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A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 6
Grace: "You guys are going to have to do this for Eli he’s counting on all of us, and I couldn’t risk keeping you guys out of the loop on the off hand chance that you’d tell her to get Eli. I had to give you guys a heads up before it all went down. So now that you know just pretend that you don’t and that you’re looking forward to talking to Eli, alright."
Sandy & Bryce: "alright." As Grace is walking out of the kitchen Bryce turns to Sandy. "You know she can be pretty scary sometimes." "I know we need to find nicer friends."
They all file out into the living room when Tina comes out.
Tina: "It looks like I have a packed house tonight. Are you guys here to talk to Eli?"
Grace: "Yes."
Oliver: "I wouldn’t miss the chance to talk to the boy."
Tina: "Glad to know I’m not the only one missing him. I even let his dog sleep in my room."
At hearing that Bryce looks up at Tina.
Bryce: "He’s not loose is he…I mean you don’t have him inside do you?"
Tina: At hearing this Tina starts laughing. "You have nothing to worry about Bryce. Nero is outside on the balcony. I don’t know why you’re scared of him, he’s such a sweet dog and he’s very well behaved."
Bryce: "Tina I don’t care how well behaved he is, he’s not a regular dog…he’s a freaken horse. I don’t know how he can be classified as a dog when he’s big enough to eat other dogs."
At this point everyone’s laughing at how worked up Bryce is getting.
Tina: "I’ll admit that he’s a big dog, but he’s never done anything to you to make you afraid of him. He’s only smelled you a few times and licked your hand."
Bryce: "I choose to believe that it was more like a taste test. He’s just waiting for the right time to pounce. Why did you even buy him, did you know he was going to get this big. I mean seriously he outweighed Eli after a couple of months, he drags my poor nephew around the city like a rag doll. He weighs more than Sandy and me combined."
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(65 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
I took a chance and checked one last time before leaving work, and yeah you had posted. Cannot believe you have just left me hanging again. I’m so excited, and can’t wait till that first hello. It gives me goose bumps thinking about it, wait till the gang meets Eli. Hopefully you’ll have posted again when I come in to work.
Totally loving it. SO pleased at how accepting Tina was, and I am EXTREMELY excited for Bette and Her to talk. Post Soon!!!
this is really good post soon please
SWEET……now the next chapter is gonna be filled with lots of anxiety, so maybe in the chapter after that we’ll get some where…..i hope. POST SOON!!!!
That went well!!
This is really awesome! Great story!!!!!
I was waiting for a yelling match. O.o I can’t believe Tina was that cool about it. Boy will Bette be surprised when Tina calls instead of Eli!
Please hurry with the next installment!
Can’t wait for the conversation between Bette and Tina.
Awesome and now let see Tina and Bette talking!!!!!!!!!!!!
I can’t wait for Tina to call Bette. Loving your story. post soon
I very much appreciate you taking the time to post this chapter. But you have to tell your instructor that you can not do the project because you have this other project to do first. I am really loving this story and now I will have a heart attack because the wait will seem like forever. My heart is pounding just waiting to see how Bette is going to react to Tina’s voice. I know that you can not post too soon but really try please.
You can’t finish the project on time, that you have hundreds of fans waiting to see what happens in this story. Give Him the story and you will be forgiven for being late. I love this child so honest,and smart and loves his mom so much. The sad part is he will love Bette just as much.and she him. Hope that Tina will let Eli spend a lot of time with Bette. thanks
Tina is so understanding! she is so sweet!and Eli too let us read Bette’s reaction when Tinal call her. Excellent chapter!
Looking forward to THAT phone conversation!
I like your story really a lot. Can’t wait till they finally talk again. Take your time, it is worth the wait1
That went very well. I hope Bette and Tina can talk soon. Please Post Very Soon
wonderful story!! i can’t wait to read more!! please post as soon and as often as you can!!!!! =)