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    What Matters C.14 – Health

    Story written on February 26, 2006 by Bigprisc.
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    Story Shortlink: https://assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=59740
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    The trip to the hospital.

     

     

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    “Anna, bring your brother home. He is no good here.”

     

    “But I wanna stay, Momma.”

     

    “Go Roddy should go home to calm his nerves. Come back later in the evening, inform your hermano and hermanas.

     

    “Come’on, Roddy, you wimp.”

     

    That was the last thing Carmen heard before slipping back into her unconscious state.

     

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    Shane scurried through the hallways of the hospital. Her tears flowing freely and she wiped them away with the back of her white sleeve.

     

    Everything was fine only yesterday, and now it has all fallen apart again. After making enquiries at the reception, she ran as quickly as allowed at the hospital to Carmen’s ward.

     

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    She found Carmen sleeping peacefully in the temporary ward and slowly lowered herself onto her bed. Afraid of waking her girlfriend, she sat there quietly without touching, just staring at the pale face, her tears rolling down her own in a steady trail.

     

    As Shane brought her hand up to wipe her cheeks, the little movement brought Carmen out of her deep sleep.

     

    “Momma” Carmen murmured, unable to epen her tired eyes.

     

    “No peach, it’s Shane.”

     

    “Shane..?” Carmen’s eyes opened slowly. She smiled weakly as she attempted to bring a hand up to wipe the tears away.

     

    “How are you doing, baby?” Shane’s voice was coarse, lower then it normally was.

     

    Shane leaned down to plant a kiss lightly on Carmen’s lips. And Carmen brought her arms around Shane, using the strength that Shane had to lift herself to a sitting position.

     

    “What happened?” Shane asked in concern, lifting away to look into Carmen’s eyes.

     

    “I’m not too sure. I remember talking to my family in the kitchen, and all of a sudden, everything went black.”

     

    Shane lifted her hand to wipe away her own tears but Carmen’s hand got there first. She lovingly stroked away the trails of tears before stroking the cheeks of her sad girlfriend.

     

    As Carmen brought her face closer to Shane’s for a kiss, she heard a vague sound of the door clicking. She jerked away and stared at the doorway. Shane turned curiously towards the same direction.

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    1. LOL that’s at least the 2nd time in a row I’ve wanted to yell at the cpu screen: “You can’t leave us hanging like this!” Great update! :D I wonder if the door-sound Carmen heard might have been Carmen’s mother closing the door after having seen them together on the bed. :P And then she comes in later…or it ooh is is Carmen’s sister who’s on her way into the room. Awesoem that they called Shane lol, and Shane rushing to the hospital, and awww Sharmen. Okay, I’m a sap, I admit it. But they’re so cute together, and it’s also sad with Carmen sick, so yeah, cute, but sad. And heehee the tension of thinking they’ll get caught by Carmen’s family any time now. O.O Two thumbs up! :D

    2. okay…..good job. Nice cliffhanger. I think Carmen will do way much better when her mother knows. (Even if I think her mother already knows).And hey you don´t have to vindicate yourself. It´s your story.

    3. You did NOT just do that BP! You did not just leave us hanging like that! haha, but of course the fact that you updated makes up for this torturous cliff-hanger. You evil bitch, you :) I’m worried about Carmen, and hope her Mom meeting Shane won’t get ugly.

    4. Big, I love ya’ . . . but damn, what’s up with the cliffhangers . . . This story has had me hooked from day one . . . I too think that Carmen will be much, much better off going ahead and telling her mother, that by itself will take away some of that uncall for stress . . . I kinda’ think she has some clue though ;-D This story is some fye and you really need to continue . . . I think you got us hooked for life so go ahead and post your lil’ heart out, LOL ;-D Anyways . . . LYLAS, and post soon . . . please . . . see what you done did to me . . . you got me beggin’ and I usually don’t break all the way down to the point of where I have to beg . . . LOL TWO THUMBS UP :-)

    6. Damn! That was Great! I was so nervous while I was reading, I swore they would get caught. Loved the update. Mercedes in your story seems like an understanding mom, hope she is for Carmen’s sake. Glad Shane is remaining by Carmen’s side despite the fact that they’ll be found out (but I wouldn’t expext any less from Shane anyway). Post soon, plz.

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