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Are you the one? Part 9 (II)
"Yeah" Alice smiled back and decide to let it go till tonight.
They walked to the car park, smiling, both decided to forget about their thoughts for a while and just enjoyed the company of each other before reality hit.
The first destination was the shopping mall. Alice was so excited since she hadn’t been to these places for like 3 months. She went from shops to shops and tried the clothes she liked with Dana looking on happily although her hands were clutching more than 10 shopping bags now. Before Alice walked out from those respective changing rooms, Dana had already paid for what Alice had tried. When Alice asked why she would just simply shrugged and smiled. After they had done with shopping, they headed to McDonald’s for snacks. Dana suggested the place as she knew Alice would love it. Dana ordered burger, fries and soft drinks for herself, a muffin, a salad and plain water for Alice. Alice pouted looking at Dana’s burger and fries. Gulping down one big bite of the burger, Dana sensed the alarm immediately and offered to order the same food as Alice’s while brushed her food aside. Alice laughed and touched at the same time. She told Dana to go ahead as she would take revenge on burgers and fries one week later. They laughed throughout the entire meal that gained the attention of the customers there.
After lunch they went on for a movie. Dana was all nervous as she wanted to hold Alice’s hand but didn’t know how to make the first move. She was suggesting a horror movie earlier, thought it would give her more advantages, but Alice just brushed off the idea and made her watched a comedy instead. Dana had no option but to follow upon seeing Alice pouted and crossed her arm. She sighed and shifted at her seat uncomfortably while the rest of the audience were laughing at the silly scene. Alice, realizing Dana’s intention, smiled and put her hand on the arm rest for easy access. Dana on the other hand was still thinking whether or not she should grab the opportunity. Hell, do it now or never, she thought. She moved her hand to Alice’s and entwined their fingers. Dana was relief that Alice complied to her request. Both felt their heart beating faster. Now Dana finally laughed, although she didn’t really know what was playing. Her mind just focused to feel the softness and warmth of Alice’s fingers. As they walked out from the cinema, Alice laughed to herself as Dana didn’t want to let go of her hand, until they reached the car park, she had no choice but to let go reluctantly.
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uhhuh, I thought you have done your hang over research well. There is nothing like it and believe me if you can avoid it, do so. lol. It is nasty, any noise, any light will make your head hurt. Don’t say I did not warn you. As soon as A said that she would tag along back to the hotel, I started to worry that she would discover some papers with D’s last name on it. That was really close. Phew! What a long date it was! And it was not over yet, right? Love the scene at the movie. D was too goofy, laughing but not following the show. The beach scene was also interesting. You are doing a great job with them trying to know each other better. Keep up with your imagination. THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!
I second what HD said: I am glad you have never had a hangover and you wrote it well. Loving the flirting banter and words of endearment between the two. So glad Alice didn’t see the travel documents. Although I like to think she was looking for the flight date rather than Dane’s last name. Dana was so cute on the shopping/lunch/movie. She was treating Alice very well. It’s amazing how open Dana is being. I hope Alice remembers that when the reveal eventually happens. I also hope the date is not quite over. The ending leads to many possibilities. Thank you so much, uhhuh!! Excellent chapter!!