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Flowers
Bette: Are you still going to see her?
Tina: I dont know. I still think we should see other people.
Bette: I dont want to see other people. I just want to be with you. If you feel that you need to be with other people, then thats youre choice, and you have every right to do that, but I dont need to see what else is out there for me. Youre the only one I want. Youre the one I need. I love you, I lost my head, I made a huge mistake, but Im not going be with anyone else when the woman I know Im in love with and want to spend the rest of my life with is right here, right here.
Bette again places her hand on Tinas face.
Bette: Tee, if you still love me? Why do you still want to see her?
Tina: Because, because(searching for an answer) I dont know.
Again silence fills the room, again Bette breaks it.
Bette: May I?
Bette reaches her hand out to touch Tinas stomach. Tina nods a yes. Bette rubs her hand over her stomach as she smiles and looks into Tinas eyes. Tina then smiles back as she places her hand over Bettes.
Tina: Pretty incredible, huh?
Bette: Yes it is.
Having Bettes hands on her is a feeling like no other, a feeling Tina cant deny. Touching her hands was instinct; Tina now locks eyes with Bette and this time letting the moment take her away. As Bette now leans in to kiss her, Tina gives in.
The kiss is soft at first; both sets of lips slowly colliding together. Bette then grabs the back of Tinas neck and pulls her in deeper. Tina again gives in. Both tongues are re-exploring every inch of each others mouth. Bette moans in desire, as Tina glides her tongue over Bettes bottom lip, teases her with every move. Bette then moves her hand from her stomach to Tinas back, Tinas hands are on Bettes face and moving down to her shoulders, carefully grazing her neck with her fingers on the way down. Bette pulls at Tinas bottom lips as her hands now move from Tinas back to her chest, Bette begins to stroke her breast, Tina moans with pleasure. Tina now does the same, she moves her hand under Bettes layering off clothing, she cups her breast and her fingers start to pull ever so lightly on Bettes nipple causing Bette to moan yet again.both of them are so wrapped up in the moment, they forget to think as to what is happening.
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(66 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
Let me know what you guys think, this is my first time, I’m a fanfic virgin.
yes enjoyed very much please continue with hopefully Tina kicking that bitch Helena Ass into touch keep up the good work
Really enjoyed your story, please continue, but get Helena out the way, so we can have a bit more bonding between Bette and Tina.
Well twitty What do I think? Awesome my friend. I wish that is how the show went last night. It would have been beautiful. Thanks for taking the time, and writing a cheer up story to us all
I absolutely loved this story! Please write more! I love the dialogue, thank you for making them talk about what the TPTB won’t. I really enjoyed this, thank you for taking the time to write it :)
i love it really love it looking forward to next chapter soon thanks
Thank you Twitty; congratulations on losing your fanfic viginity – we’ll be gentle with you! A lovely and satisfying read – I love these type of “what if” and “missing scene” type pieces. Thanks again.
WHY DIDN’T THIS HAPPEN ON THE SHOW! AHHHHH! Thanks for writing this, maybe someday the’ll be together again. I hate Helena. . .
You certainly did yourself proud. Great take on what might have been. Hope you continue.
I wish this happened on the show! Grr! This is wonderful please continue!
EXCELLENT
I loved your story ! I mean every single word. I wish last night’s episode was like your story. So full of love and wanting. Please write more !
Just lovely. Thank you.
You have done an excellent job for your first time! I love this point of view and wish so very much that this is what we all SHOULD have seen on Sundays show. Thank you for taking the time to share your creative writing with us. 5 bright stars to you!
Nicely written. I thought Tina was giving in a little quickly at the start, and I was glad to see that she didn’t. Also, from my point of view, I don’t think Helena gets embarassed.
great start..really great..please post soon i loved your story
That was great. Love your writing.
I loved this. Hopefully, the show will take a hint from you. Please continue.
This is beautiful. Please continue
At first I was scared when I realized Tina was home, but after the whole pool thing had already happened. It was a great turn of events. Thanks for making us feel better after last night! please continue
that was awesome
well, if you’re a fanfic virgin then I suggest you get in on regularly on this site!! that was stellar! I think the last paragraph clinched it for me, the flower metaphor is so so right, I hope you continue with this. It’s amazing!
Loved this story, especially the last line…how very sweet. Looking forward to reading more from you.
If only you had been writing for the show. OMG that was wonderful. They have certainly ruined the show for me. But reading this give my heart hope. Thank you for writing this.
This story was wonderful!!! Great job! I can’t wait to read more.
Wow!! 1st fic. I think u did great. I could actually see that scene playing out in my head. I hope u write more soon.
excellent job!
I think Ilene Chaiken should hire you to write for the show as I like your version much better!
This was so good. You write like a pro.
Wow good start, I really like it. This is interesting and awesome, please post soon the next one. Thank you!
Beautifully written.. i just had 5 mionutes on the computer so it was kinda hard which fanfic to read and i chose to read this fanfic since i just saw the episode.. (boy am i glad i chose this!) God yea i wish it turned out like this! Brilliant!
Welcome, twitty10!! Glad the show leaves such holes and incompleteness, it allows fanfic writers like you to make us feel good from the altered world of B&T!! Keep your imagination flowing . . .
Loved it- wish this had happened last night!
Bette should walk away and let Tina have Helena I mean she already slept with her and never should Bette be the woman on the side no matter how much it hurts to be without her.