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Bette&Tina Beginning in College Fallen_angel style
Tina, Alice and Shane line up their shots, salt in one hand, lemon in the other. They do all 3 shot. Shane wipes her mouth, Alice pulls a funny face and Tina nearly coughs hers back up
Bette: ” You guys definitely wont be in class tomorrow”
Alice: “I can get a note from my mum if you want” Bette laughs.
Alice gets up and disappears into the crowd.
The music stop and there is silence for a few minutes. Tina, Shane and Bette were chatting between themselves when the music started.
“This song is dedicated to my best friend Tina”. All 3 girls eyes shoot to the stage.
Tina: “Was that Alice”
Shane: “I think so”.
Song:
At first I was afraid, I was petrified
Kept thinking I could never live without you by my side
But than I spent so many nights, thinking how you did me wrong
And I grew strong, and I learnt how to get along
And so your back from outta space
The stage lit up and Alice walked down the catwalk singing. Everyone in the club started cheering and clapping. Tina, Bette and Shane joined in.
DJ: “Ladies and gentleman give it up for Mumma Pimp”
The crowd erupts into cheering and applause. Alice raised her hands above her head.
Alice: “Thank-you, thank-you, I love you all.
Tina and Shane whistle and cheer. Alice comes back to the table.
Alice: “Kelly Clarkson eat ya heart out”. All the girls laugh. Tina goes to stand up
Tina: “Woah” she starts to sway. Bette grabs hold of her to steady her.
Bette: “You ok Tina”
Tina: (giggling) “Yeah.. I can see two of you”.
Bette: “Ok maybe we should be getting you home”.
Alice: “Who’s place we going to”
Bette: “Im going to take Tina home”.
Alice: “Yeah she way drunk” laughs
Shane pushes Alice who falls to the ground. Shane laughs.
Alice: (trying t o get up) “Ahshit Shane, what did you do that for”
Shane: “It was the sober test”
Alice: “Huh” rubbing her arm.
Shane: “The sober test. If you were sober you would have been able to keep your balance and would not have fallen. So your obviously drunk”.
Alice: “***** Shane, couldn’t you of just gotton me to walk a straight line or say the ***** alphabet”.
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(55 votes, average: 3.27 out of 5)
Oh Alice, you ruined their moment! Tina is going to kick your ass, but they are going to have a major hangover :)
That was funny as hell. This chapter had me in tears.
talk about “cockblocking” by alice..lol. That was a funny chapter…lol
The three amingo. that is funny The Mummy Pimp. How far can this go before Bette goes crazy with Tina. Guess Tina could plant a juices wet lip lock on Bette first. Alice Shaneand Tina are so funny together. thanks
great job Fallen Angel ! laugh & fun & sexual anticipation.. what a great combination ! I just love this story!
You are a riot the way you write the conversations between these girls. I love Alice. But Bette and Tina were hot together. NIce job.
Damit! Alice.
Realy enjoying this story and love the diologue. Hope all goes good at your end, take care.
I had so much fun reading your story, was laughing out loud all the time, just love it! Can’t wait untill next week’s chapter!
I’m really enjoy reading on it I Love it the Interaction with Bette and Tina it’s is really good OK! PLS. post soon!
ha ha ur story’s so funny, I’m really enjoyin it. Have to say though, those are some rose-tinted glasses Bettes got, cas anytime I’m sober n I hang out with people who r wasted I just end up wantin to slap them so bad! She must really like Tina. Also, MY GOD that is a LOT of alcohol! (and I’m an Irish college student so u know its serious!:-) )
I am loving this story, damn that Alice!
“Well can you at least push me out onto the dance floor so I can bob up and down on my chair and wave my arms around”.
lmao possibly the best line ever!!!really liking the story.
ah that alice, what a bad timing she has :p
great chapter, keep it up!
This story is so damn funny. I love it. Its taking me back to the days when my friends and I use to go out and party and do stupid stuff. Those were the days. Now Alice, girl has got to stop interrupiting Tina and Miss Hottie.Common when are they gonna at least kiss? Can’t wait for more.
Wow! I am new to L word Fan Fiction and believe me your story has been so entertaining especially the alice character. I have been in a laughing spree all night reading it.. Great Job..
really love this story, will wait for more
all the best..
Enjoying the story very much. Can’t wait to read more. My thoughts are with you for your loss as well. Your fan fiction family will miss you.
This is so much fun, just love it.
thanx 4 the post, i’ve got 2 say this is probably the greatest b-day present ever, i love your story i think is my favorite now, is so funny, and i love alice but i love her more when she’s drunk i think my eyes where watering with all the funny things that happen in the last too chapters. again thanx 4 the post. love rain
fuck. interruptus all damn night. right now im so mad at al for that and then your gonna be gone and shit. so not fair. *sigh*
be safe and sorry for your loss.
This is hilareous! And HOT!! Can’t wait to see this sexual tension build :) Post asasp!!
xxx
Great Chapter Fallen Angel 10. I love the way that Shane, Alice, and Tina are when they are drunk. I laugh my ass off when I read your story. Can’t wait for the next chapter, next week. I hope that the funeral will go well and no more accidents will occur. Take care, Fallen Angel 10.
Ah damn Alice I’m gonna kick your ass to why you interrupt at a right moment. This chapter is so fucking funny, I laughing alot and they are have a great time together, love them. Ok post soon, thanks!
stop playin