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    Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Eighteen (Based loosely on HYD: Returns)

    Story written on September 13, 2009 by Alchemy10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=74253
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    Match maid in heaven..

     

    “Don’t worry, I’ll work hard on removing these kinks for you..” The redhead all but purred, smiling a Cheshire-like grin – one that a preoccupied Bette didn’t notice but the lone blonde in the room certainly did.

     

    Tina frowned, her hazel eyes zeroing in on the fingers touching her girlfriend a little too intimately for her own liking. Great, first Jill and now this bimbo. She was beginning to develop a deep dislike for redheads. “Excuse me,” She cleared her throat, tearing her gaze away from the sight before she clawed at her eyes – or the girl’s annoying face. “Miss Bette?”

     

    The heiress clenched her jaw, trying to squash the jolt of electricity that went up and down her spine at the sound of Tina’s melodious beckon. Shit. Miss Bette. The way those words rolled off her lips! What a turn on. Except for Sonja, she never really paid much attention to maids. This was one was special – very special. “What do you want?” She growled, masking her inner battle with a look of irritation, hoping that Tina wouldn’t see right through her facade.

     

    “Your dinner’s ready at the table ma’am.”

     

    “I’ll eat after I get my nails done.” Bette replied, still staring at the television, purposely ignoring Tina. “How much longer?” She asked the lady working on her nails.

     

    “Just one more and we’re done Miss Porter.”

     

    “Great, make it fast.” Bette ordered, hearing her stomach growling in hunger. “Ooohh..” A throaty moan escaped from her lips when the masseuse scored big and hit the right spot on her shoulder. “That feels goo.. OW!” She suddenly yelped in pain, sitting up abruptly and surprising everyone in the room with her violent outburst. “Dammit, that fucking hurt!”

     

    “I’m sorry, ma’am.. I’m really sorry..” The masseuse apologized profusely, beet red and sweating bullets. “I didn’t notice you had bruises there..” She pointed a shaky finger at Bette’s neck and shoulder.

     

    What bruises?

     

    “You’re not the only one.” Bette lifted the strap on her tanktop and examined her skin. There was an impressive collection of penny-shaped bruises on her right shoulder and the lower part of her neck. Why didn’t she notice them earlier? She squinted her eyes at Tina – who was looking at everything else except her. “Kennard..”

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    2. this installment had me literally wheezing with laughter! so many one-liners i had to read again, they were just so good. so funny and sweet, our two stubborn soulmates – the maid scenario was a tricky proposition and you pulled it off brilliantly :-) this story is one of a kind. belated birthday wishes alchemy – i hope it was a great one – and i can’t wait for the next post

    3. You did it again alch. I wish I can do what you do. Hilarious! Need to get rid of shawty and red, something tells me they’ll be showing in the Hamptons. Awesom are you. I’m not worth, I’m not worthy! Happy B-day!

    4. This was the first I have read of your story. I read this whole post in one sitting. I will have to go back and read all the other post. Nothing else is going to being getting done around here until I’m caught up. :)This was crazy fun in places. Bette is so mean and sarcastic but this has been a fun read. Thanks for the post.

    6. I’ m very happy that you didn’ t write for a while for good things. Happy birthday Alchemy (although I’ m belated)! I hope you had a great time and a lot of drinks! As for the story, another perfect chapter as always. Thank you very much for that story. I have said it before and I will say it again: It’ s my favourite. Thank you girl. I can’ t wait for the next one. Many kisses.

    8. Happy B’day Alchy!!! May you have a wonderful upcoming year – and thank you for your gift of writing for us. First…LOL!Secondly…ROFL!Thirdly…ROFLMAO!!!!!I love fun-Alchy! (yes…I know…you had to do the drama…but you are the Mt. Everest-of-fanfic humor!” I laughed so hard…my dog started to bark with all the excitement and joy! You are simply C-O-N-T-A-G-I-O-U-S-L-Y F-U-N!!!!!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! *btw…what a tease with the ‘almost kiss.’ :)I love Tina when she’s all “weed-like.” Brings out the flirt in Bette. So sweet! PPS!

    9. Happy Birthday Alchemy, wishing you all the best my friend. OMG that was so freaking funny and sweet, B&T are killing us here with their stbborn and crazy way there lol. Please post more, thanks!

    10. Oh I haven’t laughed that hard in quite a while. Alchemy that was just an amazing chapter, all of it. There are so many examples of your unique humor from Bette’s admission of her love for Tina to Tina’s drooling conversation with Bette concerning her breath. Awesome. Thanks for posting I loved the read.

    16. It took me 6 days to have the courage to read this Alch, I couldn’t bear to see them hurting each other that much. Then I wanted to see at what level you were so I finally read it. I am so glad I’ve done it BECAUSE I love it almost back to what I love about your story: LOVE and CARE. Thank you, thank you, thank you and a late HAPPY BIRTHDAY

    17. And funny funny funny. It just like I like it woowoo. It was funny even if they are not back back together yet thy=ey are togethr right??? It was great.

    18. Happy Belated Birthday, Alch! I feel like I’m the one getting the present with this chapter. Your humor is exceptional…had me laughing like a loon the whole way through. Too many good parts to mention starting with Bette’s horrific morning breath to Tina’s asphyxiatingly tight new uniform. Just brilliant!!

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