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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 165
“Yeah, I never got to tell him, he left before I could. But what he tells me now, is that Maxine told him that I was in love with Greg, and that I was planning on breaking up with him. She gave him money and told him to leave.” Bette says, still wiping away tears.
“Oh my God Bette, how could she do that?” Dana asks.
“I’ve asked myself that question many times too. You know, she tried pulling something like that after I introduced her to Tina.” Bette says and looks at Dana.
“Yeah, I remember you mentioned that. So you are trying to find her again? How old is she?” Dana asks.
“She’s 17, going on 18 All I know is that she was adopted by someone living in Massachusetts. Now here comes the weird part. Jessie has switched teams, She met this girl, Julia.” Bette starts.
“Wow, she did?” Dana asks smiling.
“Yeah, she showed us a picture of her and she looks a lot like me, the hair, the skin, she’s a little lighter than me, and her facial features are similar. What I haven’t told Tina and Jessie is that she also looks like Pete. And she’s from Boston.” Bette adds.
“Oh my, do you think it could be her?” Dana asks.
“Yeah, I do. She’s coming today, Jessie is picking her up later. They are both transferring to UCLA, they are checking the campus out. I’m so nervous.” Bette says.
“Yeah, I can only imagine.
Bette looks at her watch.
“I should go, I have 15 minutes with Maxine before the meeting starts.” Bette says and stands up and bend down, kissing her boys goodbye.
“Be good to Aunt Dana okay? Love you.” She says and walks inside and then to Maxine’s office. She knocks.
“Come in.” She hears Maxine call out.
She opens the door and step inside and closes the door.
“Hey, Bette, how are you? How are Tina and the boys?” Maxine asks.
“We are all fine. I ran into Peter.” Bette says, not saying anything else. Maxine’s mouth opens slightly.
“Peter?” Maxine asks, trying to pretend that she doesn’t know what Bette is talking about.
“Oh cut the bullshit Maxine.” Bette says, raising her voice.
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(29 votes, average: 3.97 out of 5)
class as usual post soon xxx
I love this story. Post soon plese…
what a bitch…that maxine!!!! but it looks like Julia never believed her cause she is still looking for her birth mother, UPDATE SOON!!!!
Great post. Maxine is a bitch!
What goes around comes around,Bette will fill like her Mother is dead. Julia and Bett e has missed so much because of Maxine. Sad,but some times Parents thinks they are doing what is best for their child… thanks Post soon thanksbettyvhall
i haven’t had much chance to comment in time since you post so often, but I’m always following you… another great chapter… can’t wait to see what Bette will do with the bitch of maxine and mainly her encounter with julia… thanks
GEEZZZ…that woman is mean..really is..how could a mother do that to her own child and worse do that with her grandchild???? i hope Julia forgive Bette for what she did..i know 18 years is a long time but they have to think in the future and all they great times they have to enjoy each other…both suffered boecause of lies..no more lies Bette need to talk to her soon..great chapter..as always thanks and psot soon :o)
Lauren, even with drama still a GREAT story. Please post again soon!!!Thank you
Brilliant. Can’t wait for the next chapter.
What is wrong with Maxine? do she loves Bette? she did a lot of awful thing, i hope Bette will be available to explain to Julia all
I would like to know maxine’s motiation for doing that to Bette, and not some bulls&%t story. The actual truth. if i were Bette, I would just fire her,take her keys to everything, and have her escorted from the bldg., without a lot of drama. Then change all the locks, have an accoutant go over the books and if anything is missing, file charges and lock her up in jail. If she was capable of such subterfuge for so long, what else has she done. She could have diverted funds from Bette’s earnings and as long as she was the only one controlling everything, who would know. Bette could be in financial trouble w/o even knowing it. This woman is cold hearted and cares for no one but herself. Once Bette finds out that she is financially sound and the club is financially sound the she needs to tear Maxine a new a%&hole and send her packing. She needs to get maxine’s name off all accounts, etc. This story is great. Thanks for the post.
I would like to know maxine’s motiation for doing that to Bette, and not some bulls&%t story. The actual truth. if i were Bette, I would just fire her,take her keys to everything, and have her escorted from the bldg., without a lot of drama. Then change all the locks, have an accoutant go over the books and if anything is missing, file charges and lock her up in jail. If she was capable of such subterfuge for so long, what else has she done. She could have diverted funds from Bette’s earnings and as long as she was the only one controlling everything, who would know. Bette could be in financial trouble w/o even knowing it. This woman is cold hearted and cares for no one but herself. Once Bette finds out that she is financially sound and the club is financially sound the she needs to tear Maxine a new a%&hole and send her packing. She needs to get maxine’s name off all accounts, etc. This story is great. Thanks for the post.
Wow you nver disappoint do you! I think Maxine’s behaviour is totally out of line. However I would also like to see her apologize to both Bette and Julia at some point in the future, like after quite a while, and then they can become a family again. Even if that is unrealistic I would really hope that Bette can recover from the shock and anger enough to be okay meeting her daughter. It is going to be so special and I can’t wait to see Jessie and Jules together either. Such a great story. Keep it up. Again thanks for posting.
Thanks Julia and Bette they need to really patch up to mother and daughter! Thanks for posted!!
Oh god I am dying! I sure hope that you are able to post soon. Please hurry. I can’t wait to see what happens when Bette finally fires Maxine and then lets her know that Julia is actually on her way to her home. Then, I hope that Julia understands everything that has happened and that she can accept Bette as her mother.
Great chapter Lauren, I just love your story. Can’t wait for Bette to meet Julia.
Always a pleasor Lauren – glad Tina decided to stay home and wait for Bette. Very nice and do post soon
Wow. That’s really messed up. I don’t know if Bette will be able to handle seeing Julia after what she just learned.
Damn I can’t beleive Maxine doing that to Bette, that sad and but glad that now Bette know that Julia is her daughter and can’t wait to see they meet. Ok post soon please, thanks!
I cannot believe that Maxine could be so nonchalant about finally sharing that information with Bette. She’s so cold and distant. Telling Bette matter-of-factly how she told Julia or her parents that the birth mother died during childbirth. I can understand that as a mother she wanted what was best for her daughter, but she manipulated her daughter’s life. She manufactured lies after lies and she doesn’t seem a bit concerned by the hurt she caused. It’s like she tried to build the perfect world she wanted for herself and her daughter and she didn’t care if she destroyed her daughter in the process…as long as their lives seemed perfect to the outside world. That is truly sad.
And I need you Lauren to post again and soon….this is good stuff and I can’t wait…. :o))