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    Journeys – Ch 11 – “And remember the truth that once was spoken…”

    Story written on February 2, 2006 by TMerlin.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=59383
    Author Notes:

    Bette and Tina find an ending and a beginning.

     

    BETTE-  (Her eyes had glazed over)  “Breakfast?  II was going tobutsureyeah”  (She bit her lip.)

     

    TINA-  “Ok, I’ll just get dressed and go to it.  By the way, do you have an extra tooth brush?”

     

    BETTE-  (Her mouth is slightly ‘ajar’ during this entire time)  “Toothbrush?”

     

    TINA-  (She smiles.)  “Yesto brush my teeth.”

     

    BETTE-  “Yeah, sureit’sover at theI’ll show you”  (She passes Tina to head over to the bathroom and as she’s doing so, Bette raises her hand to her foreheada bit sweaty at this juncture, given the rise in temperature.)

     

    TINA-  “Are you ok?”

     

    BETTE-  “Ok?  Yesyes, fine.  Here you go.”  (She extends the toothbrush.)

     

    TINA-  (She grazes Bette’s hand as she takes the brush.)  “Great, thanks.”  (She exits.)

     

    BETTE- “You’re welcome.”  (She raises both hands to her face and rubs it.)  ‘What the hec was THAT?  In a towelshe’s standing there in a towelfrigI’m going to lose it.’

     

    (Bette gets dressed quickly, as though doing it faster was somehow safer.  A short time later, now both dressed, they’re in the kitchen.  Bette is pouring coffee.  They are opposite one another and standing near the counter.)

     

    BETTE-  (Handing her coffee)  “Here you go”

     

    TINA-  “Thanks.  So, how about pancakes?”

     

    BETTE-  “I have a better idea!”

     

    TINA-  (Smiles)  “What?”

     

    BETTE-  “Omelets!  I make these killer omelets.  Alice showed me howbut don’t you dare tell her as it is she can’t stop saying how good she is at it!”

     

    TINA-  “She’s hilarious.”

     

    BETTE-  “She is actually.  You know, her and I used to date.”  (She looks at Tina and then back down to her omelet preparation.)

     

    TINA-  “Did you stay together for long?”

     

    BETTE-  “No, it was brief.  But we became good friends.  I’m glad we did.  I’m glad, crazy though she is, that she’s still in my life.”

     

    TINA-  “That’s great that you salvaged a hopefully life-long friendship.  What happened?  It just didn’t work?”

     

    BETTE-  “It just wasn’t meant to be.  Our personalities didn’t quite mesh on that level…as lovers.  I’m surprised we lasted as long as we did.  It never really did feel that it was something that would last.  Oddly enough, it lasted longer than most of my relationships.”

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    3. Ah, here is the dream again, wonderful! I have to say that this story has a very nice flow. As I read, I feel as though I am walking on a beach…swaying in a breeze…which I love to do, so this is like a welcome respite. It is moody, yet very sweet. Better still, it is lithe and melodic as if set to a very fluid, graceful tempo. I note that you use musical terms like cadence…rhythm…refrain…lyric. Are you a musician by any chance?

    6. Speachless, awesome, breathtaking, sureal, Hot…. It is so amazing to read this story, Halfway thru I realized it’s PG13….it was hot like nc17….Thank you for not rushing this story, the detail is fun to read, your writing is captivating…pls continue…thankyou!!!!!

    9. OK, now you did it. You went a wrote the best, the slowest, the sexiest, most intense first time love scene this site has seen. Now you’ve set the standard. Others writers have written beautiful scenes as well, but what I really love about your story, the whole time, is that you took your time. Come on, you practically wrote a chapter on their first kiss! And it was great! Now another chapter on them simpling touch and finally making love. Very, Very well done. I don’t know if this is the end of the story, it almost sounded like it was, but I’d like to be selfish and say I’d love to read how you would describe what it feels like for Tina to make love to Bette for the first time-as only you can do.

    13. I just got all caught up I ADORE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love the dynamic between bette, tina i love this story plase post soon!!!!!!!!!!!

    15. That was truly the most beautiful chapter I have ever read. I cannot begin to find the words to express the beauty of this chapter. Simply amazing. The passion, intensity, and love clearly stated in the words was breath taking. I’m in awe. “And remember the truth that once was spoken…to love another person is to see the face of God.” Never was a truth so honestly stated. Bette’s dream was so significant to where she is emotionally. It symbolizes her seeing her past and putting it behind her, for her future is with Tina. Love is truly the greatest gift we are blessed to have. It isn’t something we can create, own, or disregard…it simply is. It is a powerful source that can give and take, but when it’s true it is a blessing. I cannot begin to thank you for such an amazingly beautiful chapter. I was deeply touched by it’s beauty. Love experienced for the first time is so overwhelming…it envelops you totally and completely. You become connected to the other person and it’s amazing. It’s…ahhh. It just is. ;-)

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