. Dig deeper Alice, this is just the beginning. And this comment by BVH “That wasn’t sex; That was pure love. They are drunk on each other love.” I couldnt agree more.

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