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Flowers
POV BETTE
God, have I missed kissing her, this is actually happening right? Im not going crazy right now, am I? Tina is kissing me, me and her are touching each other and kissing each other, and god, is she kissing me, how could I have forgotten how amazing my baby kisses, shes not holding back, I havent felt this kind of kiss from her in a while, where is this new power coming from, oooo god I love it., Ive missed it.. shes wants this, she does,, , I hear her moan,000000 god I love that sound.. shes really kissing me, god and shes ***** hot, shes controlling this, ***** she is,, not me.. .ooyes..oooooooo, yes, oooooGod that feels good, ***** how is it she can still get me wet with that little pull of the nipple, Ive missed this touch I have missed these lips these lips..these lips.that were just on HELENA ***** PEABODY..
POV TINA
Oooo I know I shouldnt be doing this,, but god it feel so good. I cant keep denying that I dont want to do this every time I see her, Im still so mad, and hurt, but I cant deny that I love this woman, shes my baby, I always want to kiss her, and touch her, and *****, I shouldnt be doing this, Its too soon, this is only going to complicate things, but *****,, god how I love her lips and to hear her moan, it love that sound, I love the way shes tastes, I love that I can tease her now, I like this new power I have, I missed that. I lost that.,,,,, oo god her skin, her mocha smooth skin, I cant help but want to touch that, and this ooo I know she loves this .shes loving this, I love this, god I missed this, I missed kissing Bette, my Bette, well she was my Betteuntil ***** carpenter Candace came along.CANDACE.. what the ***** am I doing
They both at the same moment break away from the kiss. Both out of breath, both full of passion and anger, Tina pulls her hands off Bette, Bette does the same. Bette stand up from the couch.
Bette: Im sorry
Tina: No, Im sorry that shouldnt have happened.
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(66 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
Let me know what you guys think, this is my first time, I’m a fanfic virgin.
yes enjoyed very much please continue with hopefully Tina kicking that bitch Helena Ass into touch keep up the good work
Really enjoyed your story, please continue, but get Helena out the way, so we can have a bit more bonding between Bette and Tina.
Well twitty What do I think? Awesome my friend. I wish that is how the show went last night. It would have been beautiful. Thanks for taking the time, and writing a cheer up story to us all
I absolutely loved this story! Please write more! I love the dialogue, thank you for making them talk about what the TPTB won’t. I really enjoyed this, thank you for taking the time to write it :)
i love it really love it looking forward to next chapter soon thanks
Thank you Twitty; congratulations on losing your fanfic viginity – we’ll be gentle with you! A lovely and satisfying read – I love these type of “what if” and “missing scene” type pieces. Thanks again.
WHY DIDN’T THIS HAPPEN ON THE SHOW! AHHHHH! Thanks for writing this, maybe someday the’ll be together again. I hate Helena. . .
You certainly did yourself proud. Great take on what might have been. Hope you continue.
I wish this happened on the show! Grr! This is wonderful please continue!
EXCELLENT
I loved your story ! I mean every single word. I wish last night’s episode was like your story. So full of love and wanting. Please write more !
Just lovely. Thank you.
You have done an excellent job for your first time! I love this point of view and wish so very much that this is what we all SHOULD have seen on Sundays show. Thank you for taking the time to share your creative writing with us. 5 bright stars to you!
Nicely written. I thought Tina was giving in a little quickly at the start, and I was glad to see that she didn’t. Also, from my point of view, I don’t think Helena gets embarassed.
great start..really great..please post soon i loved your story
That was great. Love your writing.
I loved this. Hopefully, the show will take a hint from you. Please continue.
This is beautiful. Please continue
At first I was scared when I realized Tina was home, but after the whole pool thing had already happened. It was a great turn of events. Thanks for making us feel better after last night! please continue
that was awesome
well, if you’re a fanfic virgin then I suggest you get in on regularly on this site!! that was stellar! I think the last paragraph clinched it for me, the flower metaphor is so so right, I hope you continue with this. It’s amazing!
Loved this story, especially the last line…how very sweet. Looking forward to reading more from you.
If only you had been writing for the show. OMG that was wonderful. They have certainly ruined the show for me. But reading this give my heart hope. Thank you for writing this.
This story was wonderful!!! Great job! I can’t wait to read more.
Wow!! 1st fic. I think u did great. I could actually see that scene playing out in my head. I hope u write more soon.
excellent job!
I think Ilene Chaiken should hire you to write for the show as I like your version much better!
This was so good. You write like a pro.
Wow good start, I really like it. This is interesting and awesome, please post soon the next one. Thank you!
Beautifully written.. i just had 5 mionutes on the computer so it was kinda hard which fanfic to read and i chose to read this fanfic since i just saw the episode.. (boy am i glad i chose this!) God yea i wish it turned out like this! Brilliant!
Welcome, twitty10!! Glad the show leaves such holes and incompleteness, it allows fanfic writers like you to make us feel good from the altered world of B&T!! Keep your imagination flowing . . .
Loved it- wish this had happened last night!
Bette should walk away and let Tina have Helena I mean she already slept with her and never should Bette be the woman on the side no matter how much it hurts to be without her.