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BETTE AND TINA… THE REST OF THEIR LIFE… ch.181
9:00am
Bette wakes up first… Tina was still out cold… she just closes her eyes and was back in LaLa land…
10:15am
Tina wakes now… and as she looks at the clock… she jumps up… and Bette also wakes…
Bette: What… What’s the matter
Tina: we slept almost 12 hours…
Bette: well we needed it…
Tina: we have a lot to do today…. extra wash… cleaning the house… start to pack
Bette: ok ok I got it… can I get a good morning kiss first…
Tina: OK… but that’s it… leaning in as their lips meet for the first time this day…
Bette: so that’s all I get… all day
Tina: NO… but that’s it for now… ok no funny business… Promise…
Bette: ok lets get every thing done… and then
Tina: well then we will see…
They make coffee and eat breakfast… Tina puts on the first load of clothes… Bette strips the bed… and remakes it… she gets the suitcases out and starts her list…
Tina: Babe… you clean our bathroom… and I’ll get the other one…
Bette: ok… and then I want to start packing…
Tina: well after we finish the house… then we will pack together…
Bette: ok… we can get a lot of things packed… not everything…
Tina: don’t worry I won’t bug you on where you are taking me… we can pack all of the essentials that we will need… you know like underwear, bras, toiletries…
Bette: Shorts, tee shirts, pants, a couple of fancy dresses…
They both worked hard… and soon all of the laundry was washed and folded… and put away… the house was vacuumed… and everything shined… they even started to pack…
Tina: well babe we did good today…
Bette: we did… and in record time…
Tina: because today we both were dressed… smiling…
Bette: I know… I missed watching you vacuum naked…
Tina: well we will go back to our usual routine after we come home from the Honeymoon…
Bette: how about we relax in the Hot Tub for a little while…
Tina: looking at the time… 3:15… ok for 20 minutes and then the shower…
Bette: hmmmmmmmmm… the shower
Tina: hey down tiger… we did a lot today… if you’re a good girl… you’ll get a reward tonight…
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(32 votes, average: 4.44 out of 5)
I give up… i had this all mapped out… bold high lights… underlined… and for all of my hard work… it still fucks up… i tried to fix it once… sorry ladies… but this is as good as it gets…
Great chapter Amanda. I’m still loving your story even if I don’t comment. Have fun in Vegas. I’ll miss your story, but will be anxiously awaiting your return.
F*CK WOMEN! that was soooo hot and you did a great job in writing the story and in my mind i ould see tina doing this AWSOME BABE i cant wait til you get backfrom VEGAS WITH YOUR WINNINGS youll have sooo many ideals and you will be fresh to go again babe…. thank you for posting this tonite and for all your wonderfull writing talents you could take i.c. job away from her and all the fans would love it..PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK BABE AND WIN BIG IN LOS WAGES…LOL
Good luck in Vegas, I hope you guys have a great time and win big :o)) It was a great post, but I missed Bettes thoughts watching Tina pole dance, she must have been on fire seeing her lover doing that for her!!!! Some great songs, I just loves Bobby Darin.
Have fun in Vegas, MG (is that why the Elvis song got in here?) Love the old songs,(I was listening to the Dells do ‘Oh, What a Night’ while reading this) I think Little Willie John did the best version of ‘Fever’ even if most have never heard it. Peggy Lee’s was great, too. Careful with those heels now, Tina.
Have fun in Vegas and don’t loose all your money. This was great and I could picture it perfectly.
Have fun in Vegas, then come back to us and continue this amazing story.
Never been to a strip bar before but the thought of Tina doing a pole dance -hmmmmmmm!
Damn, girl! That was fuckin’ HOT! And now you have to go and leave us hanging. :( hehe Oh and I knew all the songs which was a big bonus. I hope Vegas is/was good to you. Can’t wait to meet you in November!
Read the 2 chapters last night, or rather early this morning, but couldn’t keep my eyes open to leave a comment. But I’m back now. Hey, no worries about the format, etc. It’s the contents that matters! LOL! Hot hot hot pole dance and lap dance!!! Enjoy Vegas and wish you all the luck!
Thank for the treat! Have Fun and we’ll be waiting!
Amanda, That was HOT!!!! HOT!!!!!! HOT!!!!! Have fun in Vegas. But Please Post as Soon as you CAN!!! Thank you
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Sweetheart,you made my pulse high My heart beating so I could see it under my shirt,My mouth was dry and I could picture Tina doing this to a nude Bette. Bette was stronger than I would be. the songs were perpect and your writing did not suck. You did a wonderful job on this. thanks, WIN BIG IN VEGAS AND THINK OF US ONCE IN AWHILE .JUST A FLEETING THOUGHT. Thanks
Wow…that was hot…that was alot of action…no wonder Tina was tired. Wow…10 days without a story…what will we do? Well have fun and we’ll be waiting for your return.
Have a great time. Thanks for a great send off!!!!
Damn that was hot and awesome and can’t wait to see more. Amanda have fun and good luck in Vegas and win alot of moneys. Ok see you soon!!!!!!!!!!!