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Collision Course 4.57 – Real Wild Child(ren)
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Inside…
“So, let us see what we have here….,” muttered Sam as she dug into the cupboards, scratching her head at the items that were out dated, straightening up. “I can order something if you want, Shay?”
“That’s ok,” he said shyly sitting at the table, studying his fingers. His feet swinging under the table, making Sam smile lightly.
Sam grunted and moved to the fridge, finding cheese and bread that didn’t have mold on it, amazingly, “Grilled cheese?”
“Ok,” he answered her, his blue eyes looking down at the floor. He seemed very reserved and held back.
Sam kept shooting him looks as she quickly cooked, throwing the sandwich onto a plate and getting a soda from the fridge, “Here you go, I’m going to go out and check on the battling duo.”
“Good luck,” said Shay softly.
“Why?” asked Sam looking over at the door, seeing Shane pacing the porch like a wild caged animal. Feeling for Shane, who must have been more than angry, livid, scared, freaked out by a man who should have protected her, instead, he’d stolen from her friend.
“He knew she was gonna be mad, but he wanted to see her anyway,” shrugged Shay his demeanor told Sam that he knew something else, but Sam wasn’t going to press.
Sam walked to the door, creeping the door open and listening.
Outside….
“Why did you come here? For money?” asked Shane heatedly stepping towards him, angry enough to belt him. Standing toe to toe with him, seeing the resemblance in him that dwelled in her, the carefree looks, the easy smile, the face that could be serious one moment and joyous the next.
“No,” he said quickly. “I just came to see you and your bride, but I can see that you’ve moved on from Carmen…,” he said with laughter in his voice. “You are my daughter all right.”
“Fuck you,” shot back Shane as Gabe stepped up the last step onto the porch next to her. Now he was taller than her, but he didn’t tower over her, he wanted to keep her as friendly as he could.
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I know group scenes are hard to write but you do them so well! I loved the ending. Thnnks.
I continue to be amazed at your ability to seamlessly interweave so many storylines and keep them all so engaging. Knowing from your other stories that you do not hesitate to bump off main characters, I envisioned heartbreak ahead when you paired Bette with Jo. I decided I had nothing to worry about since its hard to kill a vampire. Then you go and make Jo human. sigh. Every time I open a new chapter, I am worried about what’s gonna happen. Loved this chapter with all of the characters appearing. Oh, and Tina deserves a love interest.
hmm. i like this chapter, it’s amazing how you have so many characters in this story though, and everyone likes them. Awesome, i love Riley and Spencer, hint hint
Haha…loved that last one-liner from Alice! That’s great!
I *knew* Gabe would want something. Scumbag. Welp, Shane’s going to have to do some adjusting, and fast. The rest of the chapter was fantastic, I loved the games, and Alice and her strategy with the underwear, ha! Amy’s going to have to get over Jo, cos it looks like she’s stickin, no matter what Amy pulls. Quin and Tina, I think you gave us a bit more than a glimmer there… Great chapter, Janet, thanks.
Trying to bring the whole group together and in harmony was a feat that you did do very well. Quin and Tina I can see that better than she and Amy. Alice is still the class clown. I loved the longer chapter. How can anyone walk off and leave a child??? Okay,I,m going in the Hospital April 25 for a complete shoulder replacement. Don’t mop the F**king floor bare foot. this has been going on since 8 of Aug 06 . Can’t do much with one arm in a sling and your right arm at that. I still do all the work but I do get tired. So if I pass my Phyical.it a go. So I’ll be able to read but the Dr said in about a year I would be 95% as good as new. Hell at my age just getting out of bed is good. Love this Love Sam and Shane. You take care and write a lot. get me a book out. I can alway read. Take care and rest. thanks bvh
Don’t know why I con’t to be amazed by the amt. of characters you have interacting w/ one another in a post like this, but I am. The games were funny. Jo & Bette making up was sweet. Loved all the flirtation & hook ups w/ the couples, teens & adults. I guess cause Sam has so much it means so little when Gabe runs off w/ just a car. Def. know you’re a busy lady but glad to know you’re still working on the other fics. Loved it, JM.
loving tina and Quin,