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I Will Follow You Into The Dark – Chapter Eleven
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Chapter Eleven
Bette Porter narrative
Billy kissed me goodbye and left. I sighed; that problem was out of the way. Now I only had to wait for Tina.
When she didn’t arrive after half an hour, I guessed her father wasn’t that easily convinced and she had to make up some stuff to get away.
After an hour, I started getting worried, had something happened to her? Did I have to go after her?
Time passed by and I started to make up all kind of things that could have happened. All scenario’s involved a completely innocent Tina who had no means to let me know she couldn’t make it or she was going to be late.
It took me some time to accept it. After three hours I had to admit to myself that Tina Kennard had stood me up and I was fucking hating it.
It was the ultimate betrayal. I was a cosmic joke. Tina was fooling me, the world was fooling me and I was a naïve cow. Why had I believed so much that Tina was different? That Tina wouldn’t leave me? Fucking hell, how could I be that stupid? She was just like everybody else. She was just like Fiona. She left me.
Tina Kennard narrative, earlier that day
I knocked wildly on Shanes front door. Shane quickly opened it. The tears were flowing over my cheek and my heart felt heavy, unbearable. She saw something was seriously wrong immediately.
“T, what’s going on? Come in,” she said. I followed her and let myself fall on the couch. I felt like I would crash. For a split second I thought I was going to kill myself. But as I felt Shanes arm around me I knew I at least had true friends, something Bette hadn’t. I mentally slapped myself for being mean to Bette, even if it was only in thoughts.
“What’s going on?” I could hear Shane was really worried.
“It’s Bette,” I sobbed. “She had rang me, we were going to talk. I arrived, she was making out with Billy. Everyone passer-by could see it.”
“What? My god… I… I don’t… fuck!”
“I just thought that it was going to be okay and then…” I trailed off. I burst out in tears again.
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Oh dayum…this story just keeps getting better and better…loving the drama
”Billy. It’s over.” – – I looked at Tina, expecting her to be happy and to kiss me…. – She looked at me and said: “I’m glad you did that. You had to do it for yourself. Now get your head clear and we’ll see what happens.”… – “What?” ‘ – – That was a great little exchange there, Genner!
i said it before and I will say it again. This is my favorite Genner story.
Tina wants Bette to get herself straight before she commit her heart and soul to her. Which she hads already, but Bette would keep on doing her this way forever. Pay back can be hell
Saw 3 posts were up so I’m just commenting on this one beacuse I was too excited to stop reading! I’m glad Tina made Bette do that but these two really need to get on the same page and stop denying their feelings for one another. Can’t wait to see what happens next. PPS
tina is right bette needed to break it off with billy for herself and now she needs to get her head clear!! i feel bad for bette she is so confused and has no one to talk to except tina and she is messing that up as well awesome update :)PPS
Such a wonderful update! I am so relieved that they reconnected – well in a manner of speaking. At least they cleared the air a bit. Tina is tough – lovin’ that. I wonder if Shane is a little too over protective of Tina (as in she has a secret plan of her own). Hmmm…great job!
Maybe Bette deserved that, maybe she even needed it. But its gotta be so damn hard from where she is standing.
This story just gets better with every chapter! These two are so frustrating, but in such a realistic and adorable way. Thanks for the frequent posts.
bette so deserved the flick! way 2 go Tina.