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What Matters C.14 – Health
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“What is it?”
“I heard the door. I think it is my mother.” Carmen whispered very cautiously, as if she was whispering top CIA secrets to an agent. As did many times that day, panic shot through Carmen’s veins, blood gushed into her head, causing her vision to blur and the world around her started spinning.
She collapsed her head into Shane’s chest, all the while keeping her eyes on the door. Waiting anxiously for it to open, waiting for her mother to step in anytime, waiting for all hell to break loose.
After a while, Shane started stroking Carmen’s arm. “Peach, no one’s at the door, I’m sure you are hearing things.”
“I guess” Carmen didn’t want it to be true, so for now, she was willing to go with the thought that everything was just in her imagination, that she was paranoid. But something wasn’t quite right. “Where is my mother?” Carmen lifted away abruptly. Mercedes would not have left her, at least not before she awoken. As best as she could focus, the wheels in her head churned to find an explanation for her missing mother. She refused to believe that the click of the door she heard was from her mother. Anyone else but her mother.
Shane looked worriedly at Carmen then back at the door Carmen was still staring at. ‘Don’t panic, don’t panic’ Were the words ringing in Shane’s head. She was terrified of the thought of being found out, but her girlfriend needed her there at the moment. She would rather risk the dungeons then to leave her girlfriend again.
“She probably went home or something.” Shane reassured Carmen. They look at each other briefly and smiled, both knowing that it wasn’t true.
Something else flashed and registered in Carmen’s head. “How did you know I was in hospital Shane?”
“Your brother called me oh my god” In the midst of all the chaos, Shane didn’t realize that she had spoken to both Carmen’s mother and brother. She looked up at Carmen and found the same horrified expression on her girlfriend’s face. “I talked to your mother too”
“Oh god” Carmen groaned as she rested her forehead on Shane’s shoulder.
“Hey, maybe they thought I was a guy with my low voice Or maybe they were panicking too much to realize” Shane started blabbering, partly to calm Carmen down, but partly for herself as well. She put her arms around Carmen protectively, wanting to block away all her pain.
Suddenly, the door swinged open and they both jumped apart, staring at the door in horror.
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LOL that’s at least the 2nd time in a row I’ve wanted to yell at the cpu screen: “You can’t leave us hanging like this!” Great update! :D I wonder if the door-sound Carmen heard might have been Carmen’s mother closing the door after having seen them together on the bed. :P And then she comes in later…or it ooh is is Carmen’s sister who’s on her way into the room. Awesoem that they called Shane lol, and Shane rushing to the hospital, and awww Sharmen. Okay, I’m a sap, I admit it. But they’re so cute together, and it’s also sad with Carmen sick, so yeah, cute, but sad. And heehee the tension of thinking they’ll get caught by Carmen’s family any time now. O.O Two thumbs up! :D
okay…..good job. Nice cliffhanger. I think Carmen will do way much better when her mother knows. (Even if I think her mother already knows).And hey you don´t have to vindicate yourself. It´s your story.
You did NOT just do that BP! You did not just leave us hanging like that! haha, but of course the fact that you updated makes up for this torturous cliff-hanger. You evil bitch, you :) I’m worried about Carmen, and hope her Mom meeting Shane won’t get ugly.
Big, I love ya’ . . . but damn, what’s up with the cliffhangers . . . This story has had me hooked from day one . . . I too think that Carmen will be much, much better off going ahead and telling her mother, that by itself will take away some of that uncall for stress . . . I kinda’ think she has some clue though ;-D This story is some fye and you really need to continue . . . I think you got us hooked for life so go ahead and post your lil’ heart out, LOL ;-D Anyways . . . LYLAS, and post soon . . . please . . . see what you done did to me . . . you got me beggin’ and I usually don’t break all the way down to the point of where I have to beg . . . LOL TWO THUMBS UP :-)
yay, as usual, my day was made by an update :Dplease please please write more soon :D
Damn! That was Great! I was so nervous while I was reading, I swore they would get caught. Loved the update. Mercedes in your story seems like an understanding mom, hope she is for Carmen’s sake. Glad Shane is remaining by Carmen’s side despite the fact that they’ll be found out (but I wouldn’t expext any less from Shane anyway). Post soon, plz.
Hey it’s great to have you back with an update. Please post again SOON. Thanks.