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BETTE AND TINA… THE REST OF THEIR LIFE… ch.181
Jill: so you’re still on for tomorrow night…
Tina: yes… this way we don’t have to get up early Sunday morning… and if I wait till Wednesday night… its too close…
Jill: true… and when is your mom and dad coming in…
Tina: that’s another thing… they may show up Thursday… or Wednesday… who knows…
Jill: well this way I get a play by play-on Monday morning…
Tina: smiling… you’re probably the only one I would tell…
Jill gets up and they hug each other…
Jill: lets get out of here…
Walking arm and arm out the door… and again they hug and kiss each other goodbye…
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Tina arrived home… she had plenty of time… Bette already called her and told her she would be home by 4:30 and she would pick up dinner…
Tina had her music all set… she loved the different melodies she had Mixed her self… the best parts from some of her favorite oldies… hopefully it all works together… as she started her final dress rehearsal… from the place she would have Bette sit to bringing her into the bedroom… and the music starting…
About an hour later… and a very tired Tina… but she was also very proud of her self… the music was sexy… but very powerful… it said everything she would have said if she had to speak…
Tina then put the pole away… and her costume away… saying a silent prayer… please dear god… let me pull this off… looking at the clock she had plenty of time… she wanted to take a quick shower… also thanking
god that she was over her period… and Bette would be by morning… if not sooner…
Bette finally arrived home… they both were very exhausted from working so
much all week… they ate… barely… almost falling asleep at the table…
Tina: babe… I think we need to sleep…
Bette: I know what you mean… and your right… I think I almost fell asleep in my plate…
Tina: we both almost did… so lets put this away… and get to bed…
Bette: I’ll make sure everything is all locked up and the lights are off…
Tina: ok I got this…
They both did just that… stripping and crawling in and meeting in the
middle… and falling asleep moments later…
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(32 votes, average: 4.44 out of 5)
I give up… i had this all mapped out… bold high lights… underlined… and for all of my hard work… it still fucks up… i tried to fix it once… sorry ladies… but this is as good as it gets…
Great chapter Amanda. I’m still loving your story even if I don’t comment. Have fun in Vegas. I’ll miss your story, but will be anxiously awaiting your return.
F*CK WOMEN! that was soooo hot and you did a great job in writing the story and in my mind i ould see tina doing this AWSOME BABE i cant wait til you get backfrom VEGAS WITH YOUR WINNINGS youll have sooo many ideals and you will be fresh to go again babe…. thank you for posting this tonite and for all your wonderfull writing talents you could take i.c. job away from her and all the fans would love it..PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK BABE AND WIN BIG IN LOS WAGES…LOL
Good luck in Vegas, I hope you guys have a great time and win big :o)) It was a great post, but I missed Bettes thoughts watching Tina pole dance, she must have been on fire seeing her lover doing that for her!!!! Some great songs, I just loves Bobby Darin.
Have fun in Vegas, MG (is that why the Elvis song got in here?) Love the old songs,(I was listening to the Dells do ‘Oh, What a Night’ while reading this) I think Little Willie John did the best version of ‘Fever’ even if most have never heard it. Peggy Lee’s was great, too. Careful with those heels now, Tina.
Have fun in Vegas and don’t loose all your money. This was great and I could picture it perfectly.
Have fun in Vegas, then come back to us and continue this amazing story.
Never been to a strip bar before but the thought of Tina doing a pole dance -hmmmmmmm!
Damn, girl! That was fuckin’ HOT! And now you have to go and leave us hanging. :( hehe Oh and I knew all the songs which was a big bonus. I hope Vegas is/was good to you. Can’t wait to meet you in November!
Read the 2 chapters last night, or rather early this morning, but couldn’t keep my eyes open to leave a comment. But I’m back now. Hey, no worries about the format, etc. It’s the contents that matters! LOL! Hot hot hot pole dance and lap dance!!! Enjoy Vegas and wish you all the luck!
Thank for the treat! Have Fun and we’ll be waiting!
Amanda, That was HOT!!!! HOT!!!!!! HOT!!!!! Have fun in Vegas. But Please Post as Soon as you CAN!!! Thank you
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Sweetheart,you made my pulse high My heart beating so I could see it under my shirt,My mouth was dry and I could picture Tina doing this to a nude Bette. Bette was stronger than I would be. the songs were perpect and your writing did not suck. You did a wonderful job on this. thanks, WIN BIG IN VEGAS AND THINK OF US ONCE IN AWHILE .JUST A FLEETING THOUGHT. Thanks
Wow…that was hot…that was alot of action…no wonder Tina was tired. Wow…10 days without a story…what will we do? Well have fun and we’ll be waiting for your return.
Have a great time. Thanks for a great send off!!!!
Damn that was hot and awesome and can’t wait to see more. Amanda have fun and good luck in Vegas and win alot of moneys. Ok see you soon!!!!!!!!!!!