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Flowers
BetteIts just I just thought of who was the last person to
Tina: so did I and. its too soon for this,, we need to take baby steps.
Bette: Yeababy steps
Both of them are fumbling over thoughts and words to say. While each are thinking about thoughts of other women being with their woman, neither can deny how passion and love is between them at this very moment.
Bette: I have to say, Ive missed kissing you Tina. God have I missed those lips and the fact that someone else gets to have that kind of kiss from you kills me, but I guess you have to do what you have to do.
Tina: Dont you think I kills me that your lips were on some elses too Bette. Youre mouth was all over some elses not too long ago.
Bette knowing shes referring to Candace and then feeling more like a ***** moron for remember that the last person was that girl in New York. Bette then begins to curse herself in her head.
Tina: But baby, I never kissed Helena like they way I just kissed you now.
Bette, now in shock for like the tenth time tonight, Did Tina just call her baby?
Tina now realizing that she did say that
Tina: Sorry, its habit I guess.
Bette: Please Tee, Dont be sorry.
Bette then goes back down to sit next to her.
Bette: So what do we do now?
Tina: I dont know Bette. I dont have that many answers for you now. I think we should just take it one day at a time. But I think for right now you should go, before we take this any faster than we should be.
Bette: As much as it is going to kill me to walk out that door right now, I think youre right and I think you and the baby need some rest.
Bette touches her face one more time before getting up to leave. Tina walks her to the door.
Tina: Goodnight Bette.
Bette then moves down to kiss her belly.
Bette: Goodnight Baby.
then moves up to kiss Tina.
Bette: Goodnight Baby.
Tina closes the door and leans her back against it. Thinking to herself what a crazy night that had just taken place. She then sees the flowers and goes over to them. She puts her nose to the vase and begins to smell themthen thinks to herself Flowersmaybe flowers can change things. But not flowers from the store or some vendor on the side of the street like that last ones she gave me, but flowers that we grew together, it took a while for these ones to bloom-Tina thought to herself I remember Bette saying that these ones were taking forever, I remember telling her, the ones that take a while to grow, that go through the harsh sun and hard rain before they bloom, those are the flowers that last the longest
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(66 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
Let me know what you guys think, this is my first time, I’m a fanfic virgin.
yes enjoyed very much please continue with hopefully Tina kicking that bitch Helena Ass into touch keep up the good work
Really enjoyed your story, please continue, but get Helena out the way, so we can have a bit more bonding between Bette and Tina.
Well twitty What do I think? Awesome my friend. I wish that is how the show went last night. It would have been beautiful. Thanks for taking the time, and writing a cheer up story to us all
I absolutely loved this story! Please write more! I love the dialogue, thank you for making them talk about what the TPTB won’t. I really enjoyed this, thank you for taking the time to write it :)
i love it really love it looking forward to next chapter soon thanks
Thank you Twitty; congratulations on losing your fanfic viginity – we’ll be gentle with you! A lovely and satisfying read – I love these type of “what if” and “missing scene” type pieces. Thanks again.
WHY DIDN’T THIS HAPPEN ON THE SHOW! AHHHHH! Thanks for writing this, maybe someday the’ll be together again. I hate Helena. . .
You certainly did yourself proud. Great take on what might have been. Hope you continue.
I wish this happened on the show! Grr! This is wonderful please continue!
EXCELLENT
I loved your story ! I mean every single word. I wish last night’s episode was like your story. So full of love and wanting. Please write more !
Just lovely. Thank you.
You have done an excellent job for your first time! I love this point of view and wish so very much that this is what we all SHOULD have seen on Sundays show. Thank you for taking the time to share your creative writing with us. 5 bright stars to you!
Nicely written. I thought Tina was giving in a little quickly at the start, and I was glad to see that she didn’t. Also, from my point of view, I don’t think Helena gets embarassed.
great start..really great..please post soon i loved your story
That was great. Love your writing.
I loved this. Hopefully, the show will take a hint from you. Please continue.
This is beautiful. Please continue
At first I was scared when I realized Tina was home, but after the whole pool thing had already happened. It was a great turn of events. Thanks for making us feel better after last night! please continue
that was awesome
well, if you’re a fanfic virgin then I suggest you get in on regularly on this site!! that was stellar! I think the last paragraph clinched it for me, the flower metaphor is so so right, I hope you continue with this. It’s amazing!
Loved this story, especially the last line…how very sweet. Looking forward to reading more from you.
If only you had been writing for the show. OMG that was wonderful. They have certainly ruined the show for me. But reading this give my heart hope. Thank you for writing this.
This story was wonderful!!! Great job! I can’t wait to read more.
Wow!! 1st fic. I think u did great. I could actually see that scene playing out in my head. I hope u write more soon.
excellent job!
I think Ilene Chaiken should hire you to write for the show as I like your version much better!
This was so good. You write like a pro.
Wow good start, I really like it. This is interesting and awesome, please post soon the next one. Thank you!
Beautifully written.. i just had 5 mionutes on the computer so it was kinda hard which fanfic to read and i chose to read this fanfic since i just saw the episode.. (boy am i glad i chose this!) God yea i wish it turned out like this! Brilliant!
Welcome, twitty10!! Glad the show leaves such holes and incompleteness, it allows fanfic writers like you to make us feel good from the altered world of B&T!! Keep your imagination flowing . . .
Loved it- wish this had happened last night!
Bette should walk away and let Tina have Helena I mean she already slept with her and never should Bette be the woman on the side no matter how much it hurts to be without her.