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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 46
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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 46
Previously
Bette could feel her passion, her desire, her want and her longing jostling into position as if runners on a track. They were all racing towards her T.
The starter’s pistol went off. The crowds stood – they went wild. They were whipped into a whirlwind of excitement. This would be a race like no otherand the crowds knew itthis race would have no losers. Passion, Desire, Want and Longing will all take First Place tonight
Kit and Shane were already at the house when Bette arrived home. Bette was a bit nervous about leaving Angelica – not with Kit and Shane – but just leaving her for the first time. Tina could read it on her face.
“You’re sure the two of you are okay staying overnight now? Because if you’re not, we’ll cancel..”
“Don’t you dare, baby sis. Look at her, she’s as happy as can be. You want your mommies to go have a nice night now, don’t you?” Kit was holding Angelica and rubbing her tummy as she was speaking. Angelica’s eyes were tuned into Kit’s mouth and she was smiling.
I don’t understand a word you’re sayingjust keep rubbing my tummy and making those soft soundsyeah, that’s the ticket.
Now Shane reached and took Angelica from Kit, held her up and was rubbing her face on her tummy saying, “I love this baby, yes, I do.” Angelica was still smiling and making happy baby sounds.
“Yay, I love thisthis is greatkeep it upbaby happy!”
“Babe, she’ll be all right. Look how happy she is.”
“Okay, okay. The numbers are on pad by the phone, my cell, Tina’s cell, the hotel”
“Yeah, yeah, we got everything. Now get the ***** out of here,” Shane said.
Bette and Tina got into the new midnight blue Saab SUV – Yes, the convertible was gone. It just wasn’t practical with a baby on board. They put their overnight bag in the back and they were on their way.
As they were driving, Tina leaned over put her hand on Bette’s thigh, her fingers traveling the cloth up closer to her crotch. At the same time she seductively blew the words into Bette’s ear: “You have no idea how ready I am for you”
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THUD. That was amazing. We all know how hard writing the NC-17 scenes can be…but this was extraordinary. Thank you.
What can be said, hot, hot, hot.
Wow!
OMG, I can’t even breathe right now.
You captured everything you even thought you wanted to….Yea for your NC-17!!! More, More…tks
Sweet jesus what are you trying to do to us!…lol OH so hot im going back to read it again… it was truly beautiful thanks
Beautiful. Bette certainly knows how to treat her T. All that anticipation was worth the wait.
OMG..thanks now i cant work anymore.that was DAMN HOT!!!!!and Bette was really right oral sex It’s a very personal, intimate act to share with everyone..great fucking chapter Arce..thanks
Arce,
After all the build up that was truly a master-class on how to write a sensuous, sizzling and sexy scene.
The heat radiates from the screen as Bette and Tina enjoy the intimacies of their rekindling and reconnection at the most primal of levels.
I am having difficultly concentrating sufficiently to string a few words of praise together. Will definitely need a long cold shower tonight.
Blistering and breathtaking.
Please post real soon as I think Tina may need to pay back what she owes.
Your Loyal fan.
OMG,OMG!! That was super hot!!! Can you pls have an update by the time I hit the refresh button? otherwise am going to “die”……. seriously woman, it was beautiful and pls update again really, really soon!!
Let say that I qualify myself as a silent reader. I never comment any story until today. But your French sentence is too cute to be ignored. So when I first read Bette’s whisper “Je veux faire l’amour à vous jusqu’à ce que je me sens que vous entrez ma bouche.” I said to myself what? Wait a minute and read this again. I could not understand and said to myself oh well and I continued to read the story until the line Bette repeats in English what she just told Tina in French and then I figured what you have tried to say and no offense but it is really funny. French being my first language, I would like to propose you to write it that way instead: “Je veux faire l’amour avec toi, jusqu’à ce que tu viennes dans ma bouche.” I hope that you won’t be offended by my comment and please do not prevent you to continue using French in the future it is very sexy.
K
Wow, very hot chapter, just loved it.
Mission accomplished…and accomplished quite well I might add.
Goddammit! I get so intimidated when I see a “part 46” or whatever to a story I haven’t read before…but I also like to read new authors now and then, so I read this story today…now I have to read another 45 chapters… that was very well done; you do a great job of portraying their love and passion for one another. I’ve got some reading to do…It’s going to be a while before I finish harry potter… I’ll look for future posts! Thanks for writing.
steph thuded, and i’m sliding off my chair.hope you have insurance. lol. i didnt think it could get any hotter here in utah but dayum girl, its sizzling here. that was …. i dont even know what to call it, but it was. post soon
I fully agree with Steph8373’s fine comment : that was also one of the best NC-17 chapters I ever read.
Above all because two essential things were there : an amazingly anticipated, artful build up and true feelings’ colours all around the place until the readers’ hearts… That was magic.
Simply one of the NC-17 I’d recommend to any new writer here ! Bravo.
OMFG!!!! I actually had goose bumps reading this!!!! You captured their intensity perfectly…..Thank you
HOT doesn’t even cut it. Glad I am getting ready to leave and work out. Then cold shower. that was great! post soon.
I read alot of FF. Haven’t ever left a comment. Have to this time. There are chapters still to read, but the journey so far has left me wiping tears, then laughing, then holding my breath, because life should be so beautiful. Don’t know who you are, but I gotta say, you have a gift. thank you.
OH GOD… that was hot… we could feel the love between them… i could just see tina arching her back… thank you for this chapter.. i hope the night is not over… please let it not be over…. please continue
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I’m pretty much speechless. My goodness!
WOW! I am supposed to be cooking dinner while my wife takes a nap. Must never read while cooking again :)
Damn,I going to have to take a cold cold showder that was amazing. Mind blowing. Great.. Thank you
OMG…WOW…that was truly amazing and beautiful. It truly reflected their love. Thanks…please continue.
OMFG!!!! I can’t believe that I didn’t see this earlier, as I check the site frequently for updates. That was very hot, I’m heading for the COLD shower.
There is a time for Love and a time for Lust…they had both. Good things, uh…come, to those who wait – and six weeks was pushing the envelope for them both.
omg..omfg is all i can say
OMG! That was so LOVELY AND SO SWEET LOL! WHOA! WHOA! Beautiful Story I LOVE IT Thank you now I can’t sleep any more LOL! I’m just kidding I LOVE IT you put the SMILE ON MY FACE to read this AWESOME STORY Thanks Please post soon.