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    Would you like to dance? Part 2 of 2

    Story written on April 9, 2005 by Seahurst.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=53111
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    Does Bette get another chance, or is one all we get?

    Bette recovered first, and did what came natural to her. She gave Tina one of her melt your heart smiles. "Oh, Im sorry…I didnt…" Bette stopped talking, because she was stunned by the look of dread this normally beautiful woman was giving her. She was looking at her like she would rather be anywhere than right next to her. Why is she looking at me that way… she wondered.. She tried again, confused as to this womans reaction to her…especially to her smile. It had always worked its magic, and gotten her through occasions such as this before. Then, as Bette and Tina continued to stare at each other, Bette realized she had never experienced an occasion such as this before. Her stomach was in her throat…her heart was beating a mile a minute…and she could feel a slow moving wave of heat moving throughout her body. Oh my God, she’s so beautiful! Speak Bette! Say something before she slips away! Bette then did something she hadnt done since her first crush on a girl…she let out a nervous little girl giggle. Immediately embarrassed by the sound that had just gurgled out of her, she swiftly brought her hand up to her mouth, and lowered her eyes.

    This action of Bette’s totally stupefied Tina, and try as she might, she couldn’t move. How could the same woman that wouldnt even look at her minutes ago, be standing next to her now, giggling like a school girl? Tina not only had no answer to that question, but she had also lost her ability to speak…so, there she stood, standing next to the bathroom sink, in a women’s bar in West Hollywood…hanging onto the counter with a death grip in order to keep herself from falling, because her knees were dangerously close to giving out on her!

    Bette was mortified that she had sounded so silly, and at this point just wanted to wash her hands and escape the woman who had been a witness to her childish relapse. She quickly washed her hands, but as she reached for a paper towel, she looked in the mirror again, and what she saw, caused her hands to fall listlessly by her sides. There staring back at her was the most beautiful smile…a smile that spoke volumes with each twitch of its lips…a smile that was kind and generous…***** and seductive…supportive and comforting…playful and goofy…a smile that could sooth all wounds, take away all worries…a smile that could cause your heart to miss a beat….. A smile that you yearn to come home to every day…

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    3. ‘The End’? Nooo ~ I was loving it so, Sea. And is there such a thing really as ‘too sweet’ anyway? Hmmm, booking dental appointment just in case because any happy B&T moment is soooo worth it :)

    11. Yummy and so very sweet! Thanks for this one, Sea! Really liked your special spin on this B&T beginning.

      Always so good to read about some sticky sweetness since we are not really seeing any of that on Sunday’s show…

      Always a please… Thanks for writing and sharing!

    12. A fairy tale! The princess meets the princess of her dreams, and they live happily ever after!!!!
      Thank you! I needed this to counteract the wretchedness that is B&T on TV!
      So sweet!!!!

    27. That was really beautiful, Sea! Loved it. Especially this part…

      “Bette…” Tina whispered.

      “Yeah, T.”

      “Take me home.”

      Bette gulped. “Home?”

      “Yeah, baby…I don’t want to wait any longer…I want to start our life together right now…tonight…” “

      Just beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

    31. Sea…. This is simply D_E_L_I_C_I_O_U_S. I enjoyed it for many reasons namely the writing is superb, the flow is just melodious and like icing on the cake your selection of words are just ultra sensual the kind that gives you goose bumps and the end result just give this wonderful tingling feeling I was reading this with the same silly goofy grin throughout this chapter.
      I was so into the story I could swear I can hear back ground music in my head singing this song… Love is in the air~~ everywhere I looked around love is in the air every sight and every sound~~~ And I don’t know if I’m being foolish Don’t know if I’m being wise~~~ But is something that I must believe in And it’s there when I look in your eyes~~~~ love is in the air~~~ love is in the air~~~ LOL. Sea you’ve made me act like a complete fool here LOL and I don’t normally show this goofy side of me publicly but this story is just to damn sweet to not react like this *smile *

      I absolutely believe that when that love of your life stands before you even the most eloquent person just turns all wobbly and words fails just fail ya people.. hmm~~ this sure brings back memories *ah~~~~ :o)

      I’m rambling here … but hey Seahurst I enjoyed this delightful read tremendously! THANK YOU for this delicious presentation!

    33. Sea, I can understand why we all love your stories. Please don’t let it end there. I have hated Season 2 so far. I keep watching Season 1 to have some hope the show will get better (before the finale). Thanks for the lovely story.

    37. Perfect. Just Perfect. I wish they would give us a few moments like this to combat the angst of Season 2.

      I’m begging you to continue this lovely story!

    39. Sea,

      You know that chocolate releases endorphins that match those released during orgasm. Well, your sweet, chocolatey story does exactly the same! LOVE IT!

      Please continue though.

    40. Sea,
      You are truly awe-inspiring; how you keep the mystery and suspense perfectly balanced with all the emotion and love is breathtaking.
      Adore the way you integrated the lost earring scene into this story.
      This has been a wonderful interlude and would love you to continue but understand if you want to carry on with “If it is meant to be…” as I am crazy and passionate about that story as well.
      Thank you for reminding me of how amazing and incredible real love can be.
      A fan.

    41. ….seahurst, you are without a doubt my favorite writer in the freagin’ world. Please…i know this was suppose to be a 2 of 2 …but do you think you might be able to continue on it? …I loved it, and am glad to say that, that was so dam romantic!

    42. Excellent chapter. This is my favorite story and love the way Bette and Tina meet. Please write more about this story and want to know more about this. Thank you!

    43. The End…End means over, finished, complete. uh….uh…that cant be right…i read that wrong…i had to have. Fandayumtabulous story. A smile at the end upon all who read it then the dumbfoundled look with wide open eyes….the end…. say it isnt so

    45. Bravo! Bravo! That was wonderful. I so enjoyed this story. Since this season has been one poo sandwich after another, this was just what the doctor ordered.

    50. I’m almost embarassed to post my stories anywhere near this. It was perfect. I think Ilene and Showtime could easily make up for the heartbreak of season 2 by giving us some flashback time in Season 3. We could just submit this as a script.

      ***runs off to start a petition***

    51. i am just back in town today to head out of town again tonight. Sea- so sorry to have missed commenting on the previous piece, but just need to tell you,that both were great and thanks for the two of them. know how much your deviations from previous tales are appreciated. thanks again!

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