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Flowers
What if Tina was home by the time Bette came to her with the flowers
Knock, Knock, Knock.
Tina answers the door still dressed in what she wore to the dinner. Her hair is still damp from the pool time with Helena.
Tina: Bette? What are you doing here?
Bette hands her the flowers. Tina looks at them and immediately realizes they are from the garden, their garden, our garden.
Tina: Thank you-
Before she can say another word, Bette cuts her off.
Bette: Tina I know I cant just throw flowers at this an expect it to go away, but I need to let you know that what I said this afternoon I meant it. Im still here and Im not going anywhere. Not nownot ever.
Tina: Bette, I said I needed time.
Bette: I know and time is what Im going to give you, but I cant promise that I wont stop coming by to see you or that I wont call you everyday. I want to be in your life. I need to be in your life. In our babys life-
Tina: I told you-
Bette: Please let me finish.
Tina: (replying in a whisper) Okay, but why dont you come inside.
Bette makes a soft smile as Tina ushers her in. Tina goes to put the flowers on the kitchen table and Bette takes a seat on the couch as Tina goes over to sit on the couch across from her. Bette instantly gets up and goes to sit next to her.
Bette: Tina, I cant begin to express how sorry I am for what I did to you, what I did to us, I will spend the rest of my life making it up to you and doing whatever-
Tina now cuts Bette off.
Tina: It wasnt all your fault, Bette, it took me a while to realize that, but it wasnt just you that caused this to happen to us. I shut you out, I pushed you away, but that was my way of dealing with the pain. I lost a child, our child and I had so much pain inside of me that showing any type of love in any way or form was something I couldnt do right away. I know we didnt, that I didnt touch you for a while, being intimate was something I couldnt handle at the moment. I thought you would be able to understand that but never, never did the thought of being intimate with anyone else every cross my mind.
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(66 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
Let me know what you guys think, this is my first time, I’m a fanfic virgin.
yes enjoyed very much please continue with hopefully Tina kicking that bitch Helena Ass into touch keep up the good work
Really enjoyed your story, please continue, but get Helena out the way, so we can have a bit more bonding between Bette and Tina.
Well twitty What do I think? Awesome my friend. I wish that is how the show went last night. It would have been beautiful. Thanks for taking the time, and writing a cheer up story to us all
I absolutely loved this story! Please write more! I love the dialogue, thank you for making them talk about what the TPTB won’t. I really enjoyed this, thank you for taking the time to write it :)
i love it really love it looking forward to next chapter soon thanks
Thank you Twitty; congratulations on losing your fanfic viginity – we’ll be gentle with you! A lovely and satisfying read – I love these type of “what if” and “missing scene” type pieces. Thanks again.
WHY DIDN’T THIS HAPPEN ON THE SHOW! AHHHHH! Thanks for writing this, maybe someday the’ll be together again. I hate Helena. . .
You certainly did yourself proud. Great take on what might have been. Hope you continue.
I wish this happened on the show! Grr! This is wonderful please continue!
EXCELLENT
I loved your story ! I mean every single word. I wish last night’s episode was like your story. So full of love and wanting. Please write more !
Just lovely. Thank you.
You have done an excellent job for your first time! I love this point of view and wish so very much that this is what we all SHOULD have seen on Sundays show. Thank you for taking the time to share your creative writing with us. 5 bright stars to you!
Nicely written. I thought Tina was giving in a little quickly at the start, and I was glad to see that she didn’t. Also, from my point of view, I don’t think Helena gets embarassed.
great start..really great..please post soon i loved your story
That was great. Love your writing.
I loved this. Hopefully, the show will take a hint from you. Please continue.
This is beautiful. Please continue
At first I was scared when I realized Tina was home, but after the whole pool thing had already happened. It was a great turn of events. Thanks for making us feel better after last night! please continue
that was awesome
well, if you’re a fanfic virgin then I suggest you get in on regularly on this site!! that was stellar! I think the last paragraph clinched it for me, the flower metaphor is so so right, I hope you continue with this. It’s amazing!
Loved this story, especially the last line…how very sweet. Looking forward to reading more from you.
If only you had been writing for the show. OMG that was wonderful. They have certainly ruined the show for me. But reading this give my heart hope. Thank you for writing this.
This story was wonderful!!! Great job! I can’t wait to read more.
Wow!! 1st fic. I think u did great. I could actually see that scene playing out in my head. I hope u write more soon.
excellent job!
I think Ilene Chaiken should hire you to write for the show as I like your version much better!
This was so good. You write like a pro.
Wow good start, I really like it. This is interesting and awesome, please post soon the next one. Thank you!
Beautifully written.. i just had 5 mionutes on the computer so it was kinda hard which fanfic to read and i chose to read this fanfic since i just saw the episode.. (boy am i glad i chose this!) God yea i wish it turned out like this! Brilliant!
Welcome, twitty10!! Glad the show leaves such holes and incompleteness, it allows fanfic writers like you to make us feel good from the altered world of B&T!! Keep your imagination flowing . . .
Loved it- wish this had happened last night!
Bette should walk away and let Tina have Helena I mean she already slept with her and never should Bette be the woman on the side no matter how much it hurts to be without her.