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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 72
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They both peeked in on Angelica before brushing their teeth. Then they both slipped into bed, their naked warm bodies enjoying the coolness of the sheets.
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I watch her beautiful, dark eyes as she traces the outline of my face with her index finger. Her eyes follow its path and I feel the slight pressure of her fingertip on my bottom lip. My lips and tongue make contact with her finger and the sensation of that touching causes my breath to hitch and my skin to prickle with excitement.
She leans in and her lips caress mine so softlyas a Spring mist must kiss the bud of the flower on the morning its petals are to reveal their beauty to the day
Then the mist lifts and heat sets in as her lips press harder
and her tongue seeks mine to join hers as its partner in this well versed sexual dance of ours – always a prelude to the travels of pleasure our tongues navigate across our bodies.
Her finger glides from my lips, to my chin, down my neck and she then flattens her hand just above my left breast. She looks down at her hand upon my heart, then slowly raises her dark eyes to stare intensely into mine. They exude love and desire, but also the tacit request for reaffirmation.
“Yes, baby, you are still safely here. As certain as one heartbeat must follow the next, so is the certainty of my love for you.”
The request affirmed, her eyes soften, then darken and deepen with her want of me. Her flattened hand raises up onto fingertips which seemingly float along the surface of my skin, now caressing my breast, lifting it to her lowering lips. I feel her tongue encircle and flick my nipple which becomes erect. I press her harder to my breast.
The want we have for each other is palpable in the air.
Her breathing has become rapid and is in step with mine. The heat building in our bodies has dampened our skin with the sweat of excitement. The coolness of the sheets is gone.
My warm arousal is already coating my thighs. I feel her wetness rubbing up and down on my skin. I place my hands on the firm but soft cheeks of her ***** pulling her closer to me as I raise my hips to her. We are moving to our own special rhythm now, gaining speed as we make contact with our wet and swollen centers.
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Hey I’m just catch up Whoa! that was so HOT I Love it PLS. continue post soon!
Arce,
Intrigue and mystery at the start. Was this Helena checking up on Susan or is there more devilment occurring here.
The plotting is perfectly balanced like a Sushi chef preparing the ingredients. Each cleaver stroke is delicately calculated and completed effortlessly without wasted effort. I feel that you as poised to let loose the drama and can’t wait.
The insight into Tina psyche was bewitching. She is intoxicated by Bette. This yearning is unfettered by any rationale thought. This ardent desire consumes the very essence of Tina; she is a cat with singed and scorched fur from craving the warmth of the open flame.
I marvel at the majesty with which you have evocatively and emotively established this scene. The path of true love may be wrought with danger but also wonder and awe and passion.
I need time to revel in this brilliance and reflect on the beauty of their love and sentiments.
Thank you for this tremendous and torturous tale.
I will be here waiting and watching for your next instalment.
Much thanks,
Your Loyal Fan.
im in heaven. that was so beautifully written. its palpable how your write their love. rc thanks so much. and i know you will be protecting our girls. thanks.
come on alice…dig some dirt on this susan…love this and i know you will protect them… they are meant for each other… maybe this dawn can talk some sense into susan… please post soon
Folks, I hate to break it to you, but I think that last sexy monologue was a stalker doing herself and imaging she was with Bette.
Author? Am I right? Sick, I thought, and scary!
techgal: I thought the stalker(Susan) was going after Tina?? Is there indeed a different stalker? I must back track my reading to make sure I didn’t miss that. Yikes!! If it is indeed someone imagining themselves with Bette like that – creepy storyline but, can’t say I’m not guilty of that a bit myself -hee,hee.
techgal: No!! It is indeed Tina’s p.o.v. of Bette making love to her. The tale is twisted and there are turns but not that far!
That wasn’t sex; That was pure love. They are drunk on each other love. Maybe our Alice will keep on digging on Susan, Maybe Susan ex will try to talk Susan into not doing what she is trying to do. Start digging Alice/. thanks
Beautiful written as uaual.Alice needs to def get more on Susan.I hope they can go on their getaway before the drama starts.
romantically hot,,but i dont really like the upcoming drama AGAIN in their lives, do Lesbians always have to be so cruel!!!
LOVE IT!!!! Wow verey romantic and I really hope Alice finds something before either one of them gets hurt again….Post soon PLEASE
Beautiful rc. You never disappoint. I love how tangibly you express B&T’s love for one another. Thank you!
fucking HOT and beautifil..
You’re making me blush. That was beautiful. It’s so much more than just sex with these two.
Truly beautiful.
I’m with AmandaMG and bettyvhall right here; Alice is the one that can find anything on anyone. Dig deeper Alice, this is just the beginning. And this comment by BVH “That wasn’t sex; That was pure love. They are drunk on each other love.” I couldnt agree more.
beautiful and loving arceextl. you captured their love perfectly. i hope alice doesnt give up and finds out the truth
RC…truly breathtaking!! How beautiful love can be — truly amazing what people can be to one another. Thanks RC.