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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 69
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Damn, the guys collectively thought, no cat fight.
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“Hey, girls, the usual all around?”
“Yeah, Susan, caffeine first with a capital C.” Al said.
“Rough night, Al?” Tina asked.
“HEY! What the ***** is that for?”
“All right, you two, you may as well just come out and say it already. I know we often don’t see things the same, but that doesn’t mean we’re blind.” Tina said.
“What? Whaddya mean?”
“Oh,
“Okay, okayDana and I – uh, Dana and I”
“Oh, Al, come on, just say it. Look at me. This is how it sounds. Dana and I are sleeping together. See, that wasn’t hard, was it?” Shane said.
Dana leaned her head on
“Yeah, she made me do it.” Al said.
“What? You kissed me first!”
“Oh, you just wanted me from the git go, Dana. Admit it.”
“But you came over to my house at three in the morning and kissed me..”
That’s only because I was getting the signals from you since I don’t know when”
“Girls, enough! You’re making me dizzy.” Tina admonished with a smile.
“I’m going to take Angelica in to see Kit and I’ll be right back.”
As Tina headed to Kit’s office, Susan was coming around the counter with their coffee. She smiled at Tina and said hi; Tina returned both in kind.
It wasn’t often that
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Helena’s so damn arrogant!! I cannot WAIT for the day when she falls flat on her face. Thanks rc!
Susan really has no idea who she is effing with. Alice will definitely uncover the dirt; and not just the shit that Susan has so carefully planted (pun intended). Susan, had better step up her A game if she remotely thinks she came come between B ‘n ‘ T.
Dana is a sweetheart, but I’ll be happy when one of you FF writers gives her a damn clue. I’ve read so many stories where each character has been either taken out of their element or something was added that changes the overall person we’ve come to know and love. But Dana has never had a brain. I’d be happy if she could have 1 for at least 1 chapter….puhlezeeeee.
Helena is a weapon of mass destruction! She is going to be the cause of her own detonation…..ya heard it right here!…mark my words!
alice will find out all that is needed to know.. and shane will kick susan’s ass… and hellno will be crawling back into her hole… great stuff… please continue
crazy bitch..i hope she kick her ass even harder this time..great chapter post soon
Bette is the Best..great chapter…THANKS..
aLICE WILL FIND OUT MORE THAN sUSAN WILL THINK SHE WILL To heck with google she will dig deeper than than. Knowing Alice she might make a side trip to NJ. Helene will be her own down fall. Plus old candace will never have Bette except Bette foot up her A%% . So watch out for Shane,and Alice but more so Bette
Helena give it up. Hopefully our Ms. Alice keeps going with her instincts and keeps snooping around, cos all hells gonna break loose when this all hits the fan
“Helena, I think it best you keep walking – or perhaps you’d like to tell the men about the last fight you lost.”
“Helena, I think it best you keep walking – or perhaps you’d like to tell the men about the last fight you lost.” In a fit of laughter i pressed enter but this fucking cracked me up slap knee and all……Bette is so sexy!!!!!!grrrrr
lmao Bette sure can handle Helena. i hope alice snoops around and figures out what Susan is up to
k having spent the weekend with b&tf and watching the creative juices flowing from you authors. gawd. i dont know what you do to figure this shit out with the drama. honestly where do you go to come up with this deviousness on the part of these fucking crazy people. -_+ scares me just a little hahaha. some of these people just need to fall into black holes.
As unhealthy this story is for me and my hopeless romantic sense, I can’t help but keep glued to it! This literally makes my blood boil, to know that Hellena is out there playing puppet master to destroy Bette and Tina’s finally-happy life.
Please post again soon so I can get just as angry!
RC…I think Al is a good enough reporter to find out some of the truth about Susan. She may be crazy sometimes but when it comes to finding out secrets…no one can compete with Al. I think the talk that Bette had with Susan may have hurt given Susan a slight advantage, because now everyone isn’t as on guard as they previously were — except Al. Everyone thinks Susan has already been warned by Bette, so they assume she’s not a threat — but she IS. Helena needs to growth the F*%K up…she’s such a spoiled, stuck-up B@%$h. Thanks for the chapter.