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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 73
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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 73
Previously
I do love you, Bette, as certain as the peace of heaven descends upon me each time
you take me
to our place
called Forever.
Nice, real nice, Candace thought, looking over the pictures in front of her. What, did she think I only took one? I had Bette Porter in my bed. I wasn’t going to leave that documented with only one picture.
Wouldn’t wifey Tina like to see these, eh? Give her a little trip down memory lane, wouldn’t it, Bette?
Maybe I could be convinced in some way to see that she doesn’t get these? Oh, let me think of a way you could convince me.
Yeah, that should get Tina scurrying her butt back to
Or would it because these two are so saccharin sweet now, it makes me want to puke.
There’s surely another way – She smiled the most evil smile – why, of course, there is, Jewel. Been saving you for a special occasion. Her wicked smile broadened as she held up and looked at the tiny digital recorder clasped in her right hand.
Don’t think the pictures will convince her, Bette? Perhaps your cries of coming as you writhed beneath me will do the trick
* * *
“Bette, I know you’re really busy”
“What, Al? What is it?” Bette answered tersely.
“This Susan thing is bothering me.”
“What ‘thing’ are you talking about?”
“I don’t know – something is just bugging me about her. Even though everything she says checks out – well, I’m just going to say it.”
“You will anyway,
“I don’t like the way she looks at Tina. There’s something else beyond ‘Hi, I’m new in the neighborhood, can we be friends?’ Ya know?”
“Al, you’re right and I appreciate your looking after us, but after I approached her she then spoke with Tina. Shane was in the house when Susan came over and Tina is convinced she’s okay.”
“Yeah, but are you convinced, Porter?”
“I’m not quite sure about that, Al.”
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great.
“thanks for the sniffer.”
“oh, my bette, you certainly continue to have your woes with carpenters…” stuff her in the toilet, someone, please.
“oh, but the way, your wifey has a copy also.” the big red ram charger with hemi needs to run her sorry ass over.
“id like nothing more than the pleasure of bitch-slapping her…” “yes me. surprised i could be a bit alpha, babe?” im next in line behind tina. and what a place to be. ahahaha
thanks rc. them together fills my heart with joy.
Sweet. Tina is really navigating them through some rough waters. Bette needs to hold on tight, trust Tina’s direction and never let go. Anything less will lead to doubt and that’s not what the little tot needs from her moms.
Don’t think the pictures will convince her, Bette? Perhaps your cries of coming as you writhed beneath me will do the trick…
So let me get this straight the fuck took all those pictures and taped them having sex? Shit like this really makes me fear women sometimes…..*briefly though*:-)
And ya would think Helena would learn to back off now and again. I swear she really wants Bette to beat her within an inch of her life, doesn’t she?
wow a very powerful and lovin chapter. post soon
now that was beautiful… tina handled it perfectly… see if they don’t say a word… candyass will be really pissed off… oh and please please let tina BITCH-SLAP-THE-BITCH…and bette BITCH-SLAP-THE-OTHER-BITCH…
love this story…please continue soon
Nice, very nice, I loved the way Tina handled this situation. By taking the Winnie approcah to Candace she was able to both calm Bette and draw them closer together. It is very important that they consentrate more on themselves and thier family, than thier distractors. The stronger thier bond, the harder it is going to be to break them apart. Good job, please continue.
That’s all Candace is, hot air. Thank you for making Tina so strong. Bette’s really lucky to have such an understanding and loving wife. I just wish that these people will get their own lives already and leave B&T alone!! Although it is more fun this way Hehe
Ihey didn’t fall for the bait Helene didn’ get Bette to angry and Candace didn’t make Tina packand grap Angie and run for the hills. thanks
rc,
From rd, hee hee.
Just liked that.
Another wonderful instalment.
It was refreshing to see Bette as the harried party and Tina the pillar of strength and quiet determination.
Looks like Tina has Candyass down pat. She know exactly what CA is trying to do and is preventing Bette rising to the bait.
Thank you for this marvellous melodrama.
Will be here waiting for your next post. Make it real soon, please.
Much thanks,
Your Loyal Fan.
That was so perfectly done. You had them react to the photos but not react to the message and taunt that wqs hurled at them. You let them talk themselves thru the memory and stand to face it and ignore it. Wonderfully done. Thank you.