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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 46
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“You mean I’m only the second woman to..”
“Yes, Tina, only the second woman to go down on me. And may I say for a straight girl, you get very high marks.”
“Wait, waitI’m straight?”
They both laughed. They made love throughout the night until exhaustion overtook them. It was a night neither of them would ever forget.
* * *
“Hey, we’re here, T.”
“Let’s go make some memories, baby.”
They went to the front desk and checked in. “Everything is as you requested, Ms. Porter.”
“Thank you.”
They were in the elevator riding up and Bette whispered in Tina’s ear:
“Je veux faire l’amour avec toi, jusqu’ ce que tu viennes dans ma bouche.”
“I don’t know what you just said but it made my knees go weak anyway.”
Bette put her lips close to Tina’s and let the breath from her words fall onto Tina’s lips, “I want to make love to you until I feel you come in my mouth.”
The elevator doors opened.
“Get the ***** key in that door.” Tina demanded.
Bette opened the door and let Tina go in first. She let out a small gasp and put her hand to her mouth. She was blown away.
The large sitting room was lit only with the soft golden light of candles. There were roses of every color in vases throughout the room. Rachmaninoff’s “The Rhapsody” was playing in the background. On the balcony was a table set for two. A cold dinner was undercover ready to be served. A bottle of Krug’s Clos du Mesnil was opened but still being chilled with a crystal bowl of the largest strawberries Tina had ever seen alongside it. At each setting a a beautiful crystal champagne glass filled with one of those large strawberries in it.
The bathroom and the bedroom were also only lit through candlelight. The glow from the candles seemed to dance along the walls and ceiling as shimmering, silent partners to the music. Rose petals were strewn in a path to the bed.
“It’s so beautiful, baby, it just takes my breath away. I feel as if I’m at the end of a rainbow with all its colors softly washing over me.
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THUD. That was amazing. We all know how hard writing the NC-17 scenes can be…but this was extraordinary. Thank you.
What can be said, hot, hot, hot.
Wow!
OMG, I can’t even breathe right now.
You captured everything you even thought you wanted to….Yea for your NC-17!!! More, More…tks
Sweet jesus what are you trying to do to us!…lol OH so hot im going back to read it again… it was truly beautiful thanks
Beautiful. Bette certainly knows how to treat her T. All that anticipation was worth the wait.
OMG..thanks now i cant work anymore.that was DAMN HOT!!!!!and Bette was really right oral sex It’s a very personal, intimate act to share with everyone..great fucking chapter Arce..thanks
Arce,
After all the build up that was truly a master-class on how to write a sensuous, sizzling and sexy scene.
The heat radiates from the screen as Bette and Tina enjoy the intimacies of their rekindling and reconnection at the most primal of levels.
I am having difficultly concentrating sufficiently to string a few words of praise together. Will definitely need a long cold shower tonight.
Blistering and breathtaking.
Please post real soon as I think Tina may need to pay back what she owes.
Your Loyal fan.
OMG,OMG!! That was super hot!!! Can you pls have an update by the time I hit the refresh button? otherwise am going to “die”……. seriously woman, it was beautiful and pls update again really, really soon!!
Let say that I qualify myself as a silent reader. I never comment any story until today. But your French sentence is too cute to be ignored. So when I first read Bette’s whisper “Je veux faire l’amour à vous jusqu’à ce que je me sens que vous entrez ma bouche.” I said to myself what? Wait a minute and read this again. I could not understand and said to myself oh well and I continued to read the story until the line Bette repeats in English what she just told Tina in French and then I figured what you have tried to say and no offense but it is really funny. French being my first language, I would like to propose you to write it that way instead: “Je veux faire l’amour avec toi, jusqu’à ce que tu viennes dans ma bouche.” I hope that you won’t be offended by my comment and please do not prevent you to continue using French in the future it is very sexy.
K
Wow, very hot chapter, just loved it.
Mission accomplished…and accomplished quite well I might add.
Goddammit! I get so intimidated when I see a “part 46” or whatever to a story I haven’t read before…but I also like to read new authors now and then, so I read this story today…now I have to read another 45 chapters… that was very well done; you do a great job of portraying their love and passion for one another. I’ve got some reading to do…It’s going to be a while before I finish harry potter… I’ll look for future posts! Thanks for writing.
steph thuded, and i’m sliding off my chair.hope you have insurance. lol. i didnt think it could get any hotter here in utah but dayum girl, its sizzling here. that was …. i dont even know what to call it, but it was. post soon
I fully agree with Steph8373’s fine comment : that was also one of the best NC-17 chapters I ever read.
Above all because two essential things were there : an amazingly anticipated, artful build up and true feelings’ colours all around the place until the readers’ hearts… That was magic.
Simply one of the NC-17 I’d recommend to any new writer here ! Bravo.
OMFG!!!! I actually had goose bumps reading this!!!! You captured their intensity perfectly…..Thank you
HOT doesn’t even cut it. Glad I am getting ready to leave and work out. Then cold shower. that was great! post soon.
I read alot of FF. Haven’t ever left a comment. Have to this time. There are chapters still to read, but the journey so far has left me wiping tears, then laughing, then holding my breath, because life should be so beautiful. Don’t know who you are, but I gotta say, you have a gift. thank you.
OH GOD… that was hot… we could feel the love between them… i could just see tina arching her back… thank you for this chapter.. i hope the night is not over… please let it not be over…. please continue
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I’m pretty much speechless. My goodness!
WOW! I am supposed to be cooking dinner while my wife takes a nap. Must never read while cooking again :)
Damn,I going to have to take a cold cold showder that was amazing. Mind blowing. Great.. Thank you
OMG…WOW…that was truly amazing and beautiful. It truly reflected their love. Thanks…please continue.
OMFG!!!! I can’t believe that I didn’t see this earlier, as I check the site frequently for updates. That was very hot, I’m heading for the COLD shower.
There is a time for Love and a time for Lust…they had both. Good things, uh…come, to those who wait – and six weeks was pushing the envelope for them both.
omg..omfg is all i can say
OMG! That was so LOVELY AND SO SWEET LOL! WHOA! WHOA! Beautiful Story I LOVE IT Thank you now I can’t sleep any more LOL! I’m just kidding I LOVE IT you put the SMILE ON MY FACE to read this AWESOME STORY Thanks Please post soon.