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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 69
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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 69
Previously
She looked up into the expanse of the night sky and watched as the worlds of planets and stars twinkled and gleamed noting their existence in the Universe.
and Tina knew in her heart and mind that her existence in this Universe revolved around the world she held in her arms
Her Bette.
Bette was in the main museum hall, once again, going over things with the carpenters. Christ, if they spent less time arguing with one another and more time listening to me and reading the plans, this freaking exhibit would be that much closer to being finished – little boys with power tools – ‘mine is bigger than yours’ even carries over to non-human objects with them.
James buzzed her about fifteen minutes ago to let her know the guys were nearly coming to blows – she better get out there.
Well, one thing to stop boys from fighting in the sandbox was to have Bette Porter approach them. If they knew she was a *****, it certainly didn’t matter – or perhaps it titillated them – because the squabbling stopped as each of them tried to preen themselves to be the one she would speak to first.
As she was in the middle of gently but firmly telling them to get their ***** together, in strolled Helena Peabody. She walked right over to them.
“Problems, Bette?”
“No,
“Umm, perhaps you should have had some female carpenters on the job. You don’t seem to have a problem getting them to work under you”
The men’s eyes were darting back and forth between the two. They’re both strong women, but one could tell by their expressions they clearly had their odds on Bette. And, of course, men being men, they were hoping to watch these two get into a hot, body-touching fight –
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Helena’s so damn arrogant!! I cannot WAIT for the day when she falls flat on her face. Thanks rc!
Susan really has no idea who she is effing with. Alice will definitely uncover the dirt; and not just the shit that Susan has so carefully planted (pun intended). Susan, had better step up her A game if she remotely thinks she came come between B ‘n ‘ T.
Dana is a sweetheart, but I’ll be happy when one of you FF writers gives her a damn clue. I’ve read so many stories where each character has been either taken out of their element or something was added that changes the overall person we’ve come to know and love. But Dana has never had a brain. I’d be happy if she could have 1 for at least 1 chapter….puhlezeeeee.
Helena is a weapon of mass destruction! She is going to be the cause of her own detonation…..ya heard it right here!…mark my words!
alice will find out all that is needed to know.. and shane will kick susan’s ass… and hellno will be crawling back into her hole… great stuff… please continue
crazy bitch..i hope she kick her ass even harder this time..great chapter post soon
Bette is the Best..great chapter…THANKS..
aLICE WILL FIND OUT MORE THAN sUSAN WILL THINK SHE WILL To heck with google she will dig deeper than than. Knowing Alice she might make a side trip to NJ. Helene will be her own down fall. Plus old candace will never have Bette except Bette foot up her A%% . So watch out for Shane,and Alice but more so Bette
Helena give it up. Hopefully our Ms. Alice keeps going with her instincts and keeps snooping around, cos all hells gonna break loose when this all hits the fan
“Helena, I think it best you keep walking – or perhaps you’d like to tell the men about the last fight you lost.”
“Helena, I think it best you keep walking – or perhaps you’d like to tell the men about the last fight you lost.” In a fit of laughter i pressed enter but this fucking cracked me up slap knee and all……Bette is so sexy!!!!!!grrrrr
lmao Bette sure can handle Helena. i hope alice snoops around and figures out what Susan is up to
k having spent the weekend with b&tf and watching the creative juices flowing from you authors. gawd. i dont know what you do to figure this shit out with the drama. honestly where do you go to come up with this deviousness on the part of these fucking crazy people. -_+ scares me just a little hahaha. some of these people just need to fall into black holes.
As unhealthy this story is for me and my hopeless romantic sense, I can’t help but keep glued to it! This literally makes my blood boil, to know that Hellena is out there playing puppet master to destroy Bette and Tina’s finally-happy life.
Please post again soon so I can get just as angry!
RC…I think Al is a good enough reporter to find out some of the truth about Susan. She may be crazy sometimes but when it comes to finding out secrets…no one can compete with Al. I think the talk that Bette had with Susan may have hurt given Susan a slight advantage, because now everyone isn’t as on guard as they previously were — except Al. Everyone thinks Susan has already been warned by Bette, so they assume she’s not a threat — but she IS. Helena needs to growth the F*%K up…she’s such a spoiled, stuck-up B@%$h. Thanks for the chapter.