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    Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Two (a HYD-inspired fic)

     

    “Gaaaaaaaah!” Alice choked out, her chest heaving up and down as she greedily sucked in air. “Why the fuck does you hand smell funky?!”

     

    Shane froze, a deer in headlights look in her face.

     

    Silence descended upon the table as everyone stared curiously at her, forgetting all about the paper.

     

    It took another second before everything clicked into place.

     

    “Holy fucking shit..!” Alice shrieked, completely appalled. “Ewwwwwww! Who?!”

     

    Shane chewed the tip of her thumb and mumbled feebly. “Cheryl..”

     

    “The girl from the club last week?”

     

    “Yeah..”

     

    “You were with her last night?”

     

    Shane nodded. “And this morning.”

     

    Alice exhaled loudly, a little exasperated. She hated slobs. “Didn’t you even wash your hands?”

     

    “I did..”

     

    “Then why is she still there?” She motioned to her friend’s balled hands with her eyes.

     

    Shane sighed, a defeated look washed over her young features. She rubbed her nose, resembling a kid who was being told off for being naughty. “I can’t scrub her off. I’ve tried everything but her funk’s too funky or something. It doesn’t just linger, it clings on like a bitch in heat.”

     

    Bette snorted and Sam almost choked on her drink.

     

    “What does she smell like? Stinky tuna?” Bette couldn’t help but ask. She chuckled, watching Alice spraying her hanky with perfume and rubbing her face with it.

     

    “Worse.” The blonde grumbled, giving Shane a pitiful look. “She smells like a dead rat.”

     

    “Ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwww…” Bette and Sam made a disgusted face.

     

    Shane smiled weakly, mortified at the sudden turn in conversation. Why the heck did she have to bring her hand in close proximity to Alice’s face?

     

    “Are you gonna keep seeing her till Sunday?”

     

    “Yeah, as usual.” No sense in deviating from the norm when it was already Friday.

     

    “Gross! If I were you, one whiff of her peeper and I’d wisely run away. That girl might have an STD.” Alice shuddered.

     

    “No, she’s clean. She just smells bad.” Shane said calmly, though she was sinking deeper into her chair.

     

    “Bad? She makes a septic tank smell like roses!” The blonde wrinkled her nose in distaste.

     

    Sam looked at her friend in awe. She can’t imagine herself in Shane’s shoes. She had nothing against hot and dirty sex.. but that Cheryl girl sounded really dirty, and not in a good way. More like revoltingly so. “How do you do it? How do you have sex with her?”

    Comments

    1. This story is so funny and touching at the same time. Loved Ken’s freedom at the beginning. I hope Tina makes the right decision, not just her future that depends on it. Please post soon.

    2. WOW!!!! I sure missed this fic-MY fav fic at that & man U did not dissapoint. It was hot & funny all rolled into 1. I love Tina & Bette’s study prepartions-Great update…. Thanks…

    3. Happy to see this post. Now Tina has a hard decision to make, but she should talk to Bette about whats going on in her mind. Thanks Great Chapter!!! PPS

    4. i think bette has a great idear for a book about studying… dam just think about the better grades we all could of got during school… i do hope tina makes the right choice… and in his way melvin is trying to do the right thing… PPS

    5. Congrats on passing, Alchemy! Hope everything works out just as you wish. I am beyond doing a happy dance seeing your post and loved the chapter. I cannot quit laughing thinking about Shane’s stink finger. I had tears rolling down my cheeks while letting out a nice belly laugh. So freakin’ funny. Good to see Ken and Melvin working together… seems Bette will be a yalie after all.

    6. OMG I LMAO as always but the ending got to me…. how sad.. the choice Tina has to make without Bette’s knowledge. They are all so funny together i just can’t see them apart!! no separation (puppy eyes) :) PPS

    7. You’re back! And with an awesome update as well. Tina’s got a hard decision to make… but I think she, and Bette, will come to the right one in the end. Ken’s advice was pretty sound. Loved the chapter, Alchemy, thanks for posting. (and congrats on passing!)

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