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BETTE AND TINA… THE REST OF THEIR LIFE… ch.181
Tina: ok babe… just let me move your chair and then I want you to sit again… leaning in for a quick kiss… and when she moved from in front of her… Bette saw the pole… her heart skipped a beat… and the next song ran through her…
“You give me Fever”… (I had a web site with the music but we are not allowed to post it… sorry )
You give me fever
In the morning
You give me fever
In the evening
Fever when you hold me tight
Never knew how much I loved you
Never knew how much I cared
When you put your arms around me
I get a feeling that’s so hard to bear
You give me fever
You give me fever
When you kiss me
Fever when you hold me tight
You give me fever
Fever
In the morning
Fever all through the night
The sun lights up the daytime
The moon lights up the night
I light up when you call my name
And I know you’re gonna treat me right
You give me fever
You give me fever
When you kiss me
Fever when you hold me tight
You give me fever
Fever
In the morning
Fever all through the night
Everybody
Everybody
Gives you fever
That is something we all know
Something we all know
Fever isn’t
Such a new thing
Fever started long time ago
You give me fever
Never knew how much I loved you
Never knew how much I cared
When you put your arms around me
I get a fever that’s too hard to bear
You give me fever
When you kiss me
Fever when you hold me tight
You give me fever
Oh I’m on fire
Fever all through the night
All through the night
You give me fever
I’m burning up
Fever all through the night
You give me fever to my bones
You give me fever
Fever
Ah when you kiss me
You give me fever
I’ve got a feeling that’s so hard to bear
Fever all through the night
You give me fever
Fever
Fever
You give me fever
If that didn’t say what she was feeling… each time the song changed tempo… Tina would slide up and down and then hump the pole… then turn around and slide her cheeks up and down the pole… Bette was on the edge of her chair… she wanted to jump Tina on that pole… but she also wanted to see what else she had in store for that lucky pole…
Tina was sweating… and tired… she again straddled Bette’s lap… Bette could feel her heart beating… fast…
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(32 votes, average: 4.44 out of 5)
I give up… i had this all mapped out… bold high lights… underlined… and for all of my hard work… it still fucks up… i tried to fix it once… sorry ladies… but this is as good as it gets…
Great chapter Amanda. I’m still loving your story even if I don’t comment. Have fun in Vegas. I’ll miss your story, but will be anxiously awaiting your return.
F*CK WOMEN! that was soooo hot and you did a great job in writing the story and in my mind i ould see tina doing this AWSOME BABE i cant wait til you get backfrom VEGAS WITH YOUR WINNINGS youll have sooo many ideals and you will be fresh to go again babe…. thank you for posting this tonite and for all your wonderfull writing talents you could take i.c. job away from her and all the fans would love it..PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK BABE AND WIN BIG IN LOS WAGES…LOL
Good luck in Vegas, I hope you guys have a great time and win big :o)) It was a great post, but I missed Bettes thoughts watching Tina pole dance, she must have been on fire seeing her lover doing that for her!!!! Some great songs, I just loves Bobby Darin.
Have fun in Vegas, MG (is that why the Elvis song got in here?) Love the old songs,(I was listening to the Dells do ‘Oh, What a Night’ while reading this) I think Little Willie John did the best version of ‘Fever’ even if most have never heard it. Peggy Lee’s was great, too. Careful with those heels now, Tina.
Have fun in Vegas and don’t loose all your money. This was great and I could picture it perfectly.
Have fun in Vegas, then come back to us and continue this amazing story.
Never been to a strip bar before but the thought of Tina doing a pole dance -hmmmmmmm!
Damn, girl! That was fuckin’ HOT! And now you have to go and leave us hanging. :( hehe Oh and I knew all the songs which was a big bonus. I hope Vegas is/was good to you. Can’t wait to meet you in November!
Read the 2 chapters last night, or rather early this morning, but couldn’t keep my eyes open to leave a comment. But I’m back now. Hey, no worries about the format, etc. It’s the contents that matters! LOL! Hot hot hot pole dance and lap dance!!! Enjoy Vegas and wish you all the luck!
Thank for the treat! Have Fun and we’ll be waiting!
Amanda, That was HOT!!!! HOT!!!!!! HOT!!!!! Have fun in Vegas. But Please Post as Soon as you CAN!!! Thank you
hottttttttttttttt longer
Sweetheart,you made my pulse high My heart beating so I could see it under my shirt,My mouth was dry and I could picture Tina doing this to a nude Bette. Bette was stronger than I would be. the songs were perpect and your writing did not suck. You did a wonderful job on this. thanks, WIN BIG IN VEGAS AND THINK OF US ONCE IN AWHILE .JUST A FLEETING THOUGHT. Thanks
Wow…that was hot…that was alot of action…no wonder Tina was tired. Wow…10 days without a story…what will we do? Well have fun and we’ll be waiting for your return.
Have a great time. Thanks for a great send off!!!!
Damn that was hot and awesome and can’t wait to see more. Amanda have fun and good luck in Vegas and win alot of moneys. Ok see you soon!!!!!!!!!!!