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In the Begining- Form As In a Work Of Art chapters 1 and 2
“And what makes you so sure that she wouldn’t turn me? Are you so confident in your skills that you think she couldn’t turn me out? She jokes back but she to was half way serious sipping from her glass of tea.
Eric didn’t know what to say he just shrugs his shoulders.
So attending the Friday opening was more than just being a show piece for Eric, Tina wants to see the woman that Eric keeps talking about. The woman he couldn’t have no matter how much he wanted her. The woman Eric says could have any woman she wanted, so he jokes again, ”Tina you should be careful Friday if you aren‘t interested in a threesome.”
Friday evening
When she looked into those deep dark eyes of Bette that Friday she knew, she knew something that Eric didn’t. She knew that Bette wanted her. And she knew that she herself was drawn to Bette. Was it her beauty? Her confidence? ‘Oh my god that smile. And her grace as she works the room. I even love her voice. My voice, I could barely speak once I touched her hand when Eric introduced me to her’.
She was being very cautious to not let Eric sense her attraction to Bette. Actually she was a little uncomfortable with it. She had never seriously been attracted to a woman as an adult. She had looked. But what woman hasn’t looked as another woman just to admire their beauty. But this was different, something inside of Tina lit up. Her heart raced and she felt warm all over. Bette eyes told her things. They told Tina who she really was.
‘Could I really be into women’. Tina thinks ‘Or is it just this woman.’
Eric introduces them earlier.
‘Oh god I can’t do this. Eric says she’s a player’ Tina thought ‘And there is no way in hell that I am going to cave into Eric’s threesome idea or be another notch on this woman‘s belt. But god is she ever beautiful. All evening I’ve been stealing glances at her. And I can just feel her watching me. I’ve caught her a few times staring my way and each time my stomach does flips. I quickly avert my eyes to focus on a painting or at the people in front of me. But I can’t deny that I am attracted. And very much so.’
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Give me more of this.
take long deep breaths ….
Wow, my first story is up :) This feels good. :)
That was hot! We want more! :)
Welcome..that was so very yummy! yes more please…thank you..
Ahh, well I was looking forward to this post and was MORE than happy to have read it!!! Kim, you have done a fine job building this storyline and bringing it to…er…QUITE a climax! Hee Hee. I’d VERY much like to read more of your creativity. Thanks once more for sharing your talent with all of us readers. ;- )
That was HOT!
WHOA!
Well I am still learning how to use this darn editor them use to post stories. It’s a bit confusing so some of you probably read an imcomplete story. When I “saved” it I thought it “just saved it” but it posted the next chapter I was starting to write when I went to save it. I don’t want to put anything out there unfinished, so I deleted it. I’ll try cutting and pasting again. I had lot of trouble with that earlier. That’s why you got two chapters in one. These darn computers, don’t you just love them?
Great start! Thank you! Please continue :)
More please. Thanks for sharing your gift.
Well Journey, if this was your first attempt, you did one hell of a job. Your writing is good and your take on the beginning of their relationaship is interesting. I’ll enjoy seeing where you’ll take us on that 7 year journey.
This is good start and hot, like it. Please post more. thanks!
Bravo, cheers, hip hip hooray! You must post more.
Welcome, welcome,welcome! Holy smokes that was ridiculously hot! More please…
Okay, I got the kinks out of trying to post in the future. I had a mch easier time posting hte 3rd chapter. But sometimes I might put a little “kinky” in the story lines. I have a few ideas running through my head for Bette’s dream. I’m looking forward to writing it.
next chap pleassssssseeeeeeeeeeee
Welcome and whoa what a great start. Looking forward to the next chapters. PPS
Wow, ten years ago. I surprised myself writing these stories. Sure takes a lot of time. One day I may be inspired again and have time at the same time. :) So far the new series Generation Q hasn’t inspired me to fill in the gaps or come up with alternative storylines. One day.