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Chapter VI – Empire State of Mind – Three letters
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”…. I’m just saying that I am not some animal that you can use to breed your fucking offspring with!” the woman who appeared to be sitting inside the room shouted.
”I never said you were!” the woman standing next to the door snapped back. ”You’re the one who wanted to have this baby … Okay, I did, too. But you said you really wanted it. That’s how you explained quitting your job six months ago, remember? That you wanted to prepare your body for the baby?”
”Okay, okay. But I didn’t appreciate being the butt of jokes with our friends about how hard it’s been finding a donor …”
”We weren’t laughing at you!”
”Well, all that joking around made me feel like a fucking cow in which the precious semen of some prize bull is injected into …”
”Oh, c’mon honey! You have to have a sense of humor about these things!”
”I didn’t think it was funny. And if you were paying even just 10% of the attention you used to give me you would realize I wasn’t even smiling while you were all laughing your heads off!”
Bette felt trapped because the door of the room was halfway open now, fully blocking her access to the other end of the hallway, where Tina was being examined. Bette stood uncomfortably on the other side of the open door, holding two cups of water in her hands.
The woman who was now halfway out of the room shot back, just as Bette opened her mouth to ask to walk through, ”I have given you all my love and attention over the last seven years, Marilyn. Don’t be such a drama queen!”
”All your love? That’s rich! When was the last time we had sex, huh?!”
In the ensuing silence, Bette coughed to let them know she was on the other side of the open door. She was saying, ”Excuse me, I just want to get through …” just as the woman in the room was asking, in a loud, jeering voice, ”What? Can’t remember? Let me refresh your memory … it’s been well over three and a half months! Valentine’s Day, to be precise. And we were drunk!”
This time Bette said out loud, before the woman’s partner standing by the door could respond, ”Excuse me, but I’d just like to get through.”
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Ahhhh, just ask Marcus then the kids are really siblings! I like this story very much only wish you posted more often, I have no right to talk I have been pondering a new story for quite some time so you take all the time you need to keep up the quality. My story will be centered around the horse world which is the world I lived in before I had the stroke. I spent many years showing and breeding Appaloosa’s first and then paint horses I miss being able to ride and having horses the most. I have been thinking about doing this story for a long time. I will start it soon. In the meantime I will read whatever you write.,
Allons-y! Jackiee1. Hope you do return to the “horse world.” They’re magnificent animals. About what you’re writing: If it helps, just start with a barebones outline, so that you have a “straw man” you can play with. It’s also something that doesn’t need to be perfect. At times, you could be tempted to be your own worst critic. Don’t be. (Hmmm… I posted 2 chapters this weekend: not good enough? just kidding). Hang in there.
Thank you for the update.PPS. And Jacky please come back soon.
Love this story and the addition of Diane and Jules. Glad to see they are working on a second child and Bette can experience Tina during pregnancy. They will need to be careful who they choose as donor. Hope this upcoming trip is safe and uneventful. Of course that wouldn’t be fun then, would it? Thanks so much for your time in writing this wonderful story and sharing with us.
I also love this story! Why not just ask Marcus to deposit again. That’s the right thing to do if he’s still in their lives. I’m not feeling Tom for some reason. Please let Bette find out the truth in Luxembourg but not to much drama. PPS
So happy you posted again, thanks. Love the story but have a feeling a lot of drama is ahead.
Two posts in one week and both wonderful additions to this exceptional creativity. makes me wish it was a three day holiday weekend so that I could have all the time to read each word, digest and contemplate the creative imagery you have put forth. Thank you, keep up the wonderful work. The imagery between Bette creating life with Tina alone will set all screens on fire.
Thanks for the double post. Bette and Tina don’t know Tom well or his history. Maybe Tina can surprise Bette by searching for Marcus and getting him to be their donor again. They should not mess with perfection, Angie is a gorgeous child.
I love this story, and in my opinion marcus is the best choice.
Lovely story! And like the rest, get Marcus back in the picture, please. Thanks for sharing your great talent with us!
Thank you for both updates.
I agree with the others, they need to find Marcus and ask for another deposit.
Hi Skydancer
I think with Toms sperm and Bettes eggs with Tina as the birth mother would make the perfect match.
I admire your creativity with each chapter, keep up the good work.