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Chapter VI – Empire State of Mind – Three letters
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Julie greeted Bette and Tina warmly as they walked into the small lobby of Liz’ clinic in the West Village in downtown New York.
”Good morning! I hear you’ve finally decided to go ahead with this?” she asked excitedly, as she tapped a few entries into the screen hidden below the counter, to note down Bette and Tina had arrived for their 11:00 appointment.
Bette gave her a lopsided, thousand-watt smile that just wasn’t fair, Tina thought, knowing from past encounters that Julie had a tiny crush on Bette. Tina smiled at her also, in silent understanding, as she saw the redhead’s mouth drop slightly, brain cells probably misfiring.
”Yes, we hope we can finally get things started on this,” Tina answered, then gave Bette a look, pulling on the brunette’s hand, tugging it behind her. Bette gave her a questioning look back, and then dropped a quick, affectionate kiss on her cheek.
”Morning ladies!” Liz boomed out at them from somewhere down the hallway. She whistled as she rounded the corner, and spied Bette and Tina standing by the counter, with Bette’s arm curled affectionately around her wife’s waist.
”I’d be lying if I didn’t say you are still the most glamorous and sexy couple ’round here,” she exclaimed loudly. She whistled again as Tina approached her, laughing lightly. Liz held a hand up to stop the blond in mid-stride, and then drew a circle with her finger in the air, as if instructing Tina to twirl.
It was a game they’d started when Tina was pregnant with Angelica, and Liz would ask Tina to twirl around, whenever the blond started to sob a little. Liz had guessed Tina had been lonely for Bette more acutely during those moments, when she’d let her guard down while with Liz, revealing the depth of her sadness about being separated from the brunette. As Tina would twirl, more slowly during the latter stages of pregnancy, Liz would soothe her with phrases like, ”Now if Bette were here, she’d say you were still the sexiest woman in the world,” knowing first-hand how the brunette felt about Tina. Often, the comment would bring a smile to Tina’s face.
This morning, the statement seemed truer than ever, as Tina did look exceptionally bright and shiny, in her Asian-inspired royal blue, tight-fitting silk ”cheongsam” that was sleeveless, and dotted with tasteful, brightly-colored flower embroidery all throughout. Although long, the outfit featured slits that run along both legs, and reached the blonde’s mid-thigh area, exposing Tina’s creamy skin and well-shaped legs. The slits were functional in nature, as much as they were aesthetically pleasing, as they made the dress easier to move in than how it appeared on the surface.
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Ahhhh, just ask Marcus then the kids are really siblings! I like this story very much only wish you posted more often, I have no right to talk I have been pondering a new story for quite some time so you take all the time you need to keep up the quality. My story will be centered around the horse world which is the world I lived in before I had the stroke. I spent many years showing and breeding Appaloosa’s first and then paint horses I miss being able to ride and having horses the most. I have been thinking about doing this story for a long time. I will start it soon. In the meantime I will read whatever you write.,
Allons-y! Jackiee1. Hope you do return to the “horse world.” They’re magnificent animals. About what you’re writing: If it helps, just start with a barebones outline, so that you have a “straw man” you can play with. It’s also something that doesn’t need to be perfect. At times, you could be tempted to be your own worst critic. Don’t be. (Hmmm… I posted 2 chapters this weekend: not good enough? just kidding). Hang in there.
Thank you for the update.PPS. And Jacky please come back soon.
Love this story and the addition of Diane and Jules. Glad to see they are working on a second child and Bette can experience Tina during pregnancy. They will need to be careful who they choose as donor. Hope this upcoming trip is safe and uneventful. Of course that wouldn’t be fun then, would it? Thanks so much for your time in writing this wonderful story and sharing with us.
I also love this story! Why not just ask Marcus to deposit again. That’s the right thing to do if he’s still in their lives. I’m not feeling Tom for some reason. Please let Bette find out the truth in Luxembourg but not to much drama. PPS
So happy you posted again, thanks. Love the story but have a feeling a lot of drama is ahead.
Two posts in one week and both wonderful additions to this exceptional creativity. makes me wish it was a three day holiday weekend so that I could have all the time to read each word, digest and contemplate the creative imagery you have put forth. Thank you, keep up the wonderful work. The imagery between Bette creating life with Tina alone will set all screens on fire.
Thanks for the double post. Bette and Tina don’t know Tom well or his history. Maybe Tina can surprise Bette by searching for Marcus and getting him to be their donor again. They should not mess with perfection, Angie is a gorgeous child.
I love this story, and in my opinion marcus is the best choice.
Lovely story! And like the rest, get Marcus back in the picture, please. Thanks for sharing your great talent with us!
Thank you for both updates.
I agree with the others, they need to find Marcus and ask for another deposit.
Hi Skydancer
I think with Toms sperm and Bettes eggs with Tina as the birth mother would make the perfect match.
I admire your creativity with each chapter, keep up the good work.