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I’d love you but I just don’t think I’m good enough for that…. Ch. 2
His name was Alfred.
He owned a large section of a business which specialised in fitting fire extinguishers in offices over the
He was that better someone
I had been beaten by a man named Alfred.
He sounds like a lovely man, I lied through gritted teeth and a false smile. How much longer I could wear this mask was anyones guess it was slipping though, I knew it. And soon enough
Yes I was pushing the boundaries, completely abandoning the subtle approach so many use these days. Where does it get you anyway?
Her confused gaze proved to me that my words had impacted on her somewhat. I turned my face away, suddenly embarrassed by the brash was I had just conducted myself.
Ive come to the opinion that there is more than just one person in life you could be happy with Dana,
Maybe you were just mistaken all along
How the hell would you know what you gave me Dana? She didnt yell, but her words were cold, somewhat defensive. It was just that little bit worse than being yelled at. You gave me more than I could ever express to you. In fact the only thing you didnt give me was a chance to talk to you before you left me.
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Communication hasn’t been their strong suit, has it? I’m glad fanfic writers remember that Alice is bisexual.
sigh… looking forward to your next post.
Go get your girl Dana!!!
Alfred…yeah I love the goofy names we love to pick for these “other men” Angus, Alfred…Lisa yeah the new story is wonderful I just hope you haven’t given up on Soul Singing
Yes, there certainly is a lack of (good) communcation between these two. It’s gonna be hard for Dana to win Alice back, but I’ll wait and see. ;) As for Soul Singing. Let them have dinner and let them realize that they are meant to be…no matter what (*a helpless romantic*). :D (And they’re gonna live happily ever after in Danishville. :D)
bojangles – i love this new story of yours. so cute and full of angst. my favorites. anyway – post soon. and don’t give up on soul singing. its too good to let drop. if i think of something to help you with i will let you know. your rock. great job!
I’m so loving this fic, I’ve been checking daily for new chapters I hope there will be more soon, please don’t keep us wait too long bojangles.
you captured their feelings really good. I really liked this. It’s deep. And it’s somthing that was missing in the show. Among other 1000 things. Can’t wait for more!
OMG, ALFRED!!! that is so fucked up. he has got to be the most boring, up tight, asshole in the world. is that alice’s attempt tp find someone “better” than dana. lets just face it, you can’t get no better than dana. LOVING IT!!! please post soon. PEACE.
They have always lacked in the communication department. I love that Alice’s fiance is named ALFRED! I literally was laughing out loud when I read that…priceless. Great update! As for Soul Singing, I would love to see a happy Danish-even just a little bit :) Since the writers on the show only like to portray the only relationships that work out as straight relationships, I’d like to see a couple actually be happy. I also have always loved the music spin (you know with Alice and her band) that you’ve put on your story. I would love to see Alice on tour and Dana showing up…anyways I’ll stop rambling. I hope the story starts to flow again, it is my favorite Danish story!:)
that was great I wonder if she is going to see alice please post soon so I can find out