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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 69
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Shane caught her eyeballing Susan. She slapped her on the arm. “Knock it off, Al.”
“What? Did you see..”
“It’s taken care of already.”
“Something happened and you didn’t tell me?what, what is it, spill.”
Just then Susan reached the table. “Here you go, ladies. Fresh, hot and leaded, just the way you like it.”
“Thanks, Susan. You made mine the triple shot of espresso, right?”
“Oh, yeah, Shane. I remembered.”
Tina got back to the table just as Susan was putting the other coffees down.
“Listen, is everyone free next Sunday? I’d like to have you all over for a barbeque, if you can make it.” Susan asked the table collectively.
“Yeah, sounds great. I don’t think Carmen is working, but I’ll ask her.”
“You going to be around, Dana?”
“Just some workout in the morning.” Dana replied.
“Well, we’ll be there then.”
“Sounds great.” Said Jenny.
“Bette and I with child will be there, sure. I’m pretty sure Bette doesn’t have anything else lined up for Sunday.”
“That’s great. Kit said she’ll be able to make it, too. Why don’t you all come over about three. Don’t worry about food. I’ll have everything there. Okay, why don’t you tell me what you want to eat now and I’ll get your orders in.”
The girls gave Susan their order and she headed for the kitchen.
“No, Al, she hasn’t – well, she’s been friendlier since she worked on our backyard. Bette thought she might have been, as you say, a little more friendlier, but Susan explained she just misses being in a relationship. She apologized to Bette and me if she offended either one of us – so everything”
“Wait, Bette noticed something and said something to her?”
“Well, I don’t know what she said to her” Tina said.
“Oh, oh, she’s been ‘Porter Forewarned’. If that doesn’t get her to keep it to herself, she better book her flight back to
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Helena’s so damn arrogant!! I cannot WAIT for the day when she falls flat on her face. Thanks rc!
Susan really has no idea who she is effing with. Alice will definitely uncover the dirt; and not just the shit that Susan has so carefully planted (pun intended). Susan, had better step up her A game if she remotely thinks she came come between B ‘n ‘ T.
Dana is a sweetheart, but I’ll be happy when one of you FF writers gives her a damn clue. I’ve read so many stories where each character has been either taken out of their element or something was added that changes the overall person we’ve come to know and love. But Dana has never had a brain. I’d be happy if she could have 1 for at least 1 chapter….puhlezeeeee.
Helena is a weapon of mass destruction! She is going to be the cause of her own detonation…..ya heard it right here!…mark my words!
alice will find out all that is needed to know.. and shane will kick susan’s ass… and hellno will be crawling back into her hole… great stuff… please continue
crazy bitch..i hope she kick her ass even harder this time..great chapter post soon
Bette is the Best..great chapter…THANKS..
aLICE WILL FIND OUT MORE THAN sUSAN WILL THINK SHE WILL To heck with google she will dig deeper than than. Knowing Alice she might make a side trip to NJ. Helene will be her own down fall. Plus old candace will never have Bette except Bette foot up her A%% . So watch out for Shane,and Alice but more so Bette
Helena give it up. Hopefully our Ms. Alice keeps going with her instincts and keeps snooping around, cos all hells gonna break loose when this all hits the fan
“Helena, I think it best you keep walking – or perhaps you’d like to tell the men about the last fight you lost.”
“Helena, I think it best you keep walking – or perhaps you’d like to tell the men about the last fight you lost.” In a fit of laughter i pressed enter but this fucking cracked me up slap knee and all……Bette is so sexy!!!!!!grrrrr
lmao Bette sure can handle Helena. i hope alice snoops around and figures out what Susan is up to
k having spent the weekend with b&tf and watching the creative juices flowing from you authors. gawd. i dont know what you do to figure this shit out with the drama. honestly where do you go to come up with this deviousness on the part of these fucking crazy people. -_+ scares me just a little hahaha. some of these people just need to fall into black holes.
As unhealthy this story is for me and my hopeless romantic sense, I can’t help but keep glued to it! This literally makes my blood boil, to know that Hellena is out there playing puppet master to destroy Bette and Tina’s finally-happy life.
Please post again soon so I can get just as angry!
RC…I think Al is a good enough reporter to find out some of the truth about Susan. She may be crazy sometimes but when it comes to finding out secrets…no one can compete with Al. I think the talk that Bette had with Susan may have hurt given Susan a slight advantage, because now everyone isn’t as on guard as they previously were — except Al. Everyone thinks Susan has already been warned by Bette, so they assume she’s not a threat — but she IS. Helena needs to growth the F*%K up…she’s such a spoiled, stuck-up B@%$h. Thanks for the chapter.