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    Just The Girl 2.0 – Chapter Eighteen (Based loosely on HYD: Returns)

    Story written on September 13, 2009 by Alchemy10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=74253
    Author Notes:

    Match maid in heaven..

     

    “Which is?”

     

    “I walked to the set.”

     

    “You always walk.”

     

    “I do.”

     

    “That’s your point?”

     

    “Not entirely. You see, I walked. Melissa took the bus, our dear director drove up in his ugly Cadillac, the producer hitched a ride with the service van, one of the grips rode a bike, but you..” He pointed an accusatory finger at the blonde. “You arrived in a flashy chauffeured Bentley with a bodyguard riding shotgun and another one carrying your stuff.” He narrowed his eyes at his friend. “That’s my point. So is there something you like to tell me Blondie?”

     

    “Nothing.” Tina played coy.

     

    “You left the condo in a rush last night..”

     

    “I was in a hurry.”

     

    “Where did you move to?”

     

    “Weschester..”

     

    The guy whistled. “The houses and condos there are pretty far up your price range..”

     

    “You think so?”

     

    “Know so.” He said matter-of-fact. “I think I know someone who lives there..”

     

    “Yeah?” Tina purposely kept her back on Gabe, focusing on the script on her lap.

     

    “Does the name Porter ring a bell?”

     

    “Maybe..”

     

    “You staying at her place?”

     

    “I could be.” Tina answered cryptically.

     

    “Hey, you crashed in our couch for days. Least you could do is give me a non-vague answer. A simple yes or no would do.” Gabe wagged a finger, using the gratitude card on his friend. “So? Are you staying at Bette’s house? Or mansion? Or palace? Or whatever?”

     

    Tina sighed. “Yes.”

     

    “That wasn’t so hard, right?” Throwing the garbage bag carelessly near the door, Gabe gave up on fixing Keith’s mess and jumped beside Tina on the couch, giving her a knowing smirk. “I should have known that when you said you found a new place in such short notice that you finally patched things up with Bette..”

     

    “We didn’t really fix things yet.” Tina sighed, highlighting Keith’s notes on today’s script for the director, ignoring the look of surprise on Gabe’s face.

     

    “So you’re not back together?”

     

    “We never broke up.” Tina clarified for the hundredth time.

     

    “I know. But you guys are not back back together like before?”

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    2. this installment had me literally wheezing with laughter! so many one-liners i had to read again, they were just so good. so funny and sweet, our two stubborn soulmates – the maid scenario was a tricky proposition and you pulled it off brilliantly :-) this story is one of a kind. belated birthday wishes alchemy – i hope it was a great one – and i can’t wait for the next post

    3. You did it again alch. I wish I can do what you do. Hilarious! Need to get rid of shawty and red, something tells me they’ll be showing in the Hamptons. Awesom are you. I’m not worth, I’m not worthy! Happy B-day!

    4. This was the first I have read of your story. I read this whole post in one sitting. I will have to go back and read all the other post. Nothing else is going to being getting done around here until I’m caught up. :)This was crazy fun in places. Bette is so mean and sarcastic but this has been a fun read. Thanks for the post.

    6. I’ m very happy that you didn’ t write for a while for good things. Happy birthday Alchemy (although I’ m belated)! I hope you had a great time and a lot of drinks! As for the story, another perfect chapter as always. Thank you very much for that story. I have said it before and I will say it again: It’ s my favourite. Thank you girl. I can’ t wait for the next one. Many kisses.

    8. Happy B’day Alchy!!! May you have a wonderful upcoming year – and thank you for your gift of writing for us. First…LOL!Secondly…ROFL!Thirdly…ROFLMAO!!!!!I love fun-Alchy! (yes…I know…you had to do the drama…but you are the Mt. Everest-of-fanfic humor!” I laughed so hard…my dog started to bark with all the excitement and joy! You are simply C-O-N-T-A-G-I-O-U-S-L-Y F-U-N!!!!!! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! *btw…what a tease with the ‘almost kiss.’ :)I love Tina when she’s all “weed-like.” Brings out the flirt in Bette. So sweet! PPS!

    9. Happy Birthday Alchemy, wishing you all the best my friend. OMG that was so freaking funny and sweet, B&T are killing us here with their stbborn and crazy way there lol. Please post more, thanks!

    10. Oh I haven’t laughed that hard in quite a while. Alchemy that was just an amazing chapter, all of it. There are so many examples of your unique humor from Bette’s admission of her love for Tina to Tina’s drooling conversation with Bette concerning her breath. Awesome. Thanks for posting I loved the read.

    16. It took me 6 days to have the courage to read this Alch, I couldn’t bear to see them hurting each other that much. Then I wanted to see at what level you were so I finally read it. I am so glad I’ve done it BECAUSE I love it almost back to what I love about your story: LOVE and CARE. Thank you, thank you, thank you and a late HAPPY BIRTHDAY

    17. And funny funny funny. It just like I like it woowoo. It was funny even if they are not back back together yet thy=ey are togethr right??? It was great.

    18. Happy Belated Birthday, Alch! I feel like I’m the one getting the present with this chapter. Your humor is exceptional…had me laughing like a loon the whole way through. Too many good parts to mention starting with Bette’s horrific morning breath to Tina’s asphyxiatingly tight new uniform. Just brilliant!!

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