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Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Fifteen (based loosely on HYD: Returns)
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So she pushed it. She pushed the accelerator down, grinned broadly when the engine roared. Where was the harm in it? For some peculiar reason, no one seemed to traverse this road but she. No tourists, no truckers, not even state police.
She wanted to see just how powerful this car was. There was nothing wrong with that, right? Freddie, her trusted mechanic, had marveled at her newest baby when the collector she met in Maine delivered it four days ago at the Porter Family’s east coast home in Weschester County. He claimed that it was his favorite among her arsenal of old cars; but she could only laugh at his giddy semi-orgasmic form, after all, he was prone to say that whenever she wheeled in a new ride and asked him to fix it up for her. But she had to agree though, this particular one was special. It was love at first sight for her; the moment she laid eyes on this red 1950′s classic at the car show, she knew she had to have it. Sam had barely finished reading the catalogue to see what model it was when she she left her side, trudged towards the owner, tapped him on the shoulder and gave him an offer any logical person couldn’t refuse. When they shook hands and the verbal agreement was sealed, she went back to her bestfriend and right then and there, christened her newest car and gave it a name. Sam could only shake her head and smile, and in a bout of momentary ignorance, had asked her why she had named it after a country. She stared at her bestfriend for a second, checking to see if she was pulling her leg. But seeing that Sam was not, she rolled her eyes and flicked the girl playfully on the forehead. I didn’t name it after a country you dolt, she remembered herself saying. I named it after ‘us’. The look Sam gave her after she said that would have been amusing had she not been annoyed by her slow pick up. Us? Then shouldn’t it be SaBette or I dunno, BetSam? Sam asked, earning an exasperated sigh from her. ‘Us’ Samantha. Not us. She motioned to the two of them. Sam could only scratch the back of her head sheepishly, and when realization dawned on her after a minute or two, uttered a loud: Oooh I get it! Before rushing after her chuckling self and draping an arm around her shoulder.
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My eyes bulge out of their sockets…WOW…54 pages. Wow, I can only bow in admiration. Thank you. On the story, both are having a hellion on the break time, man I am having a hellion on the break time and not even part of the story. I guess we havnet seen the last of the wannabe musician back. What happens next? ;)
thanks alch…another brilliant update and i actually took a bathroom break just like you said lol. i’m just afraid that since this is a long update it might take you longer to write the next? hope not, looking forward to it.
You made me so happy on a Monday morning! That was a hard feat for anybody else but you’vr done it! :) Onto the next chapter… Thanks!
Close to 15 and 3/4 LOL. That was a beauty of a car. I love toblerone! Now I must move on to the next post. Thanks alch.
wow..that was epic! But well worth the read…thank you for that ray of sunlight by way of Bette’s memory…and of course for the multitude of “..” this was a good one..
I did a little happy dance when I saw your post! I have to say the chapters were a little short…LMAO! Such a gut wrenching time for B & T. Beautifully written!
Great chapter!Now I think I’ll start loving Mondays:)Thank you for a fabulous update.:D
Thank you Alchy for such a wonderful and long read! You did a great job of weaving the scenes together. I love the Tina-Ken teasing, Bette – Sonja “recovery/addiction” moment, 3-step recovery for Tina, Sam/Bette’s conversation and the Tibette car. So very, very, very clever!!!! Ok…I sense that “Keith Arden” is somehow connected to a certain “Kate Arden.” Hm…looks like a black cloud on the Tibette reunion horizon. But…I cling to the hope that Ken’s almost secret sharing of perhaps an engagement is in the future. You know that small ray of hope is what is bringing your readers back!!!!! Get some rest Alchy…get your creative juices a break but come back real soon…we need our Alchy fix!
Wow that was great! Excuse me while I read the next part. I will say your bette is soooooo sweet
Your story always satisfies, Alchemy. You get some of everything in here, and it’s all fab. I loved this chapter. Here’s hoping that Tina can stick to #3 on her list, and I hope Bette can do the same. Great, great update, Alchemy. Thank you! :)
Brilliant chapter Alchemy – you always take such care with detail, emotion, characterization – amazing ;-) As someone said abt the previous chapter – one thing Bette still needs to learn is how to take Tina off that pedestal and treat her like an equal. Relationships mean sharing – both good things and bad – IMO that’s the biggest repair they need, the only truly important one. I loved seeing Tina & Ken again – what a great father daughter dynamic they have. I see Tina is still eating her pain, haha! The flashback was great and so was the bittersweet ending.
That was awesome, love seeing Ken and Tina together again.