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    Would you like to dance? Part 2 of 2

    Story written on April 9, 2005 by Seahurst.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=53111
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    Does Bette get another chance, or is one all we get?

    "Uh…excuse me…but, are you two finished using the sink?" A voice from behind interrupted both womens musings, causing them to blush, both relieved that the other didn’t know what they were thinking. They quickly finished washing and drying their hands, and walked out of the restroom together…both stopping outside the door, not quite sure of what to do next. Tina was still feeling the effects of her embarrassing attempt to ask Bette to dance, yet she had been totally thrown off balance by the sweet and innocent giggle that had come from the same lips that had dripped with venom just a few minutes earlier. How could two such opposing reactions come from the same person?

    Bette was astonished to realize that, try as she might, ever since she saw that look of dread come across the blonde’s face, she couldn’t seem to think of anything to say to the beautiful woman…who was now standing in front of her with a look of total confusion on her face as she stood staring down at her feet.

    "Uh…well…" Tina managed to stutter out. "I…uh…well…good night." She started to turn and walk away, even though every bone in her body was screeching at her to stand still.

    For a moment Bette thought she recognized the sound of that sweet voice, but when she saw her turning away from her, Bettes eyes grew wide, and she started to panic at the thought of this woman disappearing from her life. And in her panic, she finally found her own voice. She reached out and grabbed Tinas arm. "No…don’t go…uh…I mean…uh…" She couldn’t believe the jumbled words barely making their way out of her mouth. She inwardly moaned, thinking…Good God, you have a degree from Yale! Try to sound like it…please!! She let out a lite laugh, shaking her head at Tina. "Let’s try that again, shall we?"

    Tina couldn’t help but give Bette a smile of encouragement. There was something about this woman that just had her mesmerized…she just couldn’t help herself. She nodded at Bette, hoping she would continue.

    Bette lowered her voice, wanting this woman to be the only person in the room that could hear what she was saying. Her voice was sincere, and her smile was full of yearning. "Hi…I’m Bette. I was wondering…would you like to dance with me?"

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    3. ‘The End’? Nooo ~ I was loving it so, Sea. And is there such a thing really as ‘too sweet’ anyway? Hmmm, booking dental appointment just in case because any happy B&T moment is soooo worth it :)

    11. Yummy and so very sweet! Thanks for this one, Sea! Really liked your special spin on this B&T beginning.

      Always so good to read about some sticky sweetness since we are not really seeing any of that on Sunday’s show…

      Always a please… Thanks for writing and sharing!

    12. A fairy tale! The princess meets the princess of her dreams, and they live happily ever after!!!!
      Thank you! I needed this to counteract the wretchedness that is B&T on TV!
      So sweet!!!!

    27. That was really beautiful, Sea! Loved it. Especially this part…

      “Bette…” Tina whispered.

      “Yeah, T.”

      “Take me home.”

      Bette gulped. “Home?”

      “Yeah, baby…I don’t want to wait any longer…I want to start our life together right now…tonight…” “

      Just beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

    31. Sea…. This is simply D_E_L_I_C_I_O_U_S. I enjoyed it for many reasons namely the writing is superb, the flow is just melodious and like icing on the cake your selection of words are just ultra sensual the kind that gives you goose bumps and the end result just give this wonderful tingling feeling I was reading this with the same silly goofy grin throughout this chapter.
      I was so into the story I could swear I can hear back ground music in my head singing this song… Love is in the air~~ everywhere I looked around love is in the air every sight and every sound~~~ And I don’t know if I’m being foolish Don’t know if I’m being wise~~~ But is something that I must believe in And it’s there when I look in your eyes~~~~ love is in the air~~~ love is in the air~~~ LOL. Sea you’ve made me act like a complete fool here LOL and I don’t normally show this goofy side of me publicly but this story is just to damn sweet to not react like this *smile *

      I absolutely believe that when that love of your life stands before you even the most eloquent person just turns all wobbly and words fails just fail ya people.. hmm~~ this sure brings back memories *ah~~~~ :o)

      I’m rambling here … but hey Seahurst I enjoyed this delightful read tremendously! THANK YOU for this delicious presentation!

    33. Sea, I can understand why we all love your stories. Please don’t let it end there. I have hated Season 2 so far. I keep watching Season 1 to have some hope the show will get better (before the finale). Thanks for the lovely story.

    37. Perfect. Just Perfect. I wish they would give us a few moments like this to combat the angst of Season 2.

      I’m begging you to continue this lovely story!

    39. Sea,

      You know that chocolate releases endorphins that match those released during orgasm. Well, your sweet, chocolatey story does exactly the same! LOVE IT!

      Please continue though.

    40. Sea,
      You are truly awe-inspiring; how you keep the mystery and suspense perfectly balanced with all the emotion and love is breathtaking.
      Adore the way you integrated the lost earring scene into this story.
      This has been a wonderful interlude and would love you to continue but understand if you want to carry on with “If it is meant to be…” as I am crazy and passionate about that story as well.
      Thank you for reminding me of how amazing and incredible real love can be.
      A fan.

    41. ….seahurst, you are without a doubt my favorite writer in the freagin’ world. Please…i know this was suppose to be a 2 of 2 …but do you think you might be able to continue on it? …I loved it, and am glad to say that, that was so dam romantic!

    42. Excellent chapter. This is my favorite story and love the way Bette and Tina meet. Please write more about this story and want to know more about this. Thank you!

    43. The End…End means over, finished, complete. uh….uh…that cant be right…i read that wrong…i had to have. Fandayumtabulous story. A smile at the end upon all who read it then the dumbfoundled look with wide open eyes….the end…. say it isnt so

    45. Bravo! Bravo! That was wonderful. I so enjoyed this story. Since this season has been one poo sandwich after another, this was just what the doctor ordered.

    50. I’m almost embarassed to post my stories anywhere near this. It was perfect. I think Ilene and Showtime could easily make up for the heartbreak of season 2 by giving us some flashback time in Season 3. We could just submit this as a script.

      ***runs off to start a petition***

    51. i am just back in town today to head out of town again tonight. Sea- so sorry to have missed commenting on the previous piece, but just need to tell you,that both were great and thanks for the two of them. know how much your deviations from previous tales are appreciated. thanks again!

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