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Collision Course 4.57 – Real Wild Child(ren)
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“Al, you gotta stop yelling,” stated Rosita, grabbing Alice’s hand and kissing her cheek quickly. “People are gonna think you are crazy.”
“We’re on duty,” said Jo then talking to what seemed like thin air. “I’m well aware of our positions, Jack.”
“Yeah, but you guys are all signed up to compete,” said Alice loudly looking for the illustrious Jack Bauer. Not seeing the handsome blonde man anywhere in the vicinity.
“We know, and Jack knows, and we still are, but we have too secure the perimeter and when all that is done, we will get to go play,” smiled Jo sexily. “I’m going dark I’ve got something to take care of.” Jo motioned her head at Bette, stepping aside and letting Bette follow her away from everyone else.
“I didn’t think you’d come,” said Bette before Jo could say a word. Jo scrunched up her face, putting a finger to Bette’s lips.
“Shut up, Porter,” said Jo easily. “Before you so rudely didn’t allow me to speak, I was going to say, I’m sorry.”
Bette looked stunned, trying to stammer out a response, “W-w-what for?”
“For not telling you all the reasons why I don’t want to move in with you, granted, the control freak thing is something that might make me see red,” began Jo taking the earwig out of her ear, looking sheepishly at her hand as she juggled it. “This job… it’s not what I wanted, but I’m in it for the long haul. I’m good at this, great at it, in fact, but it takes its toil on me. It’s hard, separating the darkness of it and living a bright life and I think I need some time to get used to it again, to learn to live with that hatred that I will face, that darkness in mankind that I’m going to deal with day in and day out.”
“Time?” asked Bette still processing that Jo wasn’t angry with her.
“Yeah, and seriously, I understand you not wanting to move, and you have to understand I’ve just started getting close to Spencer again, the beach house seems to be a central point of that, must be the sun and sand…,” quipped Jo. “I need my daughter, and you need yours, so for now, I think living apart is easier for us.”
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I know group scenes are hard to write but you do them so well! I loved the ending. Thnnks.
I continue to be amazed at your ability to seamlessly interweave so many storylines and keep them all so engaging. Knowing from your other stories that you do not hesitate to bump off main characters, I envisioned heartbreak ahead when you paired Bette with Jo. I decided I had nothing to worry about since its hard to kill a vampire. Then you go and make Jo human. sigh. Every time I open a new chapter, I am worried about what’s gonna happen. Loved this chapter with all of the characters appearing. Oh, and Tina deserves a love interest.
hmm. i like this chapter, it’s amazing how you have so many characters in this story though, and everyone likes them. Awesome, i love Riley and Spencer, hint hint
Haha…loved that last one-liner from Alice! That’s great!
I *knew* Gabe would want something. Scumbag. Welp, Shane’s going to have to do some adjusting, and fast. The rest of the chapter was fantastic, I loved the games, and Alice and her strategy with the underwear, ha! Amy’s going to have to get over Jo, cos it looks like she’s stickin, no matter what Amy pulls. Quin and Tina, I think you gave us a bit more than a glimmer there… Great chapter, Janet, thanks.
Trying to bring the whole group together and in harmony was a feat that you did do very well. Quin and Tina I can see that better than she and Amy. Alice is still the class clown. I loved the longer chapter. How can anyone walk off and leave a child??? Okay,I,m going in the Hospital April 25 for a complete shoulder replacement. Don’t mop the F**king floor bare foot. this has been going on since 8 of Aug 06 . Can’t do much with one arm in a sling and your right arm at that. I still do all the work but I do get tired. So if I pass my Phyical.it a go. So I’ll be able to read but the Dr said in about a year I would be 95% as good as new. Hell at my age just getting out of bed is good. Love this Love Sam and Shane. You take care and write a lot. get me a book out. I can alway read. Take care and rest. thanks bvh
Don’t know why I con’t to be amazed by the amt. of characters you have interacting w/ one another in a post like this, but I am. The games were funny. Jo & Bette making up was sweet. Loved all the flirtation & hook ups w/ the couples, teens & adults. I guess cause Sam has so much it means so little when Gabe runs off w/ just a car. Def. know you’re a busy lady but glad to know you’re still working on the other fics. Loved it, JM.
loving tina and Quin,