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Bette&Tina Beginning in College Fallen_angel style
Bette: (with a concerned look) “Are you ok” she stares into Tina’s beautiful eyes.
Tina: ” Yeah I am now. The guys just couldn’t take no for an answer”.
Bette: (smiles) “Yeah they can be quite persistent when there drunk”
Tina: :Thank-you”
They both staring into one another’s eyes swaying together to the music, Bette still holding on tight to Tina.
Alice: “Holy ***** Kennard, are you ok”
Tina: “I’m fine Al”
Alice: “He’s lucky Bette came over when she did cause I was going to show him the back of my Pimp Hand”. Both girls laugh. Shane comes walking over.
Shane: “Hey what happened”
Alice: “Well Miss Hoochie, while you were over there sucking face with ya *****, Tina was getting harassed and manhandled by some big monkey man”
Shane: “***** Tina are you ok”
Tina: “I’m fine Shane, really”.
Alice: “Yeah thanks to Miss Knight and Shining Armour over here” (she pats Bette’s shoulder). Who came over just in time to save her”.
Tina: “Really it was nothing Shane, just a drunk guy not getting what he wanted”.
Shane: “Im sorry Tina”
Alice: “Yeah you should be, you’ll think long and hard next time before you decide to suck someone’s face off now wont you”.
Shane: “ummm No” laughs
Tina: “Guys seriously I’m ok, now lets try and enjoy the rest of the night”.
Alice: “ok I’m going to get us some Tequila shots, and then I have a surprise for you guys”.
Shane: (looks at Tina) “God help us now”
Bette looks at Tina confused.
Tina: “Put it this way whenever Alice has a surprise in stall, something always go wrong or someone always ends up at the Police station. Both Tina and Shane laugh.
Bette: “Oh” she smiles and Tina. “You sure your ok”.
Tina grabs Bette’s hand and puts it in between both hers. Looking deeply into Bette’s eyes.
Tina: “Im fine, really”. She smiles at Bette.
Shane smiles at the caring and kindness between the two of them. These two were destined to be together they just didn’t know it yet.
Alice comes back with 9 Tequila shots. Bette laughs.
Bette: “The way you’s are going ill be the one carrying you guys home”.
Alice: “No complaints here”. They all laugh.
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(55 votes, average: 3.27 out of 5)
Oh Alice, you ruined their moment! Tina is going to kick your ass, but they are going to have a major hangover :)
That was funny as hell. This chapter had me in tears.
talk about “cockblocking” by alice..lol. That was a funny chapter…lol
The three amingo. that is funny The Mummy Pimp. How far can this go before Bette goes crazy with Tina. Guess Tina could plant a juices wet lip lock on Bette first. Alice Shaneand Tina are so funny together. thanks
great job Fallen Angel ! laugh & fun & sexual anticipation.. what a great combination ! I just love this story!
You are a riot the way you write the conversations between these girls. I love Alice. But Bette and Tina were hot together. NIce job.
Damit! Alice.
Realy enjoying this story and love the diologue. Hope all goes good at your end, take care.
I had so much fun reading your story, was laughing out loud all the time, just love it! Can’t wait untill next week’s chapter!
I’m really enjoy reading on it I Love it the Interaction with Bette and Tina it’s is really good OK! PLS. post soon!
ha ha ur story’s so funny, I’m really enjoyin it. Have to say though, those are some rose-tinted glasses Bettes got, cas anytime I’m sober n I hang out with people who r wasted I just end up wantin to slap them so bad! She must really like Tina. Also, MY GOD that is a LOT of alcohol! (and I’m an Irish college student so u know its serious!:-) )
I am loving this story, damn that Alice!
“Well can you at least push me out onto the dance floor so I can bob up and down on my chair and wave my arms around”.
lmao possibly the best line ever!!!really liking the story.
ah that alice, what a bad timing she has :p
great chapter, keep it up!
This story is so damn funny. I love it. Its taking me back to the days when my friends and I use to go out and party and do stupid stuff. Those were the days. Now Alice, girl has got to stop interrupiting Tina and Miss Hottie.Common when are they gonna at least kiss? Can’t wait for more.
Wow! I am new to L word Fan Fiction and believe me your story has been so entertaining especially the alice character. I have been in a laughing spree all night reading it.. Great Job..
really love this story, will wait for more
all the best..
Enjoying the story very much. Can’t wait to read more. My thoughts are with you for your loss as well. Your fan fiction family will miss you.
This is so much fun, just love it.
thanx 4 the post, i’ve got 2 say this is probably the greatest b-day present ever, i love your story i think is my favorite now, is so funny, and i love alice but i love her more when she’s drunk i think my eyes where watering with all the funny things that happen in the last too chapters. again thanx 4 the post. love rain
fuck. interruptus all damn night. right now im so mad at al for that and then your gonna be gone and shit. so not fair. *sigh*
be safe and sorry for your loss.
This is hilareous! And HOT!! Can’t wait to see this sexual tension build :) Post asasp!!
xxx
Great Chapter Fallen Angel 10. I love the way that Shane, Alice, and Tina are when they are drunk. I laugh my ass off when I read your story. Can’t wait for the next chapter, next week. I hope that the funeral will go well and no more accidents will occur. Take care, Fallen Angel 10.
Ah damn Alice I’m gonna kick your ass to why you interrupt at a right moment. This chapter is so fucking funny, I laughing alot and they are have a great time together, love them. Ok post soon, thanks!
stop playin