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Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 46
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Bette’s insides felt as if she were in a plane that just did a vertical drop of 10,000 feet. Bette knew if Tina was as ready and eager as she, this was going to be a night long remembered.
Bette called the hotel to tell them they should be there in about fifteen minutes.
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Tina had been waiting a long time for today and tonight’s anticipated activities. The wait was long but filled with baby time and sleep. She and Bette always found time for tenderness in kissing and holding one another – and sometimes a bit more than that so she could ease Bette’s wait a bit. This past week though something inside of her switched gears and hot desire and imaginings flooded her thoughts daily.
There were the imaginings of their unbridled lust-laced want and need to consume one another’s desire, stirred within their bodies, building the bonfire internally that would detonate as orgasms in their bodies’ shattering releases of their love.
She sat back in her seat, turned and just gazed at Bette and smiled. Her mind shifted into memory mode. She closed her eyes and reminisced through mental words.
Each time they made love was special to Tina. That’s what amazed her right from the very first time Bette took her on this cosmic journey of woman loving woman. It’s true what they say about always remembering your first time, be it with a man or a woman. Tina remembered her first time having *****. She was eighteen and he was twenty-one. She remembered enjoying it but also having the feeling, ‘well, I got that over with and it was okay.’
With all her lovers up to and including Eric she enjoyed their sexual activity but she didn’t ever recall ‘mind blowing’ being an adjective in her description. And she didn’t ever remember the euphoria one felt of falling in love so deeply you must remember to take your next breath juxtaposed with your breathing so rapid and your heart pounding so hard, you thought you would explode
until Bette Porter kissed her. She remembered stepping back from that kiss, looking into Bette’s eyes and realizing she wasn’t breathing. Bette’s smile kick started her lung activity once again. Yes, she would live to hopefully feel those lips again.
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THUD. That was amazing. We all know how hard writing the NC-17 scenes can be…but this was extraordinary. Thank you.
What can be said, hot, hot, hot.
Wow!
OMG, I can’t even breathe right now.
You captured everything you even thought you wanted to….Yea for your NC-17!!! More, More…tks
Sweet jesus what are you trying to do to us!…lol OH so hot im going back to read it again… it was truly beautiful thanks
Beautiful. Bette certainly knows how to treat her T. All that anticipation was worth the wait.
OMG..thanks now i cant work anymore.that was DAMN HOT!!!!!and Bette was really right oral sex It’s a very personal, intimate act to share with everyone..great fucking chapter Arce..thanks
Arce,
After all the build up that was truly a master-class on how to write a sensuous, sizzling and sexy scene.
The heat radiates from the screen as Bette and Tina enjoy the intimacies of their rekindling and reconnection at the most primal of levels.
I am having difficultly concentrating sufficiently to string a few words of praise together. Will definitely need a long cold shower tonight.
Blistering and breathtaking.
Please post real soon as I think Tina may need to pay back what she owes.
Your Loyal fan.
OMG,OMG!! That was super hot!!! Can you pls have an update by the time I hit the refresh button? otherwise am going to “die”……. seriously woman, it was beautiful and pls update again really, really soon!!
Let say that I qualify myself as a silent reader. I never comment any story until today. But your French sentence is too cute to be ignored. So when I first read Bette’s whisper “Je veux faire l’amour à vous jusqu’à ce que je me sens que vous entrez ma bouche.” I said to myself what? Wait a minute and read this again. I could not understand and said to myself oh well and I continued to read the story until the line Bette repeats in English what she just told Tina in French and then I figured what you have tried to say and no offense but it is really funny. French being my first language, I would like to propose you to write it that way instead: “Je veux faire l’amour avec toi, jusqu’à ce que tu viennes dans ma bouche.” I hope that you won’t be offended by my comment and please do not prevent you to continue using French in the future it is very sexy.
K
Wow, very hot chapter, just loved it.
Mission accomplished…and accomplished quite well I might add.
Goddammit! I get so intimidated when I see a “part 46” or whatever to a story I haven’t read before…but I also like to read new authors now and then, so I read this story today…now I have to read another 45 chapters… that was very well done; you do a great job of portraying their love and passion for one another. I’ve got some reading to do…It’s going to be a while before I finish harry potter… I’ll look for future posts! Thanks for writing.
steph thuded, and i’m sliding off my chair.hope you have insurance. lol. i didnt think it could get any hotter here in utah but dayum girl, its sizzling here. that was …. i dont even know what to call it, but it was. post soon
I fully agree with Steph8373’s fine comment : that was also one of the best NC-17 chapters I ever read.
Above all because two essential things were there : an amazingly anticipated, artful build up and true feelings’ colours all around the place until the readers’ hearts… That was magic.
Simply one of the NC-17 I’d recommend to any new writer here ! Bravo.
OMFG!!!! I actually had goose bumps reading this!!!! You captured their intensity perfectly…..Thank you
HOT doesn’t even cut it. Glad I am getting ready to leave and work out. Then cold shower. that was great! post soon.
I read alot of FF. Haven’t ever left a comment. Have to this time. There are chapters still to read, but the journey so far has left me wiping tears, then laughing, then holding my breath, because life should be so beautiful. Don’t know who you are, but I gotta say, you have a gift. thank you.
OH GOD… that was hot… we could feel the love between them… i could just see tina arching her back… thank you for this chapter.. i hope the night is not over… please let it not be over…. please continue
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I’m pretty much speechless. My goodness!
WOW! I am supposed to be cooking dinner while my wife takes a nap. Must never read while cooking again :)
Damn,I going to have to take a cold cold showder that was amazing. Mind blowing. Great.. Thank you
OMG…WOW…that was truly amazing and beautiful. It truly reflected their love. Thanks…please continue.
OMFG!!!! I can’t believe that I didn’t see this earlier, as I check the site frequently for updates. That was very hot, I’m heading for the COLD shower.
There is a time for Love and a time for Lust…they had both. Good things, uh…come, to those who wait – and six weeks was pushing the envelope for them both.
omg..omfg is all i can say
OMG! That was so LOVELY AND SO SWEET LOL! WHOA! WHOA! Beautiful Story I LOVE IT Thank you now I can’t sleep any more LOL! I’m just kidding I LOVE IT you put the SMILE ON MY FACE to read this AWESOME STORY Thanks Please post soon.