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Bette&Tina Beginning in College Fallen_angel style
Shane: “Don’t be such a lez man” shaking her head.
Alice: “Seriously guys”. (She looks at Shane) “Can you carry me”
Shane: (smiling) “Do I look like your ***** Al”
Alice: “Nobut if you want you can be my *****”. Laughs
Bette and Tina burst out laughing.
Alice: “Well can you at least push me out onto the dance floor so I can bob up and down on my chair and wave my arms around”.
Both Tina and Shane grab Alice and unsteadily drag her out onto the dance floor.
Alice: “Wowit’s a miracle I can feel my legs”. She turns to the person behind her. (smiling) “I can feel my legs”.
All 4 of them start dancing to the music bobbing up and down with the crowd. Alice starts singing at the top of her lungs and is joined by Tina. Shane and Bette laughing at the girls singing their little hearts out.
Brooke comes up and stands in front of Shane, she gives Shane a wink. They begin dancing than Shane pulls her in and they begin to kiss.
Alice: (shouting to Tina) “See she cant help herself, freakin Hoochie”.
Bette: “Hey I’m gonna go get a drink”.
Both girls nod and continue dancing. A big drunk guy comes up and starts dancing behind Tina. He grabs Tina and spins her round so that they were face to face. He tries to kiss her but she pushes him away. He laughs and pulls her back in closer grinding his body against hers.
Tina: (trying to push the guys arms away) ‘Get off me”
Guy: “Come-on baby we’re just dancing”
Tina: ” I don’t want to dance” she try’s to push him away again.
Guy: “Sure you do” Alice steps in.
Alice: “Hey she said she didn’t want to dance ya big ***** neandathor”
Guy: (not letting Tina go) “And who are you, her pimp”.
Alice: ” No but I’m your mums and let me tell you she’s one of my best workers”.
Guy: “***** off” he grabs Tina’s *****.
Tina pushes the guy so hard it sends her backwards only to be grabbed around the waist again. She spins around to see Bette. Bette places her hands on Tina’s hips and turns her around so the guy couldn’t grab her again. They start swaying to the music, their hips grinding together.
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(55 votes, average: 3.27 out of 5)
Oh Alice, you ruined their moment! Tina is going to kick your ass, but they are going to have a major hangover :)
That was funny as hell. This chapter had me in tears.
talk about “cockblocking” by alice..lol. That was a funny chapter…lol
The three amingo. that is funny The Mummy Pimp. How far can this go before Bette goes crazy with Tina. Guess Tina could plant a juices wet lip lock on Bette first. Alice Shaneand Tina are so funny together. thanks
great job Fallen Angel ! laugh & fun & sexual anticipation.. what a great combination ! I just love this story!
You are a riot the way you write the conversations between these girls. I love Alice. But Bette and Tina were hot together. NIce job.
Damit! Alice.
Realy enjoying this story and love the diologue. Hope all goes good at your end, take care.
I had so much fun reading your story, was laughing out loud all the time, just love it! Can’t wait untill next week’s chapter!
I’m really enjoy reading on it I Love it the Interaction with Bette and Tina it’s is really good OK! PLS. post soon!
ha ha ur story’s so funny, I’m really enjoyin it. Have to say though, those are some rose-tinted glasses Bettes got, cas anytime I’m sober n I hang out with people who r wasted I just end up wantin to slap them so bad! She must really like Tina. Also, MY GOD that is a LOT of alcohol! (and I’m an Irish college student so u know its serious!:-) )
I am loving this story, damn that Alice!
“Well can you at least push me out onto the dance floor so I can bob up and down on my chair and wave my arms around”.
lmao possibly the best line ever!!!really liking the story.
ah that alice, what a bad timing she has :p
great chapter, keep it up!
This story is so damn funny. I love it. Its taking me back to the days when my friends and I use to go out and party and do stupid stuff. Those were the days. Now Alice, girl has got to stop interrupiting Tina and Miss Hottie.Common when are they gonna at least kiss? Can’t wait for more.
Wow! I am new to L word Fan Fiction and believe me your story has been so entertaining especially the alice character. I have been in a laughing spree all night reading it.. Great Job..
really love this story, will wait for more
all the best..
Enjoying the story very much. Can’t wait to read more. My thoughts are with you for your loss as well. Your fan fiction family will miss you.
This is so much fun, just love it.
thanx 4 the post, i’ve got 2 say this is probably the greatest b-day present ever, i love your story i think is my favorite now, is so funny, and i love alice but i love her more when she’s drunk i think my eyes where watering with all the funny things that happen in the last too chapters. again thanx 4 the post. love rain
fuck. interruptus all damn night. right now im so mad at al for that and then your gonna be gone and shit. so not fair. *sigh*
be safe and sorry for your loss.
This is hilareous! And HOT!! Can’t wait to see this sexual tension build :) Post asasp!!
xxx
Great Chapter Fallen Angel 10. I love the way that Shane, Alice, and Tina are when they are drunk. I laugh my ass off when I read your story. Can’t wait for the next chapter, next week. I hope that the funeral will go well and no more accidents will occur. Take care, Fallen Angel 10.
Ah damn Alice I’m gonna kick your ass to why you interrupt at a right moment. This chapter is so fucking funny, I laughing alot and they are have a great time together, love them. Ok post soon, thanks!
stop playin