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BETTE AND TINA… THE REST OF THEIR LIFE… ch.181
Tina: babe… please dance with me…
Bette stood up and as they shared a very romantic dance… Tina blindfolded Bette… then Tina started to unbutton Bette’s shirt… and soon it was off and on the floor…. next she unhooked her bra… and then she
pulled her shorts down and the thong followed… Tina still had her dancing
in her arms…
Bette: do I get to undress you…
Tina: No you don’t… this is my show… as the song ended… Tina hit the pause button… taking her hand… she led her into the
Bedroom… and sat her in a chair… now remember to just look at me… and no place else… ok…
Bette: I love looking at you… so baby that’s not a problem…
Tina removed the blindfold… they were in their bedroom… Tina hit play again…
“Can’t take my eyes off of you”… starting playing…
Verse 1:
You’re just too good to be true
Can’t take my eyes off of you
You’d be like heaven to touch
I wanna hold you so much
At long last love has arrived
And I thank God I’m alive
You’re just too good to be true
Can’t take my eyes off of you
Verse 2:
Pardon the way that I stare
There’s nothing else to compare
The sight of you leaves me weak
There are no words left to speak
But if you feel like I feel
Please let me know that it’s real
You’re just too good to be true
Can’t take my eyes off of you
Chorus:
I love you baby and if it’s quite all right
I need you baby to warm the lonely nights
I love you baby, trust in me when I say
Oh pretty baby, don’t bring me down I pray
Oh pretty baby, now that I’ve found you stay
And let me love you baby, let me love you
As Tina danced in front of Bette… slowly removing her top… and then flinging it across the room… next the bra followed… Tina’s hips were swaying to the music… as
her shorts landed somewhere in their room… all she had on was her thong… Tina then reached and grabbed her high heel boots and slowly put them on… Bette watched as she inched them up each leg… until both were on… Next she put her Bow Tie on… then the vest… which she buttoned up and her breast’s looked like they were floating… Bette was just licking her lips… Tina continued… first one glove to her upper arm and then the other… topping it off with her Top Hat and Cane… she finished her dance…
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I give up… i had this all mapped out… bold high lights… underlined… and for all of my hard work… it still fucks up… i tried to fix it once… sorry ladies… but this is as good as it gets…
Great chapter Amanda. I’m still loving your story even if I don’t comment. Have fun in Vegas. I’ll miss your story, but will be anxiously awaiting your return.
F*CK WOMEN! that was soooo hot and you did a great job in writing the story and in my mind i ould see tina doing this AWSOME BABE i cant wait til you get backfrom VEGAS WITH YOUR WINNINGS youll have sooo many ideals and you will be fresh to go again babe…. thank you for posting this tonite and for all your wonderfull writing talents you could take i.c. job away from her and all the fans would love it..PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK BABE AND WIN BIG IN LOS WAGES…LOL
Good luck in Vegas, I hope you guys have a great time and win big :o)) It was a great post, but I missed Bettes thoughts watching Tina pole dance, she must have been on fire seeing her lover doing that for her!!!! Some great songs, I just loves Bobby Darin.
Have fun in Vegas, MG (is that why the Elvis song got in here?) Love the old songs,(I was listening to the Dells do ‘Oh, What a Night’ while reading this) I think Little Willie John did the best version of ‘Fever’ even if most have never heard it. Peggy Lee’s was great, too. Careful with those heels now, Tina.
Have fun in Vegas and don’t loose all your money. This was great and I could picture it perfectly.
Have fun in Vegas, then come back to us and continue this amazing story.
Never been to a strip bar before but the thought of Tina doing a pole dance -hmmmmmmm!
Damn, girl! That was fuckin’ HOT! And now you have to go and leave us hanging. :( hehe Oh and I knew all the songs which was a big bonus. I hope Vegas is/was good to you. Can’t wait to meet you in November!
Read the 2 chapters last night, or rather early this morning, but couldn’t keep my eyes open to leave a comment. But I’m back now. Hey, no worries about the format, etc. It’s the contents that matters! LOL! Hot hot hot pole dance and lap dance!!! Enjoy Vegas and wish you all the luck!
Thank for the treat! Have Fun and we’ll be waiting!
Amanda, That was HOT!!!! HOT!!!!!! HOT!!!!! Have fun in Vegas. But Please Post as Soon as you CAN!!! Thank you
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Sweetheart,you made my pulse high My heart beating so I could see it under my shirt,My mouth was dry and I could picture Tina doing this to a nude Bette. Bette was stronger than I would be. the songs were perpect and your writing did not suck. You did a wonderful job on this. thanks, WIN BIG IN VEGAS AND THINK OF US ONCE IN AWHILE .JUST A FLEETING THOUGHT. Thanks
Wow…that was hot…that was alot of action…no wonder Tina was tired. Wow…10 days without a story…what will we do? Well have fun and we’ll be waiting for your return.
Have a great time. Thanks for a great send off!!!!
Damn that was hot and awesome and can’t wait to see more. Amanda have fun and good luck in Vegas and win alot of moneys. Ok see you soon!!!!!!!!!!!